New Beginnings(A Sajan ff) Prt-2 Pg 4

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Hey awesome update..Felt really bad for both Gunjan & Samrat..Its really a hard to go through divorce...Armaan & Ridi was really amazing friends..Please continue soon..Want to see SaJan confrontation..

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SIZZZLER

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Mind blowing Update YAASHi,👏 Actually, Fantastic 👏. This is very promising story line.Your characterization and presentation of all Characters are superb. ,I really liked all the characters . Thanx 4 PM.

-S O H A M.

Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 14 years ago

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gunjan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Hey Malika Dear Wow!! What an Amazing and awesome Update....completely mindblowing👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏....Update is very good and very emotional..I loved reading it a lottttt..................U have written it very well .....Scenes , Dialogues , presentation everything was excellent......u have explained each characters POV and pain very well......The update was Superb👍🏼...................

Each scene n dialogue is well written...from Gunjan hospital scene , her dreams n her pain n riddhima calming her down n Armaan n Samrat scenes....Samrats pain of being lonely and gunjan being locked out and morning scene between Armaan-ridhhima and Gunjan each scene was fantastic👍🏼........Gunjan POV n pain was well described ...Gunjan is in so much pain 😭....she loves samrat very much ..Samrat is everything 2 her her best friend n childhood sweet heart her lover her husband....Her pain of loosing him after divorce was so well described that even I had tears in my eyes😭......this pain of loosing samrat is killing gunjan .............

Ridz and Gunjan are really good friends and when gunjan was in tears she like a friend n sis calmed her down But One thing I felt that though Riddhima wants 2 unite Sajan n wants them happy especially Gunjan happy But she is not trying enough I mean Riddhima knows sajan love each other But she said 2 armaan that she wants Gunjan 2 move on n get over this hurt soon as she cant see her in pain..I felt after reading this that Riddhima though she knows Sajan love each other But she doesnot understand the intensity n deepness of this love..I think that Ridz is not understanding this that Gunjan is in so deep pain bec she n samrat r seperating...and in her heart Gunjan doesnot want to take divorce from Samrat.....I feel Riddhima could have one last time adviced gunjan to talk 2 samrat about their relationship and she should have Told Gunjan to give her relation ship with samrat one more chance Just like Armaan did ..ARMAAN loved Sajan very much and wants them together n happy so thats why he told samrat that if gunjan didnt come 2 the party then he also didnt go 2 hospital wing innaguration ceremony and he adviced samrat to try one more time and 2 thing whether he really wants divorce..........I feel Armaan understands deepness of Sajan relationship more then Riddhima...............

As for Samrat I thing he is in deep pain also 😭and when he was drunk that pain came out n showed itself .... in his heart he doesnot want 2 seperate from gunjan.........But ONE thing I am unable 2 understand is WHY arent sajan trying 2 save their relationship when its clear that they cannot live without one another and Why Sajan relation reached divorce stage?? They r childhood sweet hearts and best friends n mature people n love n understand one another so after Samrats fathers death why couldnt they share the pain of loss with one another......as both were experiencing same kind of pain.Sams DAD was like a dad 2 gunjan also..I am confused.........😕 .......I know even Mature people behave immaturely n like kids sometime but still once they communicate then everything gets solved and Sajan r childhood friends n sweethearts SO WHY is their communication gap between sajan?? ..😕😕😕😕....So many Qs 😉😊and only U know the answers 2 these Qs Malika So Update Fasttttttt Plssssssss😊........

Wasey Samrat is impossible Armaan especially asked him not 2 close Main gate And he did just that.................and when Gunjan tried 2 wake him up he snored more louder😲..poor Gunjan she had 2 spent rest of the night outside her house.....But One good thing happened Sajan divorce is delayed ...😊....I feel Now their is one more chance 4 Sajan to atleast give their relationship one more try.......I thing Armaan n riddhima should talk to sajan about this and may be now as armaan has explained to riddhima that may be destiny wants sajan 2 unite So I feel That MAY BE Armaan n Rids Sajan se talk karengey about their relationship ..Its just my guess😉....I hope Sajan unite soon......................

Once again loved reading the update .....It was just Fantastic👏👏............Good work malika...I have asked so many Qs and Answers 2 those Qs are with only U Dear😉..........So Malika Plsss Update Soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn😉......................Thanks 4 pm🤗..............

Love Gunjan😊😊.......

Edited by 1gunjan7 - 14 years ago

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

tht was sooooooooooo nice part plzzzz soon make sajan together

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sonu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Simply loved it. dear....looks like the next hearing is going to take sometime ...i think by that time sajan may have resolved their differences but from the looks of it i don't think the journey is going to be a easy one........sam is seriously impossible poor gunjan .........continue soon

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jyotika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Yashiii🤗🤗 Firstly, sorry for not commenting on part1.. you know i'm busy with exams and all so not getting enough time to come on i-f properly
The concept and the first part was awesome.. i really like the story of this ff, its veryy different from other ones😳
And now coming to the update.. its fantastic👏👏 Loved the way you showed Gunjan's POV.. brilliant one hon!! Pleasee do continue soon. and thanks for the pm sweetheart😳🤗

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brahmjot

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

re2 i am promising u that i am unreserving this today at anycost

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charmee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

awesome updt yashi... loved the part...🤗
u very well portrayed gunjan's pov👍🏼 and even sam's wen he says to armaan that everyone left me alone now even u leave... Ghosh both sajan are in pain

do continue soon... n thanks for the pm...😃

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gunjan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Hey Malika dear I have edited n updated my comment on page 5 ...Plss do check it .............

Love Gunjan😊😊.............

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Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Hey Yashii .......brilliant story line ...amazing ...simply beautiful ...loved it to the core .........can't see sam n gun in pain 😭 ...thnx for the pm dear n plsss cont soon .....🤗

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