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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#991

hey that was a surprise.............i didnt expect that u wud b finishing it off...............

loved the ff..........u brought up so many issues into light thro this ff.........its one of my fav..........to write abt social concerns and making it such a hit is awesome...........

the fake encounter update and him getting shot and then the epilogue was awesome............but didnt expect that he wud hv lost his leg..........that was quite surprising to me but still he managed to live it thro and made india to reach the place which has been the dream of many freedom fighters.........

thanks for writing such a wonderful ff........

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Tyro

@Tyro

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#992

lovely end...

thnx for not ending it on sad note...

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#993

Loved, thanx for the lovely update.

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#994

India now has come a long way?we are a developed state now?the BPL line has come down 30%....we are a nuclear power and member of the security council?the GDP had increased and so has the per capita income?.I am happy we have become a class less society ?no caste or religious riots?no honor killings no blasts?.we are even sending a team to the football world cup next year?. Mera Bharat Mahan Jai hind

loved it.................... hope this will be true picture in 2041 ...................... india will be the best all over world...................... i love this end............................ maaneet r really good ...................

this is the right end of this ff............... a true picture............ our maan is stron one two or three bullet could not hurt him

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POOJA KAMAL SHETH

@poojaaddis

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#995

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww pinjar was very good i loved the concept n hats off to u as in ur ff u brought the real issue eing happening in indai n wowwwwwwwww pls start other ff soon

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#996

An sorry Paulami for late comments on this one . I actually thought you would continue this in a new thread . Thankfully curiosity got the better of me & I squirmed only to find parts 33 , 34 , 35 & 36

I have really LOVED this FF . Its 1 of the BEST i read . Everything about it was fascinating ; Geet & Maan's chemistry to unveiling of social evils to strong side characters of Adi , Indu & all others . 👍🏼

I thoroughly enjoyed it ... 👏 👏 👏

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#997

PINJAR NEEDS TO END IF I CONTINUE IT'LL BE STRETCHED...IMAGINE A HOT BODY WITH STRETCH MARKS😆 IT'LL LOOK BAD.....I HAD A DIFFERENT STORYLINE IN MIND WHEN I STARTED THIS BUT ITS ENDING ON A HAPPY NOTE

I was out on a vacation and things changed on IF you ended PINJAR nice end will Read your new FF (not new any more, but new for me) later in the evening and comment I liked the end though the original one was also nice the sucide bomber killing Geet but this is not life but a Fan Fiction hope you write many more FFs ALL THE BEST

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago

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Crystal Saya

@CrystalSaya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#998

i just read ur dis ff.............i know i m quite late but i sud say u r such a gud writer............u write ur evry part in dtail............i just can say.........go on dear...............