OS ~A Desire to end~ Last Part..pg 15

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Hey all.....dont know... suddenly i started to typed a OS on Maneets SR....And yeah every Maneetian are wating for their SR.....so a one OS on it.... This is my first OS....just sending a part of it... if you guys like it i will continue.....


It is the time for dinner. Maan,Geet,Dadi and Annie are having their dinner.... Geet is not eating properly lost in her own thoughts... Dadi noticed her ..'Whats the matter geet?...are you alright"..

Geet came out from her thoughts and replied 'Han dadi.... am Fine..." Dadi .."Then why you're not having your dinner beta.." ...Geet.." Dadi... nothing... not feeling hungry.."

Maan was worried to see Geet like this....He then remembered their fight last night... When Geet was trying to come really close to him.... he stopped her... Geet tried to explain that there is not problem now as her results of check up were normal and she no more want maan to suffer...

But Maan shouted at her and went to next room to sleep... this incident made Both Maan and Geet worried...Today Morning Maan contact the doctor to know about Geet's present condition.... Doctor said her reports are Normal there is no problem now... they can have physical relationship...Maan felt very happy to know this... but remembered their fight last night and worried how to tell geet...and how to end this LONG Desire...LONG waiting....

Maan came back to his conscious when dadi called him and asked him did anything happen between both again.... Maan said... "No dadi... no problem..." saying this he left the place....

Geet thought that Maan is still angry with her regarding last night...After finishing her work.. geet returned to her room.... Maan was working in his laptop... Geet enter inside and tried to speak out but was not able to..She then took her night dress and went inside wash room to take a bath...

After she went inside Maan looked up and continued his work.... after finishing her bath... Geet came out... she went near the window and was drying her hair with towel.... Maan looked at Geet...He was watching each and every part of geet's face... Her eyes, lips, nose, cheeks...Droplets were all over her face...Her wet hair was covering her beautiful pink cheeks... He was admiring her...but suddenly he came back to his conscious and continued his work.....After drying her hair... Geet took some lotion and was applying all over her face, hands.... Maan again looked up at Geet....He was noticing her shiny white smooth skin.... when she was applying her lotion...

After applying the lotion.... she went near the mirror and took the sindoor....When she was about to put in on her maag....Maan's hand stopped her.... He came near her and said..."Geet did you forgot... yeh mera haq hai Geet.... so you don't have rights..." saying this... he put the sindoor on Geet's Maag.... After that... His hands started to travel towards Geet's cheeks ... wet hair was covering her cheeks...he gently pushed them behind her ear...She could feel the warmth of Maan's fingers..He took his fingers and he touched her lips...Maan Eyes were filled with passion...Geet felt shy and closed her eyes...then he took her face near to his.... He came really very close to her... but Geet pushed him away and went towards the window.... She was gasping standing near the window..... Maan came near her and he hugged her tightly from the back... holding her waist really hard....He pushed away her hair and kept it on one side of her shoulder... He slightly moved her top from her other shoulder..and Gently kissed ... traveling very smoothly on her skin....His hands were moving very tightly around her waist... Geet 's lips started to tremble...From her shoulder... his lips came near her ears ...he kissed her ear...and he seductively whispered ...."Geet...I love you..."

So tell me how it was.... will continue the next part soon...


Part 2

Part 3

Last Part


Love you all....



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Amazing ... Please update soon :)
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OMG
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Loved it
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awesome......continue 👍🏼
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wow itz lovely.. plzz continue soon
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Woooow soooo dreamy plzzzzzzz continue honey plzzzzz
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great one-shot, you should continue on from this part and maybe start a ff on it!
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woah wat a start hasini !!! faabbb. do continue soon :)) and do pm me x
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