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thnx sooooo much for ur comments. anyway, continued----

sujal - tum sabh kuch kocheki ho kashish sin, nononoon tum apki parivaar kocheki ho, tumare paas ek surname kaise. tutututut. tum hargaiyoh/lost kashish.

sujal drives away for his next plan. kashsih doesnt know where to go so she goes back to the club 2 luk 4 jatin.


Kashish - vodka and tonic plzz Jatin.

Jatin turns around.

Jatin - Kashish. tum wopas yahan kyun.

Kashish - main meri parivaar, mera pyaar aur mera ghar kocheki hooon sirf tumare wajhe se Jatin Wadwa, Sirf tumare wajhe se.

Jatin - tum mujhe biech/middle mein ky....

Kashish - aap meri sabhkuch cheenliya/snatched. aap meri liyeh vodka bhi nahiin laiyeh.

Jatin goes to get her Vodka. Comes bck for more talking.

Kashish - Thankyou dushman.

Jatin - Dekho Kashish, maine tumse pyaar kiya tha, magar main tumse pyaar nahiin karte, tum sujal ke paas jaow, tum aur sujal shaadi karlo. tum aur suja...

Kashish - Jatin Sumit Wadwa, main sujal se pyaar nahiin karti hoon acha. main kissi bhi se nahiin pyaar karti hoon. tumse bhi nahhin Jatin.

kashish walks out the club into her car and drives away. but where .

she knocks on the door - which door? -

*the person* - kashish tum yahan kya karihoh. agar tumne dekhliya.

kashish - nahiin *MAMA*. papa mujhe ghar se nekhaal diya. sujal papa se bathathiya jatin ke baat.

mama- khush roaw sujal garewal.

kashish - kya?

mama- kashish ye galat baat hain, tum ek clubber ke saat...............

kashish - magar mama - crying.

mama - kashish. sujal ke paas joaw, usko bathoaw tum usko pyaar karti ho,

kashish - KYA. MAGAR MAIN SUJAL SE PYAAR SE PYAAR NAHIIN KARTI HOON,

mama- main tumari maa hoon. yeh ansoo/tears tumare aankhe mein hain. tumare aankhe khete hain, main kya karoon, mera pyaar bhi mujshe nafrat karta hain.

kashish - haan tho.

mama - yeh bhi kethe hain ke tumara pyaar sujal hain, mujshe nahiin cuppoaw kashish. tu sujal se pyaar kati hoon yahan nahiin

kashish - haan mama, - crying.




KASHISH'S MAMA IS ALIVE. WILL THE SINHA FAMILY FIND OUT THIS. SUJAL DOESNT KNOW KASHISH LUVS HIM. WILL HE GO AHEAD WITH HIS PLAN????


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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG...U LEFT ME SOO CURIOUS.....ITS JUS WONDERFUL....PLZ CONT SOON...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i am sooooo sorry i havent continued this story fo0r a really longt time. soz. continued----

so kashish stays at her mums house. now bck to sujal hes off to his next plan. he is off to the lcub.

sujal - jatin. main tumse kuch baat karna chata hoon.

jatin - sujal, tum. kashish kahan hain. woh teekh hain na.

sujal - haan.

they go and sit down.

sujal - main tujhe ruppaiya doonga.

jatin - kyun...

sujal - tum kashish ke paas joaw aur kaho/say ke tum usko pyaar kart

jatin - nahiin. kabhi nahiin. main kashish se takh gaiya.

sujal - 5 crore ruppaiy.

jatin - deal.

sujal goes out the club for his NEXT plan. not a very big plan but a plan to make everyone hate kashish . sujal is at his house,. the whole family is in the room.

sujal - main kuch annoucement karna chata hoon. mama, tum sochriho kashish kahan hain. kashish mujhe pyaar nahiin karti thi. woh natack kari thi.

he tells them the whole story. everyone is shocked. sujal goes to his room. mama follows him.

mama - jatin kashish ko chordiya. maine tumko bathaiya tha hana. abh, tum thoda intazaar karo aur kashish tumare peecha peecha aiygi.

sujal - haan mama. anyways. main jatha hoon.

hes of to he last plan. he is meeting a journalist at lo.oo

ten o clock.

journalist - sujal. i cant put all this in the papaer just yet. i need evidence.

sujal - sabrina. i have bought all these evidences. it will take u hours to check it all.

sabrina - ok sujal. i will only check the strong evidence and then put everything in the papers. your reward for this is 10 crores.

sujal - right. thankyou. remember to put everything down. and the part where kashsih got kicked out of her house.

sabrina - dont worry, everything will be done.

sujal - thnx sabrina, your a darling.

he kisses her on the cheek and walks out of the coffee shop bck to his house.

mama - sujal. tum araam karo.

sujal goes to rest on the bed. after he goes downstairs. all the lights are off.
then all the lights come on.

