New Beginnings(A Sajan ff) Prt-2 Pg 4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Hey Dear Malika Wow!! Awesome n interesting Story line 👍🏼......Character Sketch is very good.........and The introduction of your story was impressive and Fantastic..👏👏.👏....1st part of the FF--New beginnings is just Excellent and Amazing and really very well written.................Loved reading your FF a lot........Each scene n Dialogue from Start to finish was Superb......and Presentation is also Amazing........👏......I loved reading n Imagining each scene 😍.........

Sheena is so evil 😡..But really liked the the way u showed Armaan handling sheena..U wrote it well and What u wrote at the time when Sheena walked away and Steve saw her walking away--This Scene had me in splits .🤣.-----sheena walking away shaking her big fat butt--Sheena 's BIG Fat Butt-😆😆🤣-- I couldnt control my laughter when I read this scene of Sheena walking away😉😆😆..........

Samrat n Armaans they r so naughty ...when I was imagining them laughing and the whole scene the way armaan handled Sheena and steve .. Armaan n samrats laughter this particular scene had me laughing also😆 and Both of them called sheena MISS G .....And What Does MISS G means??.....I think Miss G means Gamandii 😉 Right Malika?.................But I loved Samrat and Armaan's bonding .. the way Armaan was trying 2 make samrat realise that he still loves gunjan and they both should not take divorce and should give each others relationship another chance .. this Scene n Dialogues were Really sweet and Amazing ...............very well written .....this scene showed that Armaan is a true friend of Sajan .......

Sajan are taking divorce😭..and their 1st hearing is next day😭..But I am sure this Divorce will never happen....As after armaans words 2 him Samrat has started realising he may still love His Chashmish..... I am sure Sajan will realise they still love Each other and then will unite😊.........RIGHT Malika??.😉😊.............

Really Fantastic story line and I will Love to read Your Updates ......................SO DO Update Soon 😊.............................

Thanks 4 Pm dear🤗 and Whenever U Update DO Pm Me also Plsss.........😊...

Love Gunjan😊😊....................

Originally posted by: Anjali_12

Hey awesome concept & CS..Its really very refreshing one...& the first part was superb!!!Please continue soon..& plzzzzzzzzzz add me to pm list...

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT

Very Interesting n Different Concept YAASHI👏 Superb 1st Part.👏 Very promising Story Line.👏I loved your casting (Jenny is best 4 Rids Character).Do continue soon.

-S O H A M.

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowow nice CS ,intro and part 1 plzzzzzz add me to your pm list

Originally posted by: ambikamuskaan

awesome cont soon....

Originally posted by: aashizin

oww malu it was an outstanding concept of this FF kudos to u for coming up with this wonderful concept👏👏and first part was seriously amazing , just love this first update 👏👏👏 u did wonderful job with this update specially loved samrat and arman's bonding the way u said just like younger and elder brother's jodi , this concept is seriously very promising the way u described one young couple 's phase of life , understanding ,faith , love which is hidden behind their ego , and clash of thoughts , gosh it was be most wonderful how will they again discover their love again , in any relationship everytime u discover ur partner more and more spending time with each other sharing everything here they fell in love ,got married still they haven't discovered their soul yet now can't wait for next update i am excited to read next part do continue soon and once again hats off to u for wonderful concept 👏👏 btw sheena 's scene and on that samrat and arman's take on it was hilarious i wish i could rolling on my floor 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: dolly18

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Originally posted by: ArShSaJan

lovedddd itttt veryyyy mucxhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! continuee soonn...n pllzzz pm meee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

hey yashi.. its interesting and out standing concept dear👏 kudos for coming up with such an innovative and different concept...

awesome start with samrat-arman bond.. hopefully arman's words were effective for samrat to rethink about the decision of divorce and give another chance to their love, their marriage..

and about sheee-naah i was so missing our chaddi aunty🤣🤣 and arman-sam convo about her cracked me up🤣

do cont soon.... i hope misunderstanding and clashes unwrap from sajan's life soon...