FF-Tum Kaun Ho (Chapters 24-44)

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desilife

@desilife

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Posted: 14 years ago

#701

awww.. a happy date that ends with a good night kiss. :)

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Arshifan007

@Arshifan007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#702

wow yaar, loved this part!

can't wait to c there romantic moment!!!!

seems like we are gonna have some nice romantic moments!!!

Plz plz update soon!

Can't wait to read more and more!!!

plz PM me as soon u updated!

thanks for the PM yaar!

and btw, thank you for those videos. helped to me clear some uncleared parts! lol

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Mrs.MSKForever

@Mrs.MSKForever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#703

I loved Navy Pier cruise when I took one... it sure makes for a very great idea to be on a date venue like that... m glad u chose something that was even though a regular place yet the setting was special... the way Geet hung onto Maan when talking about her happy times, u sketched a very endearing sight of a couple who by companionship wanted to be there for each other not just for physical attraction...

the goodnight kiss was like icing on the cake... hope we get to read more of this nicey nice parts in your upcoming updates where maan and geet get comfy with their relationship....maybe a jealous geet and a jealous maan would be fun to read too :).. actually the vivid description that you give makes for a painted read to me atleast... as if I am watching them being in each other's arms or teasing each other :)

Though its like "diye ko roshni dikhana" as they say.. but you are a talented wordsmith... n the story that you have created here makes both maan and geet human n not just characters from novel...

wishing to read the next update tonight... but then its a wishful thing... :)

PS: do you read our comments? I am just confused whether my wishes turned true magically on their own or my comments were read by fairy godmother(i.e. you) and were granted :) ... I had asked for a very regular yet special date where Maan had never taken any of his previous girls n you just granted me that... the usual couple stuff they did in your last update while preparing b'fast, even that I had asked for in one of my comments.. so just wondering if u happen to grant wishes while reading thru comments :D

if yes, then in one of your next updates... plzz make Maan go alone on a business trip n would love to see Maan missing Geet and viceversa...maybe every night phone conversations between them...just chit-chatting would also look cute....n then u can make them go on a business trip together after maan makes up a flimsy excuse to take geet with him...wud also love to see how they behave when they need to be 24X7 in each other's company... without anything much to do

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#704

nice update... wow lovely date.. continue soon

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#705

loved the update ... yippeee they're a real couple now 😃

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manisha shibloll

@doosheeka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#706

fantastic update......................love the way maan took in geet's past and encouraged her to talk about it maybe to get it out of her system..................

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#707

absolutely amazing part......loved it to the core....their first official date was just too good........ccontinue soon......

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#708

Awe loved how maan took geet to a place he liked and thought special and liked the fact that he was happy that she was the only girl he could share the place with and awe geet opened up with her past a bit with maan and his endless teasing is so cute and wow they ended the date with a kiss to make them officially a real couple anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

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Nanthini

@Nanthini9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#709

I can't believe I missed this FF all this time. I read your first FF. Please add me to your PM list, if you are having one.

I read this whole FF is two days n its amazing. I love Maan and Geet's interaction. JD is adorable and Dadi is the most awesomest (if there is such word lol) grandma!

I always had a smile when I read each of the parts. One of my fav scenes was when Maan, Geet, and JD were watching the movie on JD's birthday. The ending scene was so cute and adorable like a perfect family. I could keep going and going but I have school tmr so have to go to bed :(

Wish to read more of your writing :)

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Mrs.MSKForever

@Mrs.MSKForever

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#710

any chance of an update tonite?

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