'Beautifully Broken' (My 1st FF)

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Haya Khan

@HayyaKhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Part 4

(Lets Check on Guys😉)

Armaan was the first one to reach...He went in room and threw his bags and jumped on bed...so tired🥱

Armaan: Kya yar yeh wars😡 kyun hotay hai...log kya peace mai nahi reh sakty...agar world peace mai hoti to hum ko yeh hard training nahi karni parti😭...God bless the world...waisay pata nahi kaisay kharoos type room mates hongaye 😕

He then heard sound of door

A guy was standing there talking on phone..

Boy: Dekho sanju rotay nahi....mama ko pata chaley ga to unko kitna bura lagay ga aur phir aap ro gay to bhai bhee roy ga...acha agar aap ro gai nahi to he mama aur mamu next sunday ayengai...i know i know i m the world best mamu..aur zyada maska mat lagao...bye bii ko salam dena aur un ko mat tang karna..bye baby love you too😍(sucha lovely talk between mamu and niece😆)

Armaan was confused😕the sound was familiar...he was about to figure out but he was shocked when the guy turned around...He couldnt believe he was seeing his friend after soo long surprisingly shocked😲 he could only say

Armaan : Alekh...(yes that was alekh😊)

Alekh couldn't move either😒..he was seeing his best friend after 4 years...

Alekh: Rules Breakers' Glasses

Armaan: Yo chief i missed u mann

Alekh: i missed u tooo..AMy

Armaan: Oh god u remember the name😳eeeee

Alekh: how can i forget "AMY" kitna chirta tha tu😆

Armaan: still chiring yar

Alekh: teri Hindi mix English bolny ki aadat gayi nahi..well how is life

Armaan: life is still same...but alot is missing...by the way tum kis say baath kar rahay thay

Suddenly Alekh Face turned pale and fear on his face😕

Alekh: koi nahi bus meri bee ki granddaughter thee

Armaan: Chief kya tum mujh say kuch chupa rahay ho

Alekh: Nahi yar mai tujh say kya chupaoon ga

Armaan knew something was wrong but he preferred to leave it for other time because Alekh wasnt in state to answer

Alekh wanted to change the topic😕

Alekh: acha Sun kaisi hai?😃

Armaan: Same but bit changed...tu bata Basket kaisi hai?😊

Alekh: bilkul theek tak hai?😃

They saw another boy coming in...

Boy: yo man tum dono ek dusray ko jantay ho

Alekh: yeh...and i believe u must be our room mate?

Boy: hey! yeah...by the way i am Samrat u can call me Sam😉

Alekh: I m alekh and this armaan

Samrat: Waisay tum logon to mujy bataya nahi tum dono ek doosray ko jantay ho?

Alekh: Han beta hum ek doosray ky jigry dost hai😛

Samrat: Jigri What 😲

Alekh Whispered to Armaan: ek aur angrez ka bacha😉

Alekh: Firangiii chalegaye Samrat ko yahiin chor gaye...

Samrat: WHo is this firangi? our roomate?😆

Alekh:beta ja tu fresh ho ja U dont wanna be late...B.C ko report karna hai😆

Samrat: Yes man u r right

Armaan: tu nahi sudhra😉

Alekh Winked at Armaan

They both started laughing

❤️Thanks for the comments😳

(Kinda Boring part😭)

Next: B.C Office and what happens when they all finally are togather? 😲

Edited by Broken_Sara_H - 14 years ago

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shonadesire

@shonadesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

hey dear
awesome part
loved it
armaan n angad bonding too good
yaar ye sanju kon hai?
thanks for pm
plz update soon😃

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Haya Khan

@HayyaKhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Part 5

FROM HERE THE STORY IS GONNA BE NARRATED BY NAINA

Everyone was meeting each other I was standing in one corner watching my friends meet'I could see the happiness on their faces'I wasn't gonna jump in and ruin their happiness'Armaan's face was clearly telling that he was looking for Riddhima and there was something Ridzi I could sense it from the time the cell phone has rung but I was so selfish that at that time It was just me me me and nobody else in my life'The time

Armaan saw Ridzi his eyes lit up'The happiness of my friends was just priceless.

