'Beautifully Broken' (My 1st FF)

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Part 1

6:00 Pm AT KMA

Boy: Ritu mai keh raha hoon ja ky bol do Navin ko waisay bhee kal uski birthday hai'

Ritu: oh please Raj us ko mainay kitny clues diye hai aur woh hai ky koi jawab he nahi dey raha' Kia pata usko mujh sai pyar bhee hai ya Nahi

Rajveer: True'Waisay tum line mar he lo us par iss pehly ky koi aur usko lai jaye'waisay agar Na kar di to koi baat nahi'suna hai log suicide waghaira attempt karty hai'Tum fikar mat karo'Tumhai Hum War par bhaij den gai'kisi ko pata bhee nahi chalay ga'

Ritu: Raj I m so serious' aur tujy mazaq sujh raha hai'Kuch socho na kuch to idea do'Mujy us Navin idiot sai Pyar kyun Ho Gaya

Raj: No No mujy to is Love shove sai door he rakho'aur haan I agree Navin is Idiot'

Navin Entring in Cafe

Navin: Kia kaha tu ny?

Raj: Kuch nahi..bus mai woh keh raha tha kai'aaj kal yahan Bewakoofon par experiments ho rahai hai'so mai soch raha tah tumhai bhee Bhaij Dena Chahia

He winks at Ritu..and she cant stop laughing

Navin: Ruk Tu'mai abhie batata hoon tujy'

He started chasing Raj in Cafe

Suriji: Oye Gadho..Tum Log Captain Ban gaye ho magar Adatein(Habits) nahi badlein'

Ritu: Suriji Gadhoon ko kitna bhee sudharo'magar kab sudharty hai

Raj: owwwww tum ny mujy gadha bulaya'Abhi meri bhari hai'woh Navin mai keh rahata ky Rituuuu'

Bang she stomps on his foot

Raj: oooooooooooooo

Suriji: Oye oye ruko'aaj naye cadets aa rahay hai zara harkatein theek karo

Raj: Ohh noo mujy Ridhzi aur alekh ko lainy jana tha unki train aagayi ho gi

Navin: Oye yeh kon hai

Raj: U idiot my sister and almost like my little brother'

Navin: Oh acha..meri sis ky to strict orders hai us ko pick karnay ki zehmat na karey'

Raj: Stupid hai teri tarhan'JK dude..Gotta Go Bye

Navin: bye bye'chal ja bhee'thori privacy chahia'.ooooopss

Raj surprised and then he understands

Raj: No Way'

Navin kinda embarrassed

Navin: Baad mai aa kar baat kartey hai tu late ho raha hai

He Push him out of cafe

CADETS At 6:00 pm

Armaan and Sanaya

Armaan: Sun am I looking sexy?

Sanaya: Jeezz dude'I have never seen such a vain person in my whole life'

Armaan: Wo to mai hoon'chal chor na yeh bata larkiyan impress ho jayen gee na'

Sanaya: Ridiculous..tumharra network to bus larkiyon ki network ky intezar mai he rehta hai'U r not that smart

Armaan: Not that smart but smart to hoon na

Sanaya: Jesus Save me'Irritation

Armaan: Psycho I love you'my liddo Kiddo

Sanaya: Avoid Yar'

Armaan: Oye Psycho I love you yar seriously' u r the best'haan bus thori psycho..

Sanaya starts smiling

Sanaya: Chal Bus abhie itna Muska Mat Laga'car sy nikal KMA aagaya

Armaan: Cool Sun'THora saans to lainay dai ab to jail mai saans bhee laina naseeb ho ga ky nahi

Sanaya: Chal chal nautanki band kar'

Riddhima and Alekh

Alekh: Nervous???

Riddhima: Tumhai Kaisay Pata

Alekh: Ridhzi'Tujy Tujh sai zyada janta hoon

Riddhima: Agree'thora thora nervous

Alekh: Apun Hai Na'Fikar Not

Riddhima: isi Liye to ayi hoon

Alekh: Yeh Lai

Riddhima: Chocolateee'I love you alekh'u r the best best friend ever and best brother

Alekh: Mery Ko Pata hai jab tu nervous hoti hai to tery ko chocolate chahia hota hai

Voice: Kon nervous ho raha hai??

Riddhima: Bhaiyaaaaaa

Rajveer: My princess how you been?

Riddhima: Fine'I missed you

Rajveer: I missed you too

Rajveer: aur chief sahab aap kaisay hai

Alekh: Fine shine bhai how have you been?