"HAPPY BIRTHDAY SUJAL"

sujal didnt even no it was his bday. they enjoy the pary and the next day ,mama and cg take sujal out for shopping. they buy loads of things. sujal saw kashish reading the local newspaper. she was crying. mama picks a newspaper up too.

wht will happen when it says, written by sabrina duke and sujal garewal. will mama be bothered to read it. i thik she will when she sees kashish's pic on the front.


continued--------
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Gr8 story 👏 👏 👏 plzz cont soon
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thnx soo mcuh for the replies. i need some of ur ideas to so send me private messages with ur ideas.

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sujal - mama. chalo naa. paper ko choro.

mama - magar yeh dekho. kashish ka tasveer.

sujal - choro mama.

he grabs hern hand and takes her away.

they then og home. sujal goes to meet kashish at the shopping mall. she was in a restraunt having coffee.

kashish - sujal. tum...

sujal - haan.

he sits down.

sujal - kahsish. tum paper dekha hin. tumara tasveer/photo.

kashish - haan sujal. main coffee shop mein thi. jabh tum sabrina se baat kara tha. tum chalegai aur main sabrina se baat karli. sabrina. i will pay you double the amount if u dont publish this paper. so she didnt i was cryinbg for nothing. the article bout me is only that i have left r and g.

sujal walks out the coffee shop angry. they both luv each other deeply. they go outside in a storm and walking in the rain the song

Hum Bewaffa.......

next day-----------------------

mama - sujal. maine bhot sochi, tum aur intazaar nahiin karenge. tum kahsish ke ghar goaw aur usko bataow ke tum usko bhot pyaar karta ho aur karta rahownga.

sujal - nahiin mama. kabhi nahiin. KABHI NAHIIN. - crying - MAIN KASHISH KO NAFRAAAAAATTTTT..

he walks out the room. he thinks about going to kahsish house but then remembers she dont live there anymore. jsut because of him. so he went to papa sinhas house,.

papa - sujal tum beta. tum kaise ho. andar ow. bheto naa.

sujal - thankyou. papa, maine socha tha ke kahsish peh yeh tho bhot bara sazaa/punishment hain. kahsish ko wopas buloaw.

papa - main tho yeh bhi sochra tha. ke kashish ko wapas buloaw magar mujhe nahiin patha hain ke woh kahan rheti hain.

sujal - usko phone karo phir.

papa phone kashish on her mobile.

------mamas house-----------

mobile----bring bring

kashish - mama mama. papa ka phone hain. hello

papa - kashish beti.

kashish - PAPA!

papa - ghar wopas oaw beti.

kahsish - magar papa...

papa - koi sawal/questions nahiin.

he puts the phone down.

sujal - papa, main chalta hoon.

papa - khush roaw beta.

sujal goes out the house and then goes to his house.

he calls the whole family into the main room.

sujal - main ek aur announcement larna chata hoon. kashish ko galat mat samaj. woh sai thi aur main galat tha. yeh sabh booljaow,


next day kahsish is bck at her house,

sujal goes to meet kahsish.

kashish is the only one home.

kashish - sujal tum yahan ky.....

sujal - main tumse milna chata tha.

kashish - bheto .

sujal - thanks. kahsish sunno.

kashish - kya?

sujal - im sorry. main tumari pecce leke aiya, sabrina se.

kashish - kya? tum yeh sabh....

sujal - pecce loh aur mera doosrah baat sunno.

kahsish - kaho.

sujal - main itna intazaar karatha, itna waqt guzgaiya aur main ek baat nahiin samaj paow. ke main tumara ghar kyun nahiin aow aur tumko kaho ke main tumse bhot pyaar karta hoon aur karta rahonga, kashish, utm mujshe shaadi karoongi?

kahsish - ssssuujjjalalllll.

they stared.

sujal got up and was just going when....

kashish - rukho sujal haan. main tumse shaadi karoongi. main tumse pyaar karti hoon.

sujal ran to kashish and gave her a hug. the song laal dupatta came on.


Laal Dupaata.............


awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. they're bck together. ive got this reali gud idea. last time i said uk is 5 hours 4ward than asia but asia is 5 hours forward. it would be 2.30 in the morning now in asia but here its 9.30. i have got to go and wacth kkavyanjali. my other favourite program.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey i m da 1st 1 to comment........its jus marvellous.........gud job
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx soo much guys continued------


kannan - papa, hum sochre the ke tum shaadi kyun nahiin karsakte.

papa - dubhara..

charu - haan kyun nahiin.

papa - patha nahiin, is ammere mein,

mauli - papa tum soch kyun nahii...

papa - acha acha, main sochloonga, magar main kissi shaadi karoon....

charu - hum koi doondleghe.

papa - acha, jaldi doond. hahahahaha.

sisters - hhaaahahahaaha

oh no. papas getting married and hes still married to mama.