As usual Armaan Called her'

Armaan: Yo Basket

I couldn't believe that was Armaan our amy'crisp white shirt and ironed jeans'You got to be kidding be'No long funky hair'Army cut'No colored and ripped jeans'but his eyes were same naughty light blue green eyes'

But there was something weird Ridzi was not bothered today by this name'

Armaan was surprised because neither Ridzi was irritated nor was she turning'her back was toward Armaan.

Armaan Snapped his fingers

Ridzi turned toward him

Riddhima: Hey

That girl has not changed a bit my best friend, my sister, My Everything'Same highlighted hairs'dark blue big eyes'Her pretty face'but her smile was missing'naughtiness from her eyes were missing...

Armaan: Yo basket wass up'You and army eee how did that happened'did army have new way of finishing enemy by you long speeches.

She had this faded smile on her face.

Riddhima: You haven't changed a bit

Armaan: God basket u seriously think I would change

Riddhima: Oh yeah'by looking at you uhm yeah no long hairs'stupid belts'not wearing a quoted a shirt'no phatti purani jeans'and yeah no girl

Armaan: except last one'baqi sab ka army nay band baja diya'Poor little me

Riddhima: I haven't seen a girl plus friend yet so everything comes in "band baja diya" category

Armaan: Nope tum ho na

Riddhima looked up at him as if he said something her heart was waiting for but both were unaware of it

Both were just looking at each other'God they were just looking sooo cute together'I wish I could tell them at that time "fools u r in love" but as it says'there are more regrets and wishes in life than memories.

Armaan: uhm hey lets go see Sun Alekh Naina and the new panda

Riddhima: Panda???

He held her hand and pulled her towards were all of them were sitting

Armaan: ohh basket'I mean to say the new guy

Riddhima: Amy'that's rude'I m 101% sure now

Armaan: Basket..dont call me with that name

Riddhima: Amy

Armaan: Basket

Riddhima: Amy

Armaan: Basket

Riddhima: Amy

Armaan: Basket

Alekh: tum dono attay he shooroo ho gaye

Riddhima and Armaan: Sorry chief

Alekh wasn't changed at all same tough angry young man in professional places'same chocolate brown eyes'serious look dressed up nicely

Sanaya: Thanks Ridzi tu hai warna is ny to mera life line he disconnect kar dena tha

My Pretty little Sun'who always lighted and fun every moment'She have so much grown in these years'unchanged look'same those Light Brown eyes'Same Cellphone language

Alekh: Sun ek bat batao'is ne yeh baal kaisay kaat diye? Am I dreaming or what? Somebody pinch me

Armaan: here you idiot

Sanaya: Dude you don't wanna know' aisa lag raha tha jaisay iski battery life time ky liye kharab ho gaye ho' ghar mai jaisay matam ho raha ho'khud to silent mode tha by the way for the first time and mujy aur kaka ko bhe offline karva diya

Armaan: aaaaaaaa kyun jhoot bol ri ray' aur haan yeh phone language say out aa ab yahan koi nahi tumhari yeh ajeeb bhasha samajny wala'.

Samrat: wait waitwait'did I miss something guys?

Alekh to Riddhima: Lai firangi shooroo ho gay

Riddhima slaped him on his arm playfully

Armaan's category guy probably wasn't aware of hindi much looked like from his accent brown eyes'nice look'it Was Samrat ooops I mean Sam as he says'he was new who knew he is gonna be soon one of us'he will be our bestfriend

Armaan: Hey Basket'where is our gabbar?

Samrat: gabbarrrrrrrrrr?

Armaan: beta tu Aaram say baith tujy abhe kuch nahi pata'I mean to say my friend Naina

Samrat: oh I see

Armaan: haan beta tu bus yahi bait kar observe kar

Riddhima: yahi hogi she came with us from the room

A girl standing in corner'.no longer the same'a serious look'most likely to say rude'simple plain collar shirt with jeans'hazel eyes'black ponytail till sholders'Yes that was me Naina Singh Ahluwalia'a selfish little creature

I was so hoping nobody sees me but Armaan spotted me'

Armaan: Yo gabbar'whats up yar'tu aur army'officers ko kya marna hai tujh say panga lay ky

Naina: Hi

Armaan: aray gabbar tu to waisay he hai rayyyy'kaisa chal raha hai sab

Naina: Fine how are you?