Rajveer: Theek thak'fit faaat

Alekh: Bhai aab yeh chintooo bohat tang karti hai

Rajveer: Kyun chintooo jee hamary alekh ko kyun tang kiya

Riddhima making a face

Riddhima: mainay kab tang kiya hai'aur phir say mujy chintoo mat bulana'I warn you Alekh and Bhaiyaaa

Rajveer: apny captain say log aisay baat kartay hai kiya?

Pretend to be serious' and Alekh Trying not to laugh..

Riddhima: Bhaiyaaaa'mera khyaal hai hum KMA sai Bahar hai

Rajveer: Chalooo come here u both'I missed my group hug..

They have a group hug

Alekh: Chalai'warna late ho jayengai

Rajveer: Agreee Chief lets goo

Naina and Samrat

Samrat: Yar mai subah sai bakwas kar raha hoon tum kuch apny baray mai bata he nahi rahi

Naina: Thank God at least tumhai yeh to realize hua ky tum bakwas kar rahai ho

Samrat: Acha Choro na'apny baray mai kuch batao na

Naina: Mai Hitler ki chutti aulad'Logon ko marany ka mujy bohat shoq hai hai'tumhy pehla dose doon'marshal arts bhee kiya hai'

Samrat is surprised

Samrat: No no no thank you'waisay tum ja kahan rahi ho

Naina: Jahanum Chalo gai'.

Samrat: yar tumhari problem kiya hai? Haso jiyo muskurao'live life like there is no 2mrw'

Naina feels bad for her behavior

Naina: Mai Naina Singh Ahluwalia'KMA ja rahi hoon.

Samrat: Wow what a coincidence mai bhee wahi ja raha hoon'

Naina: Niceee

Samrat:Waisay mai Samrat Shegill'u can call me Sam'by the way nice to meet you

Naina: Nice to meet you too'I believe hum KMA pohanch Gaye

Samrat: Oh yeah yeah lets go'.do you need any help?

Naina: No thanks

"Mil Jaye Dost tum sa zindagi mai Agar

Nahi hogi mehsoos mujy kami kisi mor par

Dosti to karli aaj magar

Nibahana a dost isay Zindagi Bhar"

Gr8 start!
Loved the convos!
Thanx 4 pm

Part 2

Armaan and sanaya reach KMA first

Armaan: chalo beta yahan to pohanch gaye…ab agay kahan jaye

Sanaya: Oh God kitna bara idiot bhai diya hai...Notice Board kya exhibition ky liye laga ya hai

Armaan: Smart Kiddo…meray saath reh ky tu bhee smart ho gayi

Sanaya: jeez…u wish..yeh bolo tum meray saath reh kar smart ho gaye...

Armaan: Hai God yahan logon ko Mujh Jaisay Smart Bandy ki Kadar he nahi…is dunya ka kiya hoga

Sanaya: Sachi iss Dunya ka Kiya hoga…Jesus Bless The world…Chal beta notanki band kar aur notice board par..

Armaan: Fine…Boys Dorms: Khan, Armaan…Room F12 with Sharma, Alekh and Shergill, Samrat..Girls Dorms: Khan, Sanaya…Room A9 with Ahluwalia, Naina S. and Shekhawat, Riddhima S….. God save these girls

Sanaya: Agree God save your room mates…wait a second aren't these ridzi and naina? Remember them?

Armaan: OMG Sun r u serious? Look Sharma Alekh…dang y didn't I pay attention before…

Suddenly his face fell..

Sanaya: Naina…Shaurya..

Armaan: No Sanaya

Sanaya Understood

Suriji see them

Suriji: Oye puttar…lag da hai tussi naye cadets ho

Sanaya: hunnnn…oh jee haan…

Suriji: mai Subidar Suriji

Armaan: Hi Ji…Armaan Khan

Sanaya: Hello Ji…Sanaya Khan

Suriji: Acha puttar…tussi jaldi karo..6:30 par Brigadier Sahab ky office mai report karnna hai

He gives them directions to their dorms. They start walking

Armaan: 4 saal baad hum phir milenge

Sanaya: I know…Well ab to Chalo..dair ho jaye gee

Armaan: Bye tak carez I'll see you at 6:30

Sanaya: Chill dude u r talking like I m going on war…

Armaan: tu Kabhie nahi sudhrigi chal ja ab yahan sai

She Smiles and go to to her room

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Rajveer: tum dono jao change kar lo fresh ho jao..abhi 6:10 pm ho rahai hai matlab tum log ky pas 20 mins hai...aur exactly 6:30 par Brigadier ky office mai pohanch jana...best of luck aur haan straight jao aur Ridzi tum left laina aur chief sahab aap right lai lena and than Your dorms..Jao Bhago ab warna late ho jao gai

