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Posted: 14 years ago
Did i just read the word "epilogue"???????
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cutiepreet

omg...Sanna...
even though it had sad ending...this os is totally amazing..:)
it actually made me cry cuz it was realistic..:)
u've done an awesome job...seriously loved it..<3
btw the author has the same last name as me... Sanghera..yeahhh...:)



Thank youuu..!!!
I was trying my best to make it realistic..hence the realllyy sad ending..!! Thanks loadz..!!
Sanghera?? hmm..so ur a sikh too?? You should read the book. It's quite an entrertaining read once you think of it as a story and not a biography..!! 😊
Thanks loadz once again..!!
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_mjht

awesome update


but why sad ending yaar
if it would have happy ending., then it will be more and more awesome

thanx for pm dear

At bold - Because it was planned like that..!!! I think i'll risk it not being as awesome..!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

At bold - Because it was planned like that..!!! I think i'll risk it not being as awesome..!! 😆


It was awesome anyways:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ..KaJenDelena..

Heyaa Sana!
Well what can i say? That was just simply beautiful. The story flow and the story itself was so beautifully essayed, it created a thousand emotions within me. I loved it, as you know I LOVE sad endings but girl I was so sure that you were going to reunite them as you always have happy endings so I was just waiting for it, when it finished I stared at aimlessly wondering if it had really finished, It was just sooo beautiful! and Sad, i didnt expect that from you! ahaha One of my fave OS's ever!
Ridhimma- Sanaaa hun, you described and portrayed her amaizingly! she witheld so much character but with unusal normalcy in her which made her so relateable to the audience, she just connected to me. Her strength in such situation, made me admire her. I loved the fact you transmitted her thoughts which always interlocked with her hope, her dream ;). I loved the fact she always thought; "no, maybe," like she always saw the other side not just her own and the human mind was represented really well through her! Although she suffered, she has her baby with her and thats all you need, just a flicker of hope to go through life. Armaan and her wont meant to be, its just as simple as that.
Armaan- Although he done things which I usually wouldnt accept of someone whom I love but I cant bring myself to hate him. He was always a "warm" character, so real, in every way possible. He loved Neha and his life was a commitement to her and that just made me love him! "You only love once" Sooo true and that quote was represented in Armaan un-dying forgiving love! To be honest, he was just a beautiful character and I always sensed he wont love Ridhimma, I could just tell? hehe, All credit due to your writing. The part where Ridhimma held his hand and he didnt respond while he had his eyes fixed on Neha, it just defined his love for Neha and confirmed that he will never ever forget Neha. That part was beautifully written.
Sia- She is sooo cute! although a light focus was adjusted on her throughout the whole OS, you could definately tell she was a big part of all three live ( Neha, Ridhimma, Armaan). I loved the goodbye scene with her and Ridhimma, so cute <3
Neha- mmm I cant say much about her, I find her cold and unworthy of Armaan's love but I dont not why but she never striked me as a "bad" person. Yes she cheated on him, Yes she was ruthless in a way but the way she cared for Sia and the moment where he described her sleeping on top of him while he held her made me think her love was geninue and that she isn't really that "cold". I like how you brought her in the story.
Raj; He is an ass. Enough said ahaha ;)
I truly loved it Sana, All the emotional stuff had me glued to the screen, the story was just capativating. Your an amaizing writer and Thank you for commenting in my work and showering e with kind words, it always puts a smile on face. =)
ALL now I can Say is WOWWWEEE! That was truly beautiful! Love Priyanka.

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WOW!!! Your comment put HUGGGEEE smiles on my face..!!! 😆
I know everyone expected a happy ending..and at one point I actually was considering giving them a happy ending..but then...heyyy I like giving surprises..!!! 😆😆 Thank you sooo much..!! and that's coming from someone's who's writing I ADORE so much..!!! Thank youuu..!!!!
Everything you said about the characters is EXACTLY what I wanted to portray..!! I'm sooo glad you picked them out..!! Especially with Neha. I was sure people are going to hate her and yes she does deserve hatred to some extent but she isn't a bad person as such..not a negative person definitley..😃
And the part where Armaan didn't reciprocate her hold on her hand..it was PURPOSELY put there so that the readers got to know that Armaan will never feel for her the way he felt for Neha..!! Thanks loadz for pointing that out coz after reading the other comments I thought I'd really instilled fake hope in everyone..!! 😕
Thanks loadzzz...!!!
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: caprigurl

Erm I'm too sad to comment- in tears actually-I hope you'll forgive my nit commenting- it was too much of a tragic end.And in my mind i can never imagine Armaan as the character he was here-neither here nor there.

It was written wow - but one just expects something happier from fiction.Pardon me.I just wanted to be honest :)

I'm sorry??..i guess..😕
Well..actually in the book the character was the same as I've tried to portray Armaan..And I think I'll strongly disagree with you here..He was in love with Neha..and he knew what he wanted..he could not put himself with Riddhima because let's face it..he never felt the same for her or even remotley close to what he felt for Neha..and Riddhima understood..hence she went away..!! 😊
Thank youu😊
I'm glad I surprised you..😊 I knew everyone was expecting a happy ending..but sorryy,,😕
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kajenkashkriya

Sanaa!


That was beautiful.

Although heartbreaking, it showed a whole different direction to Armaan and Riddhima's relationship.

I wonder...if Armaan had known that she was pregnant with his kid, would he have let her go so easily? Without even a fight?

Could you please do me a favor? Could you please continue this? I'll only ask for one more OS that continues this one, with a happy ending...actually, any ending. I just want to see them progress in this story! But a happy ending would be preferable. VERYY preferable. :)

But if you can't/don't want to, it's all good! I'll just imagine it in my head I guess. *sigh*

It was a very well written OS! And now, if you would please...UPDATE LOOC and WK :)

Thanks love!

Kriya <33

Well..he was trying to keep her with him..even without knowing about the kid..shows how much he valued her..just not enough to fall in love with her..😆
No..sorryy...was THINKING of an epilogues.. (ANd yes Antara if you're reading this..😉 I WAS thinking of an epilogue..) but I've been put off writing one after all those comments for a happy ending..!! So I'm sorry..!! 😳
Yeah..sure will!! 😃😆
Thank loadzz again!!
Love,
Sanaa
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: roshni_A

can't say a word...as much as a great writer u r, u have made me cry the 1st thing in the morning... i will just comment on ur next OS...pls make that a happy one..

Sorryy...!!! 😕
Yeah..I think I'll have to think twice before posting another OS..!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

The story was pretty nice...although really sad too!

Though I like happy endings better byt anyways...you are an awesome writer.
I wish the almost vamp's name wasn't the same as me!!!!!!!😆

Oops..sorry..!! I'm guessing ur called Neha??!! 😕
Thanks loadz..!!
Aaah who doesn't like Happy endings?? I do too..Ia dore them..but I like to surprise my readers occasionally..!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

I'm sorry??..i guess..😕
Well..actually in the book the character was the same as I've tried to portray Armaan..And I think I'll strongly disagree with you here..He was in love with Neha..and he knew what he wanted..he could not put himself with Riddhima because let's face it..he never felt the same for her or even remotley close to what he felt for Neha..and Riddhima understood..hence she went away..!! 😊
Thank youu😊
I'm glad I surprised you..😊 I knew everyone was expecting a happy ending..but sorryy,,😕
Love,
Sanaa



You really don't need to be sorry for writing such a great piece of work Sanaa! 😕

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