Armaan: beta gabbar mujy kya ho sakta hai'apun fit hai rayyy

Alekh was fully shocked to see me'he was standing next to Riddhima

Riddhima held his hand'there was something going on which I wish could knew'He said something to Ridzi which I was unable to hear but I was just looking at them'everyone was busy in talking'but Ridzi and Alekh were not there mentally

I wish I just knew those words which Alekh said..Life would have been changed

I hugged everyone and thn I was just lost

Armaan: Yo beta kiddher hai tu

Naina(me): Kuch nahi

Armaan: you sure

Me: yeah'I'll see you later'I have some work

Armaan: Alright see you soon

While I was walking away from there I was just thinking that'I had to do something I have a long way to go and I couldn't get distracted by this all'(friendship for me was distraction'what a fool was i)... I have to stay away from them' I have to do what I m here for'I have to KILL HIM😲

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(😳Who is naina gonna kill)😕

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Edited by Broken_Sara_H - 14 years ago

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shonadesire

@shonadesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

hiii dear
awesome part👏
loved it so much😛

thanks for pm
plzz continue soon

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Haya Khan

@HayyaKhan

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Part 6

(sorry for any mistakes)

No man I didn't wanted to be life that'I didn't want to be a killer'but he killed my friend'who was my cousin, like my brother, my guide'I didn't know the person's face name or anything I just knew this person was here in this academy and I was here to take revenge from him.

With these thoughts I was walking unaware of what's going around'

Banggggggg I ran in someone'a handsome tough guy'nice hair'big brown eyes'starring at me

Me: Sorry

Voice: Its's Alright'hmmm you must be fresher never seen you here before.

Me: uhmm..yeah

Voice: Well I guess I missed the introduction session I m Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat

The smile somehow affected me but I wasn't paying attention to what he was saying

Me: uhmm...i am Naina uhh Singh Ahluwalia

Raj: Naina UHHH Singh Ahluwalia'weird name "uhh"

Me: no I mean Naina Singh Ahluwalia

Raj: better'you must be Navin's Sister Right?

Me: yeah'again I m really sorry'I didn't see you

Raj: Ahan its ok cadet next time when you walk make sure you are awake cause I don't want you to get in trouble by running in to Major Naik'

Me: Yeah Sir

Raj: Good'See you soon'Excuse me I have to go

That was the first time I met Rajveer Sir I didn't know he was gonna be my teacher'ignoring him I moved on not knowing that what storm he is gonna bring in my life'not knowing that soon he will be the one to decide my every move

Over to mess

Rajveer entered in mess

Raj: Hey Ritzz'

Ritu: Rituuuu'..

Raj: yeah yeah same thing'Hey Bandar

Navin: Saalay cadets baithay hai thori to izat rakh

Raj: Aaaj Nahi to Kaal unko bhee pata lag jana hai to aaj kyun nahi

Ritu gives High Five to him

Raj: Hi Suri jeee tussi barey sonay lag day aaj? Lolita jee nay clue shlue dai deta(Lolx guys I (sara) don't speak Punjabi at all but I will still try for suri jii lolx)

Suriji: Oye Puttar Lolita Je Nu impress Karny Wasty

Raj: Best of luck Surri Jee

Rajveer Came and sat with his "Teacher Gang" 😉

TEACHER GANG LOLX (Captain Rajveer, Captain Navin, Dr Ritu, Capt Dr Shalini, Captain Abhimanyun, Capt Nandini, Captain Aryan)

Raj: Suriji Zara woh SSS special chai to pilana

Suriji: Abhi Laya puttar

Raj: haan to chauhan sahab kaisay aap? Saab purzay to kaam kar rahay haina

Nandini: I know u monkey where ur point is going'who theek thak hai'kuch nahi kaha mainay

Raj: Hai Mrs Chauhan Pati Protector'tumahai to Pati Protection Foundation kholna chahia

Navin: agree yar' Nandini Chauhan PP'Buri Nazar Down Down

Nandini Starts to beat them with book

Shalini: aray bus karo shameless people cadets baithay hai yahan

Raj: Hey shalu yad aya'Cadets Ka intro kaisa gaya..

