New Beginnings(A Sajan ff) Prt-2 Pg 4 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ght_sajan

Loved the plot( the title is also amazing)'begs to be different otherwise we have the same run off the mill plots '....i am so happy that you have came up with a ff considering you are amongst the good writers we have in this forum'.all the best & continue soon'.i am unable hit the like button so can you pls pm me when you update the next part'.looking forward to this one''.



hey thnxxxx so much dear for liking my ff. Really happy cud make u like the plot and theme of the ff.I will surely try to maintain the standards n will inform u whenever i update.😊 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ekta_monaya

o god! i cnt tell u how much i luvd the concept..........its truly roccckkking.......!!!!!!!

the party scene between samrat & armaan was just out-of-this world.......!!!!!! luvd the way both teased sheeeeeennnnnaaaaaaa.........🤢
i actully was laughing falling on the ground.....!!!!🤣
but wen it bcame an emotional 1, it was vry touching........hope SaJan give a fair chance 2 thier wedding as they r world's best & most compatible pair........

luvd it do cont soon & plzzzzz add me 2 ur PM list........plzzzzzzz........

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
& PLZZZZZZ PM ME WEN U CONTINUE.........😊

w8ing eagerly 4 the next update......do cont soon & PM me plzzzzzz.......



hey dear thnx a lotttt for being so generous n supporting towards my effort.Really means a lottt.Feels gud that i could justify with the requisite emotions in my writing.I will surely pm u whenever i update.Do watch this space for the next prts...thnxxx soooo much!!😛😊
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Originally posted by: 358674

awesome concept

superb
the 1st part was really gud..... very nice
awesome actually
looking 4ward 2 it 😊



heyy nisha thnxx so much dear for reading my ff n giving ur precious feedback😳...this really means sooo much!!😛 I will definately pm u whenever i update.😊
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PART-2

