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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_mishty

sorry to say..............but i hate sid.......literally i used to change d channel wen d scene of sid used to cum in dmg........rofllllllllll............

i never liked his childish behaviour.........grhhhh.........
ya but mayank is nice option...do u all hav sum more good option..m still confused...........i guess jay bhanushali is again a good choice...but he is too litle childish...
i want d chrctr which is fu living but serious at d same time...coz soon as ranbir'r chrtcr vil take sum twists...it shud suit him.......lol.........
waiting
waiting
waiting

how bout d guy who did d role of Bhaskar in Bhaskar Bharati
or u can use Prem from KZK
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part....totally loved it....precap looks funny....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updates
loved them both
cant wait 4 next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.
love it.
supreb..
do continue plz
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 99


as d music started...

...
Kurbaan hua teri dushmani mein yun kurbaan hua...
[...maan slipped his hand around her waist more tightly...]
...

she shocked wid his dominance...but loved dat he never asks..just does it..

Teri aashiqui mein yun
[...rested her on his and took a fast turn...]


Bekhudi mein, bekali mein, bekafi mein hua
[...his moves started becuming stronger as d music moved...]
...
his touch was literally driving her creazy making her insane...

Tujhko har dua di Har daga di Aur fanaa hua
[...she kept her head resting it backward on his shoulder...eyes closed...]

Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
[...he turned her in a jerk pulling her closer...]

Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
[...she was totally lost in his moves n dominance...]

Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
[...he was making her round still resting on his shoulder..as if she is in air...]

Rubaru tu magar Tanah hai ye jahan hoo oh
[...turned around each other..being in each other's embrace...]

Chal uthe meri khufar se
[...he pulled her more clower making her falls on his chest...]

Saanson ka ye sama hoo vo
[..his hand holding her palms...n another on her waist...]

Kya hua pal mein jaane kho gaya kyun
[..making her full turn in a jerk..holding her hand..]

Tu mila aur judai maa hua yun
[..pulling closer..moving away..again pulling closer..moving away..]
teasing her senses...

Bekhudi mein, bekali mein, bekafi mein hua
[..again pulling her wid full force still gentle...making her fall on his strong palm..]

Tujhko har dua di Har daga di Aur fanaa hua
[..roaming his hand in her scalp..teasing her skin..making her insane...]

Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
[..taking her in embrace..roaming his palm..over her cheek...]

Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
[..again turning her face him...pulling her clower..]

Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
[..turning her in his embrace..lifting up..turning around...]
...
...
...

Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
[..lifting up high in air...with her waist...]

Adaa pe, wafaa pe, jafaa pe
[..slowly keeping her down in his embrace...]

Kurbaan hua .. Kurbaan hua
[..roaming his hands over her bare back..pulling her more clower if dere any possible space...]


d music changed into a soft theme...
she moved automatically in his embrace wid her both hands snaking his neck...
n his hands snaking her waist...
from d 1st meeting onwrds...nothing was normal between dem...
it was a beautifull...strange n magical bond dey shared...
...
i dnt know his name...i hav not see how he looks...still im in his arms...feeling as if i can stay in his moment for ever...but y...y i feel like dis for dis person...aisi kya baat hai inme jo me aise khichi chali jati hu...ye konsi feeling hai...konsa ehsaas se jo hume jod raha hai...kya mujhe pyar ho raha hai...par aisa kaise ho sakta hai..jise mene dekha nahi..jise janti nahi..jiska naam tak nahi pata ..me usse kaise pyar karti hu..jis insaan ko me kal peli baar mehsus kiya..uske liye dil me etna shor...she was lost in her thouts n his eyes...
he very well knew wat was going on in her mind...he was just enjoying it...
on top of dat...she was speechless wid his dance...
...
his moves were so gentle...
she was just effortlessly moving with his touch.
his turns...d controls over his moves n also on her moves...she was just getting along wid it...
she felt as if she is a mom ki gudiya n he is giving her different shapes accordingly d theme...
sum moments ago he treated her showing his dominance over...
n now his moves were making her feeling like a princess...she is just loved every bit of it...
...
MAAN SINGH KHURANA...
wat to say about him...it was 1 of d most beautifull days of his life...
his life...his love...his dreamgal was in his arms...
he just loved her surrender to him...he loved every bit of her...
d way her almod eyes were gazing his eyes was making him move closer to her ..teasing his senses...how vil he able to stay away from her even for a second..he scared...
d thout of staying away from her even for a second amde him wild...
he pullled her very close...decreasing all d barriers between dem...

