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Posted: 14 years ago
#61

i read ur story in one go....i must say it wsa totaly amazing....the feel of romance u brought in the story was mind blowing.....waiting 4 their next meet...update soon...plz pm me...plz could u make an index so that it is easier to find ur updates😊

Edited by --ANGEL-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
hey dear its an aewsome ff i m hopelessly and irrevocably in love with this ff plz continue soon n add me to ur pm list😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Awesome .pls add pm me.
pls update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wow..awsome start.
love it.
plz.add me to yr pm list.
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
awesum it is!!!wow!! pls add me to ur pm list😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
IMP - i hav created new account for PMS...so dose who wants to be pmed for my maneet updates, plzz add me..

Those, who vil not add me...vil not gets pms for m any story from further on...

Mishty_PMlist - /user/719496




Part 6


geet n rajji reached from 1 side...
d same moment annie came from another side...
unintentionally...or say fortunately...both hitt each other...
geet - ouchh...sorry..
annie - m sorry mera...
annie glanced at her...
geet gave strange looks...
annie - omg...wat a saree yaar...i just loved it...
geet was delighted...
geet - thnq...btw..ur dress is again superb...


annie - thnx...but i seriously got creazy of ur saree...
geet - if u want...dey vil b having same peice...
annie - nah...actually ye saree tumse jyada achhe kisi par lag hi nahi sakti..u r so much pretty dat ye saree ab koi aur pehane to uspe suit nahi karegi...
rajji gave a wide smile...

geet - thnq so much...btw..m geet...
annie - anwesha...u can call me annie...
counter staff - mam...aap dono agar plz thoda jaldi kar sakt to..
...
annie n geet cleared their bills...
came out...
...

he reached near d car..
his feet didn't want to move...
his heart was thudded...
a non stop smile..n blushness was making his face turning red...
he still was not able to belive dat he saw her..rather..he touched her...


geet...saree me...he whispered..
a smile teased his lips..
he raised up his hands in airs...
glancing his own hands..
n remembering d moment..
wen he touched her soft feathered waist wid his hands...
her soft hairs..
her neck..
he could keep watching his hands d whole day standing at d same place..without blincking...
he softly kissed his own palms..
he seemed his palm softer dan ever b4...may b bcoz he touched feather...he wonedered...
...
sumhow maan got in car...n moved for office halfheartedly...
his restlessness increased...
his willings increased...
all he could see was her face in dat soft light...
all he could feel was her scent he took in...

all he could hear was her scared voice...
all he could say was her name geet...
...
neeva shook his hand...
he snapped out of his thought n came to know dat he has reached office...
neeva - sir..r u ok...
maan snapped - ofcorz im...kya huav hai mujhe...
neeva scared..
maan calmed himself...
maan - actually..listen..m litle offmood 2day..so if i shout..dnt take it personally..m..
neeva - its ok sir...i understand...
maan gave a weak smile...
adi as alswz bumped into him...
maan gave a stirn look...
adi - he he he...sir aap aa gaye daatne...
maan angrily - adi...
adi - so..so..sorry sir...
maan maintained his look
...
neeva gave wide smile..
dis was d 1st time...
maan ever talked about his getting angry...
she felt nice...
kept staring at him...
maan (looking into sum files)-meeting ki sari tayari ho gayi...
she snapped out of her thout - yah sir...done...meeting vil start in 20 min..
maan moved to his cabin...
neeva to went for her cabin...
she was happy like never b4...
maan sir concerned for me...omg...how can i on dis earth vil able to hide my smile 2day...she wondered..

she took out a photo from her wallet...
it was maan's photo..
she carrased d photo saying - mujhe apki baton ka kabhi bura nahi lagta..
she blushed..
put d photo back..
n started to read about nxt meeting...

maan in his cabin...
checked d time..
3:50 PM
he opened d file...
maan...she whispered in his ear...