Riddhima: Thanks Bhai

Rajveer winks at Alekh

Rajveer: Cadet Riddhima Singh Shekhawat…kon Bhai? This is Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat

Riddhima: Bhai…abhie mainay Uniform nahi pehna

Rajveer: No bhai Cadet Shekhawat

Riddhima: Bhaiya…Alekh Dekho na Kaisay Tang kar rahay hai

Alekh: Aray…Apun Kiya keh Sakta hai…Tum Bhai Behan Ka mamla Hai

Riddhima Become Serious and Looks at Alekh

Riddhima: Hamesha Yaaad Rakhna…Meray Do Bhai hai Rajveer aur Alekh…aur agay sai bilkul aisa mat kehna

Rajveer: Theek keh rahi hai yeh…Agar ayenda aisay baat ki to mai tumhai punishment doon ga…miles durvaoon ga who bhee rifle ky saath

Alekh Smiles…ridzi and him both have tears in their eyes... Alekh Hugs both of them

Rajveer: Abhy yar Meri Reputation Ka kyal Rakho... Yeh aansooo mat bhao kisi ny dekh liya to kiya kahengy

Riddhima: Keh Captain Rajveer is the best and these siblings love each other more than anything.

Rajveer: Acha bus bus ab jao pehly he din late nahi hona

Alekh and Riddhima starts walking

Rajveer: Aur Suno

They turn around

Rajveer: Prove Your Self and that I can Proudly say that My Brother and Sister are soldiers

Riddhima and Alekh: Yes Sir

Rajveer looks at them proudly

Naina and Samrat reaches KMA

Samrat: Finally asylum pohanch gaye

Naina Smiles

Naina: Asylum Kyun?

Samrat: Uggh… Yahan say niklo nahi…cell phone nahi… raat ky 9 baje lights out… permission lai ky bahir jao… No chutii… Oh God how I am gonna Survive

Naina Smiles

Voice: Than How come u r here?

Both of them turned around

Naina: Bhaiya…

She hugs him… Samrat looks at them confusingly

Samrat: Now this is weird surprise…tum ny bataya nahi tumhary bhai yahan hoty hai… you..Naina Singh Ahluwalia than this must bhee Navin Singh Ahluwalia

Navin: Smart… How come you know?

Samrat: The KMA Booklet… which came with my Ban on Freedom

Navin: You must be New Cadet…I see u didn't choose to come here?

Samrat: Yup New Cadet…Samrat Shergill… I chose to come here but not a happy decision…My parents wanted me to be in Business…to which I m allergic so I blackmailed them and they gave me choice of business and army… so the better 1 was army

Navin: That's kinda Weird Cadet… by the way nice to meet you and you must be get going… directions are on notice board look for your room number… and best of luck cadet

Samrat: Thanks Sir…and Yeah Naina…mai tumhari help kar deta but u know I can't go to Girls Dorms..

Naina Smiles

Naina: Thanks Samrat but its ok

Samrat: Bye and see you around

They wave to each other and Samrat starts his journey through KMA

Navin: Seems Nice Guy

Naina: yeah but talks a lot

Navin: How are you? And how were the days going?

Naina: Same as Always…Life is going same just as came in holidays

Navin: He made you smile…I should thank him

Naina looks up at him

Navin: Just keep smiling… Naina Just try to move on its been 4 years

Naina: I m gonna try my best

Navin: Good…Now you are at KMA..starting from here its your new journey…try to live it up

Naina Nods

Navin: I wanna see my Super Girl back…I want My Naina Back… I miss You Naina

Naina have tears in her eyes

Navin: I m Sorry I couldn't do anything

Naina: No bhaiya what You did for me… No brother can ever do for it sis…and I am lucky to have brother like you

They Hug each other and wipe tears.

Naina: Bhaiya dekha na rula diya pehly he din

Navin: Sorry my Super Girl…

Naina: Bhai yahan to super girl na bulao

Navin: Acha Cadet Ahluwalia ab jao dair ho jaye gee…and yeah I am proud to say that u r my sis and I know u r gonna be the best soldier that this country could ever produce

Naina Smiles and he gives her the direction to her room and Naina Starts her New Ride of Life

Next: Reunion of Lost friends

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Part 3

It was kind of an apartment type' one big bedroom, living room, bathroom and a kitchen' usually they go to mess (cafeteria) but kitchen was still provided

Sanaya was the first one to arrive' she unlocked the door and went in she checked out the entire place.

