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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice story....dat part abt smelly breath was hillarious... i hope her breath stops smellin like garblic n onion by da time she goez wid sujal....lolz...no offence(jus 4yi...i luv sujal n kash equally--in oder words rajeev n aamna r de BEST....)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: group_1223

nice story....dat part abt smelly breath was hillarious... i hope her breath stops smellin like garblic n onion by da time she goez wid sujal....lolz...no offence(jus 4yi...i luv sujal n kash equally--in oder words rajeev n aamna r de BEST....)

Agree wid u totally..!!!

Flygirls great going!!!!Cont.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thnx soo much. i thought i might just brighten it up a bit u no with a joke bout bad breath!lol. continued----

so sujal drives to kashish's hosue and his aiming to tell papa everything. he wants to tell him everything becasue it might be to late.

mouli- sujal bhai. tum yahan, oh kashish yahan nahiin hain. woh bhar ghaiy hain.

sujal - nahiin main papa se milna chata hoon. kahsish se nahiin.

mauli - ok. PAPA. DEKHO SUJAL BHAIA AIYA HAIN.
papa walks in.

papa - arah sujal. tum.

sujal - haan main tumse kuch baat karna chata hoon. akele mein.

mauli walks out of the room

papa- sit down.

sujal -thankyou

papa - hann bholo.

sujal - tum chate hain kashish mere paas...

papa - haan.

sujal - kashish yeh nahiin karna chatiti.

papa - haan. tum khena kya chata..

sujal - kashish kissi aur se pyaar karti thi.

papa- KYA. karti thi?

sujal - jatin whadwa. jatin whadwa uska naam hain. woh kashish ko chordia.

papa- chordia?

sujal - kashish jatin ko bhot pyaa karti thi. magar jatin sirf khel/game khelrahta.

papa- kashish mujhe itna bhara dokha diya - crying.

kashish walks in not knowing a thing

kashish - PAPA,

she runs to him getting him up from the floor.

papa - yaas se chale goaw kashish. mujhe choro aur yaas se chale gaow.

kashish - crying - pppaaaappaaaa

papa - crying - itna bara dokha,

kashish looked at sujal.

kashish - sujal garewal. tu main kabhi nahiin choroongi.

papa - nahiin choroongi. yeh tho kitna samajdhaar hain. main uska papa nahiin hoon magar sujal ka patha hain yeh ke yeh baat main kashsih ka papa se nahiin chupaiynge.

sujal - papa. kashish ko galti hua. usko maaf karlo.

papa - kabhi nahiin. kashish main tumse akrhi bhaar kehera hoon. es ghar sirf paanch lhogo/people ke lia. aur woh lhog, sinha parivaar ke member hone chaye. tum kashish sinha nahiin ho.

kashish - crying - runs out the house,.

sujal - main jata hoon.

he touches papas feet and runs outside to kashish,

sujal - holding his head - kashish, tum itni pagli aurat/women hoh. tum tum jatin ka chaal main pasgi, abhi mera chaal mein tum aur bhi pagal hoh. tutututtututtututtut. kashsih. es pagli bimaari se tum apna parivaar kohchekio/lost. kashish maine socha tha ke tum thoda sa samajdhaar hoh tum mera chall tho samajaiygi, magar tum itna pagal hoh. tutututtutututut KASHISH.

kashish - SUJAL GAREWAL. MAIN KUCH NAHIIN KOCHEKI. MERI PARIVVAR MERI SAAT HAIN.

OK THTS ENOGUH FOR NOW. NXT TIME WHT WILL; HAPPEN. WILL SUJAL PLAN MORE PLANS. TUTUTUTUTUT. ANYWAY REMEMBER THAT UK IS 5 HOURS FORWARD THAN ASIA SO NOW ITS 10.30 IN UK I HAVE TO GO AND WATCH KTH. BUHBYE.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Nice part w8ing 2 know what sujal will do now?continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
great stry, lub it carry on, fast plz i can get impatient 😛 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
for us who doesn't speak hindi you see it will be very dificult to undestand what u writing
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
WAT A FANTABLOUS STORY BUT SERIOUSLY I WANNNA NOW NEXT AS FAST AS POSSIBLE
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Yeh kya hogaya???
Anywayz gr8 part!!!Cont soon plzzzzzzz!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
Ye kahan aagaye ham.
ye kya moved 2 fanfiction anyways cont soon really want 2 know what will happene next.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
Arey yeh kya hua???
Kahan se kahan agaye ye story??Cont yaar!!!!

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