she felt as if her body vil crush into his strong arms...
dey were far away from wat was going around...
...
maan whispered - tum mujse kuchh nahi puchhna chahti...
in 1 sec he pulls her n in another sec..he is being so soft...
she loved the contradicting of two emotions strength & softness..at d same time...
...
geet whispered feeling shy - apki ankhen sab bata deti hai...
maan almost smiled..but she couldn't see coz of mask...still she felt it...
...
10:15
nupur totally bored of dat irritating boy...
went to meet mayank..ofcors dat boy was tagged wid her...
mayank n annie were dancing...
nupur - tum yahan dance kar rahe ho...aur me wahan...
mayank - tumhi ne to usse chuna..meri kya galati hai...
nupur - to tum mujhe ishara nahi kar sajte the...
mayank - ishara...isharon ki to tum baat hi mat karo...
nupur making gol-gappa face...hoyyyeee...
nupur - by god...mujhe na tumse baat hi nahi karna...dost dost na raha aur pyar payr na raha...

mayank - nupur..tum kya bole ja rahi ho...
nupur - ye achha hai..to ab me gana b nahi ga sakti...
mayank rolled his eyes...
annie - nupur ab party almost khatm hone ko aayi hai...tum ne ice cream try ki..its just osum...
n winks at mayank...
nupur - kya...wowww...challo challo ice-cream khate hai...
she moves to hav her ice-cream...ofcors d boy tagged wid her...lol

here...
dev n nisha sitting near d pool...
dev - m relly impressed haan...u all guys r just rocking...
nisha - heyy thnx buddy..cumon..ab tum annie ke bro ho..to u also can join us anytime for outing...v vil hav fun...
dev was delighted - thnx...but pehle mujhe meri home minister se baat karni hogi...
nisha was puzzled...
dev - my gf...she is a bit short tempered..but really good by heart..yaah but at d time she is very possesive...if she would hav see u dancing wid me...den u never know...
nisha cleared her throat...
dev - tumhe kabhi kisi se pyar nahi huva...u can tell me...
nisha smiled...
but litle sad smile...
dev - m sure..u love sumbody..watz d point...
nisha - jisse me pyar karti hu wo kisi aur se pyar karta hai...
dev - ohh..m sorry...
nisha - dnt b..i respect his love..if he is happy i dn't mind...actually i vil never mind...
dev was really impressed wid her understanding capability...
dev hold her hand...laced his fingers into her's n was consoling her...
dey were having deir lovely chitchat...
...
ooopsss

Nt standing behind dem..watching dem...
dev noticed her...stood up at once...
nisha was confused...
NT left from deir at once...
dev - m officially dead now...ohh goddd...i catch u later...
n ran behind her...
nisha understood dat he in a big trouble now..n laughed...

...

PRECAP :
aap jadugar ho...ooopsss :P

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love
MishTy




Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update.
loved it.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful, the dance was passionate. And how she said "Aapki ankhen sab kuch kehti he" It was too good
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey loved the update..................actually the precap was him asking her name right............but still enjoyed their dance................sorry huh but the rest of the pairs i am not bothered much.......i am only interested in maaneet................will u give us the next update dear...........actually loving this mysterious love
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Posted: 14 years ago
cool update .... bechara Dev 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 17

[ maan n geet still in party..dat is maan is still in his mask..so dnt get confused dat she saw him...she has not seen him yet...thnq ]

maan n geet...
dey were still in each other's arms...
enjoying d beautifull moments of having each other...
d soft theme was adding it up...
maan's hands still on geet waist...while geet' hand still snaked maan's neck...
dey never needed any question to ask.to query to solve...
dey knew each other by deir heart...
d magic has been created far ago.which no 1 reduce now...
dey had to b each other's..dey thout...
eyes were locked in each other...
...
maan naughtily - waise tumhara naam kya hai GEET..?????
geet - mera naam...
she took out her hands from his neck immediatly...so his hands almost loosened on her waist...
she made her gol-gappa wala face - aye lo...apko to mera naam pata hai...or me awehi soch rahi thi ke...
maan - awehi...?????