he turned ina jerk...
she was standing behind him wearing dat black n whire saree...
eyes closed...
scareness on her face...
looking nothing less dan an angel...his angel..
he was mesmerized looking her...
he stood up..
moved towrds her...
maan whispered - ankhen kholo geet...
geet whiepred - mujhe darr lagta hai...
maan slowly smiled.. - me hu na...ankhen kholo...
she fluttered her eyes n den slowly opened...
he was lost in her pure eyes..
he wanted to touch her...
as raised his hand towrds her pink cheeck..
she disappeared...
he restlessness increased..
wo thik to hogi na...he murmured...
den shook his head..
checked d time..
3:55 pm
he called a ditactive agency...
to find all information about her...
all he knew was her name n her face...
let dere b 100000000 gal wid d same name geet...
but its not difficult for MAAN SINGH KHURANA to get his GEET...
...
HE MOVED TO CONFERENCE ROOM...

here geet annie n rajji went to a coffee shop..
annie - waise tum karti kya ho...
geet - me...me MBA kar rahi hu...aur tum..
annie - actually me last month hi yahan aayi hu...isliye abhitak socha nahi ke aage kya karna hai..
geet - y dnt u join d same college...it vil b fun..aur tumhe b safety lagega...as u know me...
annie - i guess dat vil perfect...but i hav to talk to my bro...
geet - ya ya..sure...
annie - tum dono etni sari shopping..achanak..i mean aise hi ya fir koi function ke liye...
rajji n geet smiled..
rajji - actually hamare veerji ki shadi pass aa rahi hai...
annie - soung ineteresting...
geet - yaar ab toh wait hi nahi ho raha...aise lag raha kab shadi ke din aur pass ajjayenge...
annie - hmm..tabhi etni sari shopping n sarees n all...


geet - haan...making a face...
rajji rolled her eyes
annie - cumon..tum par sarree kamal ki lagati hai...
geet smiled n strted her bakbak...i mesn ownpraising..
rajji - didi..ab bas b karo na...
annie - tum bahot pyari baate karti ho...
geet smiled - hai na...
rajji funnily - pyari nahi..bahot saree baten karti hai ye...
annie started laughing...
geet made a face at rajji...
geet - aur haan..tum veerji ki shadi me aana hai...
annie - geet wo...
geet - me punchh nahi rahi hu..bata rahi hu..aana hai to hai...
annie smiled - achha baba..i vil cum..tum b na..ekdum bhai ki tarah ho...sirf tumhari manmani...
geet smiled...
rajji - absolutely...annie di..apko pata hai..ghar meeven papaji b wohi kapde pehente hai jo esse pasand hai..warna un kapdo ka ye kya haal karde..hey babaji...
geet made a baby face..
rajji - khana to esiki pasand ka banana hai...esse roz chocolate to chahiye hi chahiye..warna kisiko chain se jine nahi deti...
annie was eagerly listening...
b4 rajji could say further...
geet garbbed her mouth wid her hand...
geet - rajji..chup kar...aaj hi meri sari poll kholegi..aage ke liye to kuchh bachake rakh...
rajji stopped..still smiling naughtily...
geet patted her head... - mera bachha..
annie just loved deir bonding...
dey almost had deir coffee...
annie - achha ab me chalti hu...kal sunday hai na..we vil plan sumthing...
geet - ok..aur haan..ghar jarur aana..mumma bahot khush hongi tumse milke...
annie n geet exchanged deir numbers...n adresses...
said gud bye to each other
annie moved in her car...
geet n rajji also moved...

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nxt pt - part 7
IMP - reader, i need good response from u all...d lack of likes n comments every time in every update of any story makes me sad...n i dnt feel like updating...if u want more n more updates from me...dnt forget to like n comment..it takes a sec to LIKE n a min to COMMENT..dnt i deserve a min or ur time aftr d update ??...i request all silent readers to listen to my request !! THNQ !!

love
MishTy

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
i loved the updates....................twist pe twist cant wait for nxt update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Wow nice part. Loved how Maan has started seeing Geet everywhere.

Yaar, you will break Neva's heart. She is madly in love with her boss. Having a pic of his in his purse.

Good to see Geet and Annie becoming friends. I am looking forward to see Geet in Maan's place with Annie and Maan may again think that he is imagining Geet and may blurt out some nice things to her😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
annie and geet friends
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
once again awsum....
story is going beautifully...though already read it on fb, but here the pics nd colour effects make it more beautiful....continue the gr8 work....

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