Stardust - Link to thread 2 on pg 1 - Page 32

Originally posted by: ..Maitree..

Third RES 🤣 EDITED.

Okay,Um. I seriously don't know what to say and What not to say. This OS was BEYOND Fantastic Sanaa.I mean,it made me Smile and it made me Cry.One way,it was Heart-Touching and the Other way,it was Heart-Wrenching.How do you Possibly write like this? God. YOU SHOULD TEACH ME!

I loved the Start..How you do it with Riddhima remiscinating her past,I felt so bad for her yaar :( Why did he not Love Her! The description you gave of Armaan Was My,My..Enough for ANYONE to fall for him,even if the one hasn't seen him! He's Perfect,he's gentle and he's decent..He's handsome he's hot he's the Best..Aaah I can go on and on! ARRRMAAAN MAAALLIIKKK!

They all envied me, for having a hot, good looking, thirty year old boss, with a name itself to die for, Armaan Mallik. However, no one mentioned those magnetic, electrifying blue eyes that always drew my own hazel ones towards them. Those marbles had every emotion reflected in them. But the most dominant one was pain. Eons and eons of agony, which I had been trying my hardest to erase ever since I gave my heart out to him

EEPS! I LOVED this Paragraph!His eyes,Muummaa! Haayye! Okay the next bit was Really Sweet :) The way he cared about where she lived and why she shouldn't live there,Typical Armaan wala Dill :) I love sia! She IS So Cute <33 Adorable Like her Father! But Urgh,I HATE RAJ! HOW DARE HE!! I don't want to comment on Armaan's past,Neha and Raj. Seriously.It made me Cry when he Cried! Sanaa! Kyun rulaya use! :( :( :( :( :( I was happy,although,that Riddhima was there for him! Then the next part..Gasp..I don't know what to say for this again.You wrote everything so beautifully,his feelings and hers,the next morning,her pain,how he said he wanted to give them a chance..Beautiful <3

That was my dream wasn't it. To have a loving family. Maybe he'd be happy. Maybe the arrival of this new life would rid him off the miseries of the past life. Maybe he'd actually start loving me! Sia had a sibling! Well, she was going to have one anyway, but now Sia had a sibling with my blood! I hoped he (or she) would get the adorable blue eyes and dimples of their father. In fact, he could look completely like their father which would just make me adore him more! Why was I so sure it was going to be a baby boy?

This para was Adorable :) The way she was happy about having Armaan's child! The way she had weaved all of her dreams together,Aaah! then that Neha part,and everything finished.I was sobbing like MAD at that point.Did he have to love HER and not Riddhima?He could see how much She Loved him..But Still? Why was Life so Unfair to her! He cared,that was evident by how he reacted on seeing her sad. But he didn't understand..I wish she had told him she was Pregnant! I wanted to know what reaction he'd have!

The next part RIPPED me apart! It was So Heart-Wrenching Man! *Sniff* She told him,that he could always love Neha,while she could always love him.I could IMAGINE the scene infront of my eyes,It made me Cry like Hell,she was leaving Everything behind because her dream was Shattered,and Armaan couldn't stop her because he didn't love her!

As I shut the door behind me, I broke down once more while the sun light spread its warmth over my numb, lifeless body as I walked to the gate. I felt my insides being ripped apart with the decision I had taken. I had no idea where life would lead me, but I had to continue it. For the sake of my baby, whom I would still adore with all my life. I looked back once more at the home that had been my dream. But now, I was forced to shunt it aside, my broken dream.

All I got to say is,Even though it doesn't have a Happy Ending,Its one of the Best Oneshots I've ever read.Beautifully done,Sanaa.I don't have any more words!
-Maitree.

Originally posted by: coffeearoma

res!! :D edited!

hey saana!

that was so emotional...am kinda glad u didn't go for a happy ending cuz that wud have been kinda unrealistic...i mean Armaan just can't fall out of love now can he? And the way u penned down Riddhima's n his pain was so good...i mean all in all i LOVED this OS...and now even am gonna try and read the book :D

cheers!

Rucha :D

Originally posted by: Sanaa629

THANK YOUUU!!!

I'm sooo glad you understand..!!! It's such a relief..!! Honestly..!! I was beginning to think only very few people were happy with me..!! 😆

Ohh great..do read the book..!! It's a good read..!! Only warning..I nearly cried after reading what she did to Jassey..(That's basically Armaan in my ff..!!) 😭

Thanks loadz...!!