At sanjeevani:
Completing her midnight rounds, that included patients from nearly half-a-dozen different departments, gunjan made her way back to the common room. An unearthly eeriness had filled the air in the common room, that made gunjan much more restless. It had been a long tiring day for her, though not physically, but of course…mentally!
In the past seven years…It had never been so, that gunjan even for a single second, had felt uninterested in her job of being a doctor. However demanding it may have been, but she lived every moment of it with full dignity and dedication. "48-hr shifts…back-to-back surgeries…reporting on duty at the most odd hrs of night"…she had done everything with the same affectionate smile on her face. But tonite…tonite seemed different!...
For it was not just about sitting some extra hrs in her cabin, checking on an unending queue of patients or going in for a third or fourth surgery in a row…but it was much more than that! It was about the biggest decision she had taken for her life so far…the catastrophe that loomed upon her married life…it was about her first divorce hearing!
Placing her stethoscope and lab-coat carefully on the table, gunjan slumped back into a couch. The moment she surrendered herself to it, a wave of acute exhaustion beckoned her senses. She closed her eyes and tried to relax. But only for the worse…as soon as gunjan closed her eyes…all the predictable scenes from the impending divorce hearing…she and samrat putting allegations on each other…negotiations on their late father's property…and the judge at-last declaring her divorced from samrat….all like some frenzied screen transitions of a poorly edited movie, splashed on her mind. Within a flash of a second, gunjan opened her eyes and sat straight.
Seeing gunjan wake up so suddenly, Riddhima, who had just entered the common room a few moments ago got startled. In a trance, Riddhima dropped her weighty book she was reading, on "Orthopedics" and moved to gunjan's side.
"Gunjan what happened bachcha…tu theek hai na??" riddhima asked as she caressed a terrified gunjan.
Seeing herself still in the common room and seeing riddhima sitting next to her, gunjan came back to reality and realized that what all she saw was just an illusion of her overstressed mind. She touched her eyes and realized that they had turned moist. "If just a thought of it could move her to tears…what will happen when all this will take place for real??" gunjan thought as a shooting pain began to knot her stomach. She shrugged with discomfort.
"Relax gunjan…just relax" riddhima tried to comfort gunjan as she made her drink some water while rubbing her back.
"Gunjan…I know dear what u r going through right now. I know that its not at all easy for you." Riddhima said to gunjan pressing her hand.
G: I don't know di whats happening to me…!!I m losing grip!! (Gunjan moved her hands in her hair due to frustration) I cant tell u ki is waqt…is waqt main kitna akela feel kar rahi hoon di!! Aisa lag raha hai jaise…jaise mujhse koi meri life ka ek bahut important part cheen kar door le jaa raha ho. I don't know di main kya karoon…its soo difficult…maine kabhi nahin socha tha ki meri lyf mein kabhi aisa bhi ek waqt ayega…jab main...jab main..(unable to speak a word further…gunjan broke into a weep and threw her head onto riddhima's chest)
"Pls help me di…"gunjan wailed " pls help me out of this mess!!"
Riddhima kept on caressing gunjan for a few more moments…till she had vent it all.
R:Gunjan…I understand your condition. Main janti hoon ki tu is waqt kya feel kar rahi hai. But gunjan ye jo bhi ho raha hai…ye bhi to tera hi decision hai na. Baby you did your best to save your relationship with sam…to save your marriage…but when nothing worked at all, it was only then, that the two of u came to this decision…haina!
"I know di…u are rite. It was my decision only, and I still have no regrets about it. But di…what pains me the most is that, tomorrow… with my husband…I will also lose my best friend forever. I will lose my savior…my samrat! I will lose that one friendship of my life…which means everything to me. I wish…we hadn't married…atleast he would have been there for me as my lifelong friend" gunjan wept as all the childhood memories of her and samrat's friendship began to dance in front of her eyes. She felt an irresistible crave to sweep back to those beautiful days of their carefree friendship overpowering her senses…making her vision go blur with tears.
At this point of time, Gunjan's words, her tears, could no longer let riddhima remain unaffected by them. Her eyes too felt moist seeing her in this condition. But she knew that she wasn't supposed to do that, rather she needed to console gunjan in every way possible.
R(trying to act as casual as possible): Gunjan…I can understand baby…I understand everything what's troubling u so much. But you just try and not think about it. Sometimes its better to leave certain things to destiny. Sometimes that's the best option.
G(After a span of a silence):I think…I think u r rite di. I should just leave it to destiny. Whatever will happen…will be for good. I will take everything the way it comes in…coz finally what all happens is in no way under our control. So there's no use thinking abt it and taking unnecessary tension.
"Good" riddhima said squeezing gunjan's hand as she gave her an encouraging smile.
R: Chal gunjan its really late now. Your duty hours are also over. Go home and get some rest.
Gunjan nodded to riddhima slightly and got up to collect her belongings.
R:And promise me ki tu ghar jaakar bilkul nahin royegi.
G(Her eyes had become all puffy and red due to crying): I…I promise di.(she said weakly)
Scene shift(In Armaan's car)
It was almost quarter past 1 and no one could be seen around as Armaan's car ran down the deserted road. Armaan drove the car while samrat laid down almost unconsciously on the seat just next to him. Reason-He had drunk too much!!
"Ohh god samrat what are you doing!!" armaan shouted on samrat as he pulled him back towards his seat to prevent him taking his head out of the window."Kya zaroorat thi tujhe itni peene ki..hunn??"armaan's pitch became louder and louder "Tujhe pata hai na…u cant handle more than two pecks…phir bhi bina soche samjhe pata nahin kitni chadha li mere peeche se!"
As armaan went on scolding him, samrat made an innocent child like face and started acting like crying.
"Tu…tu bahut bahut bura hai armaan…I…I hate you" samrat mumbled in an unclear tone.
"Oh really???abhi to tune meri burai dekhi nahin hai theek se…agar ab ek baar bhi sir bahar kiya …ya koi bhi bekaar ki baat ki to main tujhe yahin chod kar chala jaunga…samajh mein aaya!!"armaan gave samrat a look.
As soon as armaan said those words…the mischievous smile on samrat's face vanished suddenly. Till now samrat was just being notorious with armaan but now he was seriously hurt.
"To phir jaa na…kisne roka hai…chala ja mujhe chod ke. Pehle dad chale gaye…kal chashmish chali jayegi…phir tu bhi chala jaa…(Saying so samrat literally began to cry like a toddler).
Seeing him like this armaan's heart went out to him. Though samrat was not totally into his senses…but armaan knew that what he was saying right now, came directly from his heart. For the first time armaan realized that how lonely his friend was.
Mumbling his half-baked words…samrat gradually fell asleep on his seat. Seeing him asleep, armaan quickly rolled up the the window on samrat's side to prevent cold air from coming in. He saw samrat's cheeks that still had a few dried up tear drops on them. A lump built up in armaan's throat seeing his brother like friend like this.