Shalini: Kafi Acha tha sab cadets aaye hai bus ek cadet nahi ayi I think Aamina Ali

Aryan: Oye nautanki kuch cadets idher he hai baat kar ly

Aryan: Cadets Zara please idher aye

Abhimanyun to Raj: Oye sun Bandar mai kuch zyada he tameez nahi aye

Raj: Chup kar bay cadets aa rahe hai

Cadets: Yes Sirrr

Rajveer: Hi Cadets...I am Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat'Sorry aap sab say mulaqat nahi hui

We all were normal but Riddhima had hard time keep herself from laughing she covered her mouth

Raj: Cadet Koi Problem Hai???

Riddzy: No Bh'umm No No Sirr No Problem

Raj: So everyone please introduce yourself

Armaan: Cadet Armaan Khan'Nice to meet you Sir

Raj: Same here..

Sanaya: Cadet Sanaya Khan'Good Signals sir

Raj: Umm what cadettt?

Armaan: Woh sir she means nice to meet you

Raj: Oh I see'Nice to meet you too

Armaan Whisper to Sanaya: Kia ray Sun Bola na tujhe yaha yeh cellphone use na kar

Raj Heard it we all were smiling

Raj: Cadet Armaan its ok 'uhm Cadet Sanaya Super Good Connection

Samrat: Cadet Samrat Shergil Sir' Good to see u sir

Raj: Same here cadet'No gel in hair cadet or else u'll be in Major Nair's "Black List"

Samrat to Sanaya: ab to Major se panga lena he parey ga
Sanaya winks at him

Riidz: Hello'umm' Captain'Nice to meet

None of us knew that Raj and Ridzy were siblings'Both were at verge of laughing but none of them could laugh

Raj: Any Problem cadet seems like u r having hard time adjusting in academy

Ridzy: nah Nah'no sir No problems just missing my family'just think if my brother is proud of me or not?

Raj: ohh cadet'I m sure he is proud of you

Both of them were happy because she made her brother proud and her brother was proud because his sister was going to be a soldier to serve the country he loves, she loves we all love. Why are Relationships so important in life ehrn we know there is gonna be end to evry relationship. L

It was my turn I met him but there was something in him which could pull out the soft corner of me.

Raj: aah cadet Naina "Ahh Singh

Navin: Abhy tu isko kaisay janta hai'aur yeh "AHH" ka kya matlab

Raj: Go figure beta'.waisay bheee tujy 6 aur saal lagny hai samjnay mai

Navin: tujy to mai bad mai dekhta hoon

Raj: back to you cadets'

Alekh: apun Alekh Sharma'acha laga mil ky

Raj: jee cadet bohat acha laga mil kar'zara class ky barey mai baat karney hai aapse baad mein'meray room mai ayega

Alekh bit his tongue: mar gaye bhe tapori Alekh'aaj to full class lage gii

Ridz in Alekh ear: mujy thora kaam hai so akele chale jana

Alekh: haso haso'hahaha very funny

Raj: oh k cadets 'it was nice to meet you all'I'll see you all soon'. over and out

Everyone was busy with something'I so wanted to be with them to be part of their life but this hate is such a bad thing it even keeps you from your loved one'. I was standing alone near the door outside of mess they are were looking super happy it was like a reunion for them'someone taped me on shoulder'there was something with touch which I never felt before'

Raj: Hi cadet Ahluwalia app yahan akele koi problem?

Me: No Sir'bus waisay he thora akele rehny ka man tha'

Raj: Come on Cadet sirf aaj ka din hai enjoy cadet

Me: Yes sir'

Raj: anyways cadet koi problem ho to'Captain Rajveer On duty aur Raj the Normal insaan off duty ko bata sakti ho

What the hell was wrong with me I was smiling forgetting my all problems'Naina u dobt have right to smile but he made me smile there was something in him which could feel my pain

Naina: Thanks Sir

Raj: My Pleasure cadet

He was about to turn bang some one opened the door frm inside'I was on floor and Raj on Top of me'I was just lost on his eyes'His gaze was killing me'I didn't want to feel anything'.

Edited by Broken_Sara_H - 14 years ago