Love,

Sanaa

Originally posted by: niknavyu

res sanaa dear i am too busy but still am commenting on this because i am very angry😡,seeing ur pm i was like get ready for another happy ending,like almost till i reached the end of it i dint realize that this would have such a sad ending,i mean reading the 1st and 2nd installment i had lots to comment but now reaching the end i dont have words i am crying(disadvantage of being over emotional), now i just need to say onething and that too in bold

MAKE THIS INTO AN FF AND PLESEE GIVE IT AN HAPPY ENDING,YOU HAVE LEFT IT AT A VERY GOOD POINT ,DO CONTINUE IT AND MAKE UR REDERS HAPPY

sorry if i have hurt u with my comment,but hope u consider my opinion i know that u have given it a justified ending but still😃i mean u have depicted the emotions beautifully,but my week heart doesnt accept it lol

love

nikki

Originally posted by: zARqaa_X

res :D *edited* OMG i knew it! i knew armaan was going to say something that would break riddhimas heart and make her not tell him about the baby! i felt sooo sorry for riddhima! i literally feel like crying for her :'( i did expect a happy ending.. lol i thought armaan wud find out somehow and change his mind but the ending made me cry😭 poor riddhima she has to face all this alone with no ones help

i dont hate armaan coz its not his fault he doesnt love her... love just happens wen u meet the right person which for him was Neha...plus riddhima didnt stop him that night so she was equally responsible about the pregnancy...but its still soo sad! :'(

pllzz pllzz tell me theres a second part!! pweeezz for me!😛 i really want a second part!

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Okay, so just got down to reading your note, and also read the comments which compelled you to write it!

People, seriously, just because AR don't always get together in the end, doesn't mean you guys start disliking the story! Because then, technically, J.K. Rowling should have an entire hoard of haters, including me, for killing off Sirius, Fred, Snape, Lupin, Moody! But its the story and the whole concept that I loved!

And if you guys didn't like the OS because of the sad ending, then, well, its really your take on it, so I ain't commenting on that, but as a writer, it is really disheartening to read those types of comments! And guys, its a STORY. Please, really, learn to treat it like one! Its like DMG all over again! I'm a fan too, and I adore AR as well, but not the extent that I forget that they are, after all, characters! Don't let them create impacts on your lives! They are characters, which entertained us, and made us believe in fairy-tales, but lets face it, life isn't a fairy-tale! Its LIFE! Do NOT take these characters so seriously so as to get your self impacted negatively! Just treat a story like a good read! And yeah, we feel flattered when our work make you laugh and cry, but seriously, we would like comments along with that! We might intimidate you with our pieces so that you guys are speechless, but really, just because you guys cried because of the sad ending and didn't like the OS because of that, its wrong! It is, really!

This is just my opinion! No offense to anyone! But since I'm a writer, I can't bear unfairness towards one of those great ones!

Originally posted by: Simmy003

RES!! I have to read the whole thing, it'll take me like umm a whole day to that!! lol jkjk I'll edit sooon :D

EDIT

😲 So I read your OS called My Dream, and now I can't stop crying! Why did you do that Sanaa??? -__- That was one very sad OS! 😭 I was happy one moment and then you just made me cry the next...but, but I knowww, all stories don't have happys endings! Which means getting over it, so let me just wipe my tears now, before I start talking about your OS ;(

Okay, first off, can i just say you're AMAZING at writing. Cause I felt like I was watching a legit movie while I was reading your OS! You wrote it so so so so very beautifully, it's not even funny, like how are you so GOOD?!?!? 🤔 But anyway, I won't compliment you a lot, you can always do better you know 😆 JK you're awesome!!!!!!! :D

Now the story, it was outta this world! The Creative minds you gots, I likes it a lots hehe I made it rhymes for youus :P btw you likes my english or should I say ingles? ;) Okay I'll stop :| Yea so as I was sayinnn, that was a wonderful story line, and heartbreaking of course </3 But sadly, I loved it. I know AR didn't end up together but it made sense when you said that you only love once.. true love. I kinda hated Armaan but then I was like ehhh, he loves his wife soo yea I shouldn't hate lol. But I felt terrible for Riddhima, she was pregnant! Awww, poor girl, but I loved how she was so strong! I was like yea that's what's up, girl power right there! Haha but the last goodbye was so heartbreaking! </3 I was sobbing...her broken dream

THANKS Sanaa, for making me cry! 😡 Lolol but I can't help but say I lowwwed it! Words can't even describe how amazingly you wrote it! Now you owe us a happy one, so get on it girl! Make us smileee 😃 lol

Love, Simmy <3