AR/ARSH FF 'Sunn Leyna' #1

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moonlight2630

@moonlight2630

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Posted: 10 years ago

#871

Hey Sam as usual mind blowing update.

The way you described ARSH emotion and feelings was superb.

Sheilpa is trying her best to hide her love for Arman but jitna woh chupane ki koshish kar rahi hai itna hi woh Arman ke samne apni iner feelings ko visible kar rahi hai .Arman bhi kahi nah kahi yeah baat janta hai ke she loves him but Bol nahi rahi hai.

Shilpa ka mind is baat per bhi set hai ki she is not a good wife jo us ne Angad ke saath kiya she blam herself for her fail marriage . She can not accept the reality ke Arman uska husband hai or us per a shilpa ka haq hai still usko lagta hai ki Arman per sirf Ridhima ka haq hai.

Arman was temperament but only he can console shilpa and comfort her .

Update was fantastic I don't want shilpa to regret his moments with Arman .it hurts Arman ka gussa hona jaayaiz hai.

ARSH rain moment was superb and the last kiss clif hanger can't wait for next update .

Thanks for pm plz update soon.

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#872

awsm update.
luvd it
veryyy nice
plz plz cont asap
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thanx for the pm
t.c...

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Anu

@tacker_karan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#873

A nice part yr

frm all d brief description of d whole story frm armaan's POV to dere conversation at night ws really gud...

I really admire d favt dat armaan has admitted to what his heart feels abt shilpa...he told her dat he cant afford to loose it...

now I want shilpa to b a bit more strong n accept her feelings in front of d world...

as d present says dat she is armaan's wife...n she need to accept it fully...I hope she starts accepting her feelings abt armaan n not feel guilty abt thm...dat is d only way dere lives wd improve...

d bst part ws d end vala kiss...n armaan's dialogue dat to add dis at d top of her regret list...

waiting for nxt part

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Rupa Roy

@-Im-Possible-

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#874

Awesome update, loved it...
Shilpa is so stupid to think Armaan as her sister's husband not her...
pagal why she is feeling guilty for loving her husband...
Now atleast she should accept him as her husband and chalo atleast armaan wants to make his marriage with shilpa work...
Hope she gives one chance to her marriage and should stop regretting her any moments with Armaan...
Oh the conversation between Arsh was so emotional, loved it...
why did Armaan kiss shilpa in anger, now she will surely regret it also...
Waiting for the next part, do update soon...

Edited by -Im-Possible- - 10 years ago

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Oindrila B.

@OindrilaVirgoan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#875

OHMYGOD...they kissed..yeeehaaa...or rather he kissed her..arey chalo koi nahi..kiss toh kiyaa!! Ye tension liya nahi ja raha tha aur..its very obvious ki Armaan k dill mein Shilpa ke liye feelings day by day aur bhi zyaada gehri hoti jaa rahi hai..jisse Armaan chah kar bhi rok nahi sakta..so behtar yahi hai ki woh deal kare apne emotions ke saath aur sort out kare Shilpa se..lekin uss taraf even Shilpa is dealing with demons of her own so ye bhi obvious baat hi hai ki uski taraf se bhi reluctance hai..lekin last wala part iss chapter ka was fabulous!! Next wala update aur bhi zyaada dhamakedaar hoga, am sure..!!
Brilliant update, Sameera 😃

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#876

Awesome part.

Loved it.

Waiting for shilpa's reaction after the kiss...

Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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Khwahish Mallik

@Khwahishmalik

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#877

awsome update... the part was really complicated.

but the way you described the emotion it feel so real. every single time i read your update it leaves a great impact on my mind.

the way shilpa is behaving is driving me crazy and the way armaan is handling the sitaution i m loving it

i hope you will update it soon because i m dieing to read the next update so plz update soon plz plz plz plz plz plzplz ...

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arsh_for_ever1

@arsh_for_ever1

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#878

OMG Sameera! How can you doubt your writing after this!!! It was a masterpiece :)

Loved it completely yaar!!!!!!!

Eagerly waiting for the next part ;)

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#879

Hey Sam..

Update naa sahi, Res tho karo..

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manjiri

@m4manju

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#880

it was brilliant update sameera...one of the main reasons i like this ff so much...it has got such an intense, deep and true bunch of feelings and longing between armaan shilpa...they are together and yet not together...it makes me feel connected to them...my heart goes for them every time i read a passage with them in same picture...two people who are meant to be but had to go through so much...itni kashish hain inke pyar mein, itni chahat hain ek dusre ke liye, and still they kept away from each other... i am sooo glad armaan is breaking it all...love u extra for that last scene...hope they sort it out by the end of that night :) update karo jaldi

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