"Everything will be fine sam…soon everything will be fine" armaan said in a shallow tone as he caressed his fingers in samrat's hair with concern.
Scene shift(Samrat's house)
Reaching samrat's home armaan carefully transferred samrat on the support of his arms to his bed as samrat was totally drunk. Armaan knew that gunjan was still in hospital…so he asked samrat NOT to close the door from inside unless she comes back. But he was thoroughly doubtful if samrat had registered even a single word of his! Escorting him upto his bed…armaan finally moved out of the Singhania mansion and made his way towards his place. He had informed sister mary and john (who lived in the outhouse) to lock the door of the house from outside till gunjan returned. Mary and john did the same and went back to the outhouse.
At singhania mansion(3'o clock in morning)
At 3'o clock gunjan could finally return home completing her duty. As she went near the door, she noticed a lock on it. She looked at her watch…it was already 10 minutes past three. She felt bad as she would now have to disturb sister mary and john out of their sleep at such an odd hour of night. But with no option left…gunjan knocked the door of the outhouse.
"Whose this??"sister mary said rubbing her eyes as she opened the door.
"I am sorry sister to disturb you at this time but can I get the keys of the house" gunjan said in her usual warm tone.
"Ohh you are back my child!!Wait I'll just get the keys" sister mary said.
As sister mary found the keys she went upto the door of the main house and opened the lock.
"Thnxxx sister"gunjan said as she gave sister mary a smile of gratefulness.
"Its okk my child…u go and take rest" sister mary said carrassing gunjan's cheek.
Bidding gunjan a goodnite sister mary went back to her room. On the other hand, gunjan tried to open the door.
BUT!!...
much to her surprise she found that she could not open it. For nearly 15 minutes gunjan kept on trying to open the door but there was no use. All her efforts failed terrible. gunjan felt irritated!! Already it was half past three and she felt awfully starved and tired. To add to it…the next morning it was her first divorce hearing!!
Seeing no of her efforts working,Gunjan sat down on the staircase in front the door lethargically. She felt drained out and helpless. Tears rolled down her cheeks seeing her own feeble condition. Her life was such a mess! Though it was just about a door being locked from inside and she being forced to sit outside…but gunjan felt herself deprived and homeless. As that was the only condition which awaited her the next morning. Till now she hadn't even decided about her future dwelling once she will get divorced. She just knew that armaan and riddhima had offered her to live with them for as long as she wished. "It is soo sweet of them to do so much for me"gunjan thought.
Gunjan was still lost in her thoughts of the impending disaster when she suddenly heard a snoring sort of a sound coming from inside the house.
"one second!!.." gunjan tried to concentrate.."Is he inside??…sleeping??" she placed her ear near the door. As gunjan focused…she heard samrat's snores becoming clearer and clearer.
"DAMN!!!" gunjan hit the door hard with her hand. She couldn't believe that samrat had locked the main gate of the house from inside and slept. She started knocking the door of the house while calling out samrat's name as loud as possible. But there was no reply from inside…rather samrat's snores became louder. Gunjan felt like killing samrat then and there only. Now she had finally made her mind that her decision of giving samrat a divorce is the best decision she had taken so far.
Time passed like that as gunjan kept on venting out her frustration on samrat's carelessness. She had been left with no other option as well as she didn't want to disturb mary and john from their sleeps once again. Sitting on the stairs like that gunjan finally fell asleep outside the house only.
In the morning at Singhania mansion(at 11:00 am in the morning)
As a frenzied armaan and riddhima drove to the Singhania mansion to search for their lost friends…they saw gunjan sleeping on the staircase in front of the door.
"Gunjan…gunjan get up!!!" riddhima shook gunjan trying to wake her up.
"di…armaan! tum dono yahan???what are you doing here???We had to meet at the court na??"gunjan asked riddhima n armaan in a hoarse voice while rubbing her eyes.
"Yes mrs Singhania we had to meet at the court…but at 9'o clock in the morning…not at 11" armaan exclaimed.
"Whawwtt! Is it 11?? Gunjan looked at her wrist watch in a state of surprise. Her hands flew to her mouth seeing the time. "Shitttt!! 15 past eleven…how come I slept here for so long??" gunjan felt surprised by herself.
R:But gunjan tu yahan…ghar ke bahar kyun so rahi thi???
G:Don't ask me di!! I feel like murdering him!! He is such the most irritating guy of the world.
R: But hua kya…aisa kya kiya samrat ne??
G:Di he locked the door from inside…aur phir besharmon ki tarah andar jaakar so gaya!!
"WHAT!!"…"SHITTT!!!"riddhima and armaan exclaimed respectively.
Seeing armaan's reaction both gunjan and riddhima gave him a "What do you mean" kind of a look.
"Pls gals don't look at me like that. Is mein meri kya galti hai??" armaan said making a face.
R:Ohhh shut up armaan. Just tell why did samrat behave like that.I know woh itna irresponsible nahin hai.
A:wohhh…actually riddzi…
G:Plsss armaan speak up!
A:Gunjan usne kal raat ko kuch zyaada hi…u know!! He drank too much…though maine use kaha tha ki andar se door na lock kare, but I seriously doubt ki usne kuch bhi suna ya nahin.
R:Ohhh god u guys…u r a limit! jab digest nahin hoti to itni peete hi kyun ho!! You all are just the same. Zara si koi problem hui nahin ki chal pade peene!!
A:Riddzi pls daant baad mein lena…pehle Samrat aur Gunjan ki problem solve karein…
R:What problem solve karein armaan??…u know ki aaj ki date postpone ho chuki hai.
G:What!!
A:haan gunjan…just bcoz tum aur samrat court time par nahin pahunche isliye judge ne hearing postpone kar di hai! Next hearing kab hogi ye abhi thodi der mein main call karke pooch lunga.
Hearing all this gunjan sat on the stairs. She moved her hands in her hair in distress, unable to decide what to do with her so unpredictably terrible life. The day she wanted to pass as soon as possible had stranded in her life for an indefinite period of time. She looked totally blanked out.
Seeing gunjan like that Riddhima felt too worried for her. She took armaan aside to have a conversation with him.
R: Ohh god armaan I don't know ki main tumhein kaise samjhaoon. Why don't u guys understand! jitna ye sab delay hoga utna hi Gunjan ke liye is sab se bahar aana aur bhi mushkil hoga. Main hamesha se chahti thi ki kissi bhi tarah samrat aur gunjan apne issues solve kar lein…but ab jab baat yahan tak pahunch chuki hai….I don't want ki gunjan ab aur kisi bhi emotional trama se guzre. Armman she needs to come over all this as soon as possible. She needs to move on.
A:Riddzi main samajhta hoon what you mean. Main bhi gunjan ka dost hoon aur use is haal mein dekhna mujhe bhi utna hi bura lag raha hai jitna tumhein. But riddzi tum hi to kehti ho na ki life mein jo bhi hota hai….its for the good! To hosakta hai iske peeche bhi kuch achcha hi ho. Ho sakta hai destiny samrat aur gunjan ke liye bhi kuch aisa le kar aaye jo unki life ko hameshan hameshan ke liye badal de!!!
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End Of Part 2

