FF-the mystery of the ring(MG)(update on pg 40) - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

vety nice update
Love it
Amazing can't wait for the next
Omg Geet kidnaped Maan hahahahaahah can't stop my laughter
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Awesumm..update dear..
do continue soon..😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
ooolalaaa, so geet has kidnapped maan, yikess!!

rofl, cant stop laughin.. do pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LOVED IT......WANT TO SEE MORE OF MANEET NOKH-JOKH.....UPDATE SOON...THANX 4 THE PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
nice concept and nice cjapter i liked bravery of geet pehle hi chapter mein maan singh khurana ko kidnap kar liya mana na padhega women power ko and don't forget to pm me next chapter
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: todayzstar

Awesumm..update dear..
do continue soon..😉

thnx dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: --ANGEL--

LOVED IT......WANT TO SEE MORE OF MANEET NOKH-JOKH.....UPDATE SOON...THANX 4 THE PM

u will surely get to knw😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: hansasma

ooolalaaa, so geet has kidnapped maan, yikess!!


rofl, cant stop laughin.. do pm me

yep fr sure😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: princessdiana

nice concept and nice cjapter i liked bravery of geet pehle hi chapter mein maan singh khurana ko kidnap kar liya mana na padhega women power ko and don't forget to pm me next chapter

thnx will not frget to pm u😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi ya grls n boys came up with my 2nd update nw i hope u will like dis one😉 here it is chapter 2
da car was taking up speed maan was still in pain he said ,' u r feeling vry happy r8 ? ' geet looked surprised n said ,' y?' maan chuckled n said , ' no u r wid such a handsome man like me n i readily came wid u without trying ny least attempt to brk free ur loose hold n madam let me clear smthin i came wid u readily as i wanted sm change in my life ,u din kidnap if had wanted i culd hv easily ran awy as i m martial arts champ n black belt so get ur head clear okay?' geet gulped hard n den strted stammering ,' w.....wht do u thi.....think of ur slf i m not dat type of grl u r thinking to be n r u flirting wid me ' maan mockingly said, ' no not at all y will i flirt wid a kidnapper though she is a beautiful lady n dun get afraid u i will not try to do nythin wid u' n winked at geet n she glared at him which did not scare maan at all insted he got fascinated at her n thot her to be very amusing .
Till now ethane was listening to da conversation of maan n geet but he sudddenly stop da car making da two ppl on da back seat almost fall geet worriedly said , ' ehtane whts da matter?' ethane said , ' geet take out ur gun n gv it to me i smell smthin is not r8?' geet hurriedly took out da gun n gave it to ethane n den she saw dat a car was blockin der way n three men came out in black dress n der face was masked .ethane went out da car n instead of pointing da gun at dos men he pointed da gun at maan n geet n said,' come out fast or i will shoot u ' geet was now feeling afraid n turened to see maan he gave her a knowing glance n took her hand ,dey came out holdin eachothrs hand n maan whispred to geet, ' dun worry geet i m wid u nothin will happen u jus watch'
by now da three men had reached n da plzce whr maan n geet was stndin n surrounded dem maan said,' wht do ull want ' one of dem said,' a vry small thing ur ring gv it to us' maan said,' frget it i m not gonna gv u dis ring' one of dem slowly reached towrds geet n snatched her frm maan s grip n said,' den frget ur mistress as well ' maan said in a stern voice ,' dun do nythin to her ' but dey din bother , ethane was still pointin da gun at maan but he very catiously gave a kick on his arm n da gun fell nd now da actually f8ing strted maan was beating dem up like rug is beated while it is cleaned but suddenly he hrd geet shreik he left da othr three half dead n turened around to see ethane was pointing towrds geet n slowly goin frwrd to kill him maan ran to save her but at da same moment ethane pressed da trigger n da bullet zoomed n lodged itslf on maan s arm he fell wid agony n evry thin slowly became black in frnt of him.
Nxt aftrnoon maan came into his consiousness n saw a cat was sitting beside him on da bed evrythin was old but da room was well furnished . as he was looking around still lying on his bed der was a sudden creak n da door opened it was geet holding a cup of tea maan smiled n said , ' gdmrng geet n by da way is der ny reeti rewaz type dat a whnevr u wake up a cat will be on ur bed side?' geet culdnot hlp laughing n maan was totally mesmirized by dat laughter . geet controlled hrslf n said, ' frst of all gud aftrnoon n second of all no der is no such ritual he is john my pet cat he likes guests u knw ' maan noded den seein da cup said,' awwww hw swt of u to brng coffee fr me plz gv' geet said,' wht?no dis is not cofee but tea n dis is fr me not fr u' den geet suddenly became concerned n catiously said, ' hmmmmmmm sry fr yesterday i din think dat all dis wuld happen n ethane_ ' she left her sentence midway n maan spoke,' geet i m not at all hurt yeah da head feels lil dizzy but i will be fine n yeah ethane was a creep n u dun hv to worry okay n my ring_' he also stopped midway as he saw da ring was vanished frm his finger he got agitated n said ,'whrs da ring gone?' geet said ,'its wid me it is mine n tell me hw did u get it' maan s face changed frm calmness to nger he said ,' so u brought me here to knw more abt da ring u culd have tken me in private last n8 n told dat u wanted to knw bout this ring but nw dat u hv kidnapped me n i m hurt i hv to stay in this farmhouse leavin important wrks but ma'am u will not get to knw abt this ring unless u gv dat ring bck u get it' geet was totally horrified seein maan her face was white n nw she was in dilemma whether to gv da ring bck or not............
so frnz hit da LIKE BUTTON if u like dis chapter n plzzzzzzzzz dun frget to leave ur precious comment😊
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