Stardust - Link to thread 2 on pg 1 - Page 35

Originally posted by: frumaan

though i was expecting atleast ammy to knw abt ridz pregnancy, i had expected it to be a sad one. it was amazing/ u justified ur ff greatly.lucd it

Originally posted by: vaishiksg

oye u shud hav warned yaar... pls giv it a happy ending.. i wont b able to sleep in peace... i dun like such shots n such kind of ff's.. it really depresses me.. n then i hav this thing of closing myself frm the world .. like i did in aanya's fic - heart beat... arghhh u shud hav warned yaar... i wudnt have read it.. this is so wrong...

@all ff writers pls warn b4 u write ff's... at times its impact is really bad on ppl especially for ppl like me...

Originally posted by: nyxx

Whyyy the sad ending?

I wish Armaan would have atleast opened the envelope or if there was another part to this. Because i truly feel that you could have shown another side to Armaans point of view or his growing love for Riddhima or maybe im just imagining too much and there probably wasnt a strong feeling from his side. Oh well nice OS though it was just too sad for me to accept and read. I was expecting perhaps another twist in this tale and that even if AR dont get together, youd leave us with the thought that perhaps Armaan will find riddhima and make her his with unconditional love.

Originally posted by: belle_moi

I am so angry with u that i half dont feel like commenting, man it made me sooo sad, okay, i admit, i cried. But the thing was so good that i have to comment. And i wanna leave a long one, but my academia is not allowing me to do that. Sorry, but sometime in this week i will definitely comment. Btw, I hate u.

Love,

Antara:(

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Sanaa *whatever your surname is*, I HATE YOU! Nah, not because of the sad ending, but because of how you get me hooked on to your pieces every time! At least don't do this to me during my boards nah, missy!

Anyway, I for one, am glad that you didn't give that happy ending! Not everything turns out in your favor in life?! And this is a bitter fact you have to accept like Riddhima did in this OS! And I think the end was pretty justified! People don't readily fall in and out of love, you know! This was way more realistic than those normal hunky-dory stories!

Loved the OS! Especially Armaan's daughter! I love the name by the way, its one of the ideas for my child's name if I ever have a daughter. Call me stupid, but yes, I do think of such things! Hey a girl's allowed to dream when she has absolutely nothing better to do in life! LOL!

And when I was reading the OS, I thought it was somewhere connected to that book you told me about! And then I was like, oh yeah, this Neha female! What a 'W'itch! Stupid loser broke my Armaan's heart! Kill her!

Can't wait to see you getting to updating LOOC and WK! You better update something today. I'm sure you don't want me to kill you again. Or rather, Armaan. Vitrually, be it. No pressure!

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Okay, so just got down to reading your note, and also read the comments which compelled you to write it!

People, seriously, just because AR don't always get together in the end, doesn't mean you guys start disliking the story! Because then, technically, J.K. Rowling should have an entire hoard of haters, including me, for killing off Sirius, Fred, Snape, Lupin, Moody! But its the story and the whole concept that I loved!

And if you guys didn't like the OS because of the sad ending, then, well, its really your take on it, so I ain't commenting on that, but as a writer, it is really disheartening to read those types of comments! And guys, its a STORY. Please, really, learn to treat it like one! Its like DMG all over again! I'm a fan too, and I adore AR as well, but not the extent that I forget that they are, after all, characters! Don't let them create impacts on your lives! They are characters, which entertained us, and made us believe in fairy-tales, but lets face it, life isn't a fairy-tale! Its LIFE! Do NOT take these characters so seriously so as to get your self impacted negatively! Just treat a story like a good read! And yeah, we feel flattered when our work make you laugh and cry, but seriously, we would like comments along with that! We might intimidate you with our pieces so that you guys are speechless, but really, just because you guys cried because of the sad ending and didn't like the OS because of that, its wrong! It is, really!