she innocently nodds her head...
maan romantically - kya soch rahi thi...
geet blushingly - wo me...aap ne mujhe chocolate kyu di...
maan - kyu tumhe acchhee nahi lagi..lao vapas karo...
geet innocently - par wo to mene kha li...
maan - hmm..to ab...
geet making face - me apko apki chocolate vaps kar dungi...
maan - thik hai..mujhe abhi chahiye...
looking at her lips...
geet noticed his gaze...she blushed wid his ownership on her...
he was so confident wid his love in his arms...
he never asked for anything..he just did it taking her for granted...
being owner of her...she loved dat too...
she again lost in her thouts getting lost in his eyes...
...
d best of his is his dominance...nahi unka haqq jatana..no his strong body..nahi unka soft nature...no his gentle touch...she was puzzled..everything about his is best...
he softly whispered in her ear - d best part about me is my lady love in my arms...
she shocked..how cum he know wat was going on in my mind...
ye such me magic man hai...m sure...
to kya inhone meri sari bate sun li..ohh godd...me kitni duffer hu...kab se man me badbada rahi hu...
maan again whispered - i love dat too...
she closed her eyes tightly in disbelieve...
he read my mind...
is he human or...heyy babaji...ye mera man kaise padh rahe hai...
he kissed on her forehead softly...
she smiled wid her eyes closed...
she was so tempted wid his touch...
she was almost drived to another world...
her lips and cheecks turned more pink...

she slowly opened her eyes...
She slowly opened her eyes...
looked front...
he was disappeared...
she looked around...
he was nowhere...he was vanished like everytime...
she got restless...where is he gone...
she didn't even ask his name..didn't even see his face...how stupid is dat...
she patted her head...
he again came like fresh rose...n went away making her life blossom...
she wanted to see him...dnt know y but she felt as if he is still dere...
staring from a corner...
she searched him allwhere...but didn't find him...
she sumwhere didn't like it...
she was angry...angry on him..or herself..for not asking anything about him...
but wen he cum in front of her she dn't feeling like asking anything..just wants to feel him...just wants to live dat moment...
her head was spinning in millions of questions...
jab agli baar milenge na..me baat hi nahi karungi...haan...she decided...

par hum kal hi pehli baat mile the...agar wo dobara mujhse nahi mile toh...mene to kuchh puchha b nahi...she scared...
ek kaam karti hu..jab ghar jaungi na..to sawalon ki ek list bana dungi...matlab mujhe aage problem nahi hogi right...she again decided...
par mujhe kab pata hoga wo mujhe kab milenge..iska matlab mujhe har waqt wo list apne sath rakhni hogi...she wonedere...
dis question ...
dat questions...
she was lost still standing at d same place...
ranbir came from back putting his hand on her shoulder...
she snapped out of her thouts blaberring - list ka idea cancel...
ranbir puzzled - kaisi list...konsi...me kisi list ki nahi janta...
geet confused - wo me...actually ...
ranbir - tune kitni pi ...
geet rolled her eyes...
ranbir - tu yahan akele kyu khadi hai...tera partner kahan gaya...bechara tera gussa dekhke bhag gaya na...
n started running...
geet ran behind him - ranbir ke bachhe...
ranbir still running- me ranbir ka bachha nahi hu..ranbir hu..geet tuze koi galatfaimi hogayi hai...
geet too running- aaj me tuze nahi chhodungi...
...
she was running...
suddenly somebody near a corner pulled her towrds himself...

he pulled her close..pinned her hands on supporting wall...
she was scared...eyes tightly closed...
maan was completely lost in her scared face...
he slowly left her 1 hand...n carrased her cheek...
her scared face calmed...
she knew its him...
her eyes were still closed...
her cheeck tunred pink wid his fingers carrasing her cheek...
soon his finger ran from her cheek to her lips...
spoiling her lipstick at d croners of her lips...

geet shivered wid his touch...
his fingers rubbed her lips totally spoiling her lipstick...
he wanted her to open her eyes...
she slowly opened her eyes...
she was blushig wid his touch on her lips...
she whispered - mujhe laga aap chale gaye...
maan smiled..whispering - bina tumhari izazat...
she blushed more..she loved d way he made her feel special...
he moved closer...
tucking her strands behind her ear...
she was moaning wid his moves...
his another hand was still pinning her 2nd hand behind her waist...
he whispered in her ear - tumhe satane ka haqq sirf mujhe hai...samajhi tum...
...
she blushed like anything...
hiding 2 spark in her eyes...
...

precaps : 1st gift...yeppyyy

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IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

love
MishTy




Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago

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