Sanaya: Beta Sun aaj tu ny khud ka record tor diya'muah love you'sab sy pehly pohanch gaye tu' chal beta kam par lag ja aur saman andar rakh'kal sy waisay bhee Rifle uthany hai.

She picked the stuff and put it in room'She turned off all the lights as she heard the some noise on door' she was gonna surprise her friends' her missing of life was gonna come back to her today' she was happy and gloomy' Happy because she was about to meet her Best Friends after 4 years'Sad because she still remembered the day when they all went in the separate ways of life.

As Riddhima enter she could feel it that'there was something in that place which she was related to'

Suddenly there was a voice from dark room'

"Ridzi mai nai kaha na tha'Jis din mai Jaldi aaon gee us din miracle hoga"

Riddima was shocked and tears were rolling down her face'only words could she were

"Sun'"

Sanaya turned on the lights'

They both hugged each other

Sanaya: I missed you

Riddhima: I missed you too

They heard the door again when turned around to see'She was standing there'they day was like theirs and god was just listening to'whatever they wished for today it will come true.

She was locking the door but she didn't see them

Sanaya: Naina Kabhie Sach nahi Chupa sakti

Riddhima: Kyun kay Naina Ky Naina Hamesha Sach bolty hai

She didn't wanna turn around'she was still standing there as if the time has stopped'was she dreaming'was she went 4 years back or was it really a reality?..she didn't wanna face them how would she face them' she thought she was the reason of the crack in friendship'She thought that her "Naina Singh Ahluwalia" didn't deserve such a priceless friends'(yes that naina 😔)

Sanaya: 4 saal mai kia hum itny badal gaye tum hame gale bhee nahi lagao gee'

bin bataye chor chali?

Sanya: we weren't even worth for your trust? Bol na?

Naina Ran towards and hugged them both

Naina: I m sorry'I m really sorry

She was crying bitterly.

Riddhima: uth, aur chal sofa par baith'

Sanaya took Naina to Sofa'Riddhima brought water for her'Sanaya knew it was not a good time to talk about their past to lighten the moment she tried to change the topic.

Sanaya: No Glasses Haan'

Riddhima and Naina Smiled'

Riddhima and Naina: Lenses

Sanaya looked at Naina her face fell

Sanaya looked at Riddhima

Sanaya and Riddhima: I'll be there for you always just once let me be part of your moment'

They all had a group hug

Sanaya: Oh k bus Rona Band karo I got a surprise for you'

Naina & Riddhima: Kaisa Surprise?

Sanaya: Meri shadi ho gayi..

Riddhima and Naina had their eyes wide open: seriously

Sanaya: abhy ohh mery bewakoofon'pagal ho kya'mein aur shadi'no way'apni zindagi thori na khud he kurbaan karni hai

Riddhima: Yeh kyun nahi kehti ky kisi aur bechary ki zindagi kharab ho jaye gee

Sanaya and Riddhima started laughing'but they noticed that Naina had just a faded smile'Sanaya was about to ask Naina but Riddhima held her back'whispered to her "It's not a good time"

Riddhima: Oh k bhai ab jaldi say fresh ho jao we gotta go to Brigadier office

Sanaya and Naina got up to pick their stuff

Sanaya: Naina who main y suna hai tera bhai yahi hota hai'usko bol na meri thori connection set karley KMA mai'who training mai mujy zara azadi dila dey na

Riddhima from the room: Sun tu abhie tak sudhri nahi na kamchor

Naina Finally laughed which brightened Sanaya's and Riddhima's faces

Riddhima's cell started ringing as the 3 of them were sitting catching up with each other. Riddhima looked at the cell she got worried as her friends were sitting around her.

Riddhima: Mai who baat kar ky aati hoon'

She walked out

Sanaya was happy that she got her friends back in her life'.Naina was feeling guilty to face her friends'Riddhima was happy to have her friends back but something was eating her from inside'The hidden truth'

"A friend is someone we turn to
when our spirits need a lift.
A friend is someone we treasure
for our friendship is a gift.
A friend is someone who fills our lives
with beauty, joy, and grace.
And makes the whole world we live in
a better and happier place."

- Jean Kyler McManus -

Awesome part...really love the friends bond with each other...update soon...