sujals house.

sujal and kahsish have arrived and sujal explained to everyone that kashish is bck with him. kashish goes back to her house to give everyone the good news.

charu - di. tum!

kahsish - haan main!

charu - andar aow.

kashish - thnx.

charu - acha bataow. tum yahan......

kahsish - haan main tumko kuch batana chatiti. tum papa, kanan mauli aur mehak ko batoughi hana.

charu - haan haan.

kashish - main aur sujal ek dhoosre se pyaar karte hain aur hum shaadi karne wale hain.

charu - WOW. THATS AMAZING, thats reminds me. main kanan mehak aur mauli chate hain ke papa dubara shaadi karle.

kashish - KYA? maagggaarrr kyun?

charu - main papa ke aankhe mein dekh sakti hoon ke woh bachara akele hain, aur shaadi karne ke baat main yeh akelepan nahiin dekh powngi.

kashish - acha, main jathi hoon.

kahsish walks out the house, so desperate to tell everyone that mama is alive. she walks in the thunder and rain when sujal is very worried. she arrives and everything s sorted....next day---------------

the girl have found someone for their papa.

mauli - papapapapapapapa. yeh dekho. - holding up a picture of the girl - yeh hain priya, yeh larki bhoot khoobsurat hain hana. shes 31.

papa - khoobsurat hain. kahan hain yeh larki, main yeh larki se milna hain!!!!!

kanan - ooooohhhhh. love at first sight.

mauli fones priya.
mauli - priya, mera papa tumse milne chata hain. tum mera ghar aow. 33 rizvi road,

priya - acha, main abhi athi hoon.

she arrives at the house.

papa - namaste......

priya - namaste.

kanan - giggles - main jathi hoon.

papa - tum kya karti ho?

priya - main ek solicitor hoon aur tum?

papa - main ek teacher hoon.

priya - tacher hmmmmmm!

papa - haha, tum is sari mein bhot khoobsurat lakthi ho,

priya - thankyou. aur tum aapka suit mein bhot handsome lakte hain.

papa - thankyou.

papa gets down on one knee and proproses.

priya - uh....uh....

papa - tum mujse shaadi karogi?

priya - haan!!!!

they hug and the sisters run into the room all happy.
mauli fones kashish to tell her the good news.

mauli - kashish di. ek bhoot kush kabhri hain. papa priya nanda se pyaar karte hain aur usse shaadi karna wale hain, ek maina/month mein, pathachi road peh. main kitni khush hoon.

kashish - main bhi, papa ko congratulate karo meri taraf se. - trying not to cry.


1 month forward. the wedding---------------


the wedding has started kashish doesnt know what to do. she has to stop this wedding she thniks, she goes to her mums house and tells her verything. what are they going to do????????????????
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 instead of 5 daughters papa is getting married.... 😆
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thnz so mcuh guys----cont-------

recap-----

mauli - kashish di. ek bhoot kush kabhri hain. papa priya nanda se pyaar karte hain aur usse shaadi karna wale hain, ek maina/month mein, pathachi road peh. main kitni khush hoon.

kashish - main bhi, papa ko congratulate karo meri taraf se. - trying not to cry.


1 month forward. the wedding---------------


the wedding has started kashish doesnt know what to do. she has to stop this wedding she thniks, she goes to her mums house and tells her verything. what are they going to do????????????????


continued---------

(i dont know professer sinhas name so i am gonna call him pro sinha.)


mama - crying - kyaaaaa???? kashish kaho naa ke yeh baat sach nahiin hain.

kashish - yeh sach hain. sach hamesha karvi hoti hain.

mama - wiping her tears - mujhe tumara ghar leke jaho. main yeh sach ko pura duniya ko batana chati hoon. legally main pro sinha ke patni hoon. aur woh mera pathi hain, mujhe leke jaho.

kashish takes mama to the house as quick as possible. they walked in the house. they were too late. just as mama walked in, papa put the mangal-suthra on priya

mama - NAHIIN, NAHIIN nahiin nahiin/ echo.

papa looked up.

papa - ANJANA! TUM......!

mama - tum mera saat yeh kaisa karsa.....

kashish - mama, apne aap ko sambalo.

papa - anjana. tum.....tum ziiiinnnnndaaaaaaaa,, magar tummmmmmm mera zindaaaggiiiiii se chhaleghiiii thi. tum wapasss.s...

anjana - pro sinha. main tumse legally married thi. magar yeh dekhne ke baat hum tumara saat koi nahiin rishta rakhna chati hoon. kasish mujhe yahan se leke jaho.

papa - aaannnnjjjjaaannnnnna,,kaaahsiissshhh.

wht will happen huh?
send me private messages for ur ideas and i will reply to tell u if theyre good and if im using them in my stori.!!!!!
Edited by flygirls - 19 years ago
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I am da last and first 2 comment..hehehe 😆 😛

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