Feedback is anticipated frnds...as usual😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome.....................
i m short of words..............seriously amazing...........
cont soon............
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Guys I forgot to mention:

1. Here I have introduced two new characters

Sister mary(the caretaker of samrat since he was a kid) and john(Sister mary's son)

2. and though in this ff riddhima is not gunjan's real sis...but still they r so close that gunjan calls her di.
Edited by princessyashika - 14 years ago
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OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG........!!!!!!!
awesum, mind-blowing update.........luvd it......!!!!!
1st of all i luvd the relationship between riddhima-gunjan.......
they seem 2 b like REAL-SISTERS........
awww.....i can undrstnd SaJan's condition.......bechare!!
thnk god samrat was drunk & the date got postponded.......
but i was really feeling sad 4 gunjan.......she had 2 spend the whole nite outside?!......poor girl....!!!
but i thnk watever happens happens 4 good.......i thnk it all happnd so that they give a fair chance 2 thier relationship......
i always wanted 2 see KSG-MOHIT 2gether in a show.......dunno if my wish will cum true(xcept 4 the merger epi of DMG & MJHT......it was the happiest day of my life) but m surely getting satisfied thru this FF.......
awesummmmmmmmmmmm, mind-blowing, superb, fantastic update........
applauses 4 u.......👏👏👏
sorry 4 unressing late......vry sorry......😊
& HAPPY HOLI 2 U.......NJOY this day.......

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME..........

w8ing eagerly 4 nxt update......do cont soon.........😊
Edited by ekta_monaya - 14 years ago
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heyyy superb cs..n awesomeeee parts..loved it..plzzz pm me 4rm next tym😛
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awesome
its outstanding
i m in luv wid ur ff 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow yashi ur updates r being wonderful day by day in only second update i m falling in love with this FF 👏❤️ indeed concept it mind blowing but with that ur description and ur wonderful writing skill makes this OS more beautiful 👍🏼 just loved Gunjan's pain her hidden love for him and love the way u showed they both r craving for each other in their life as best friend as soulmate as i said in my first reply here they only need to discover their love its seriously would be amazing when they will start realizing and discovering their real love which is lost in their ego and clashes thanks a tone for pm now can't wait for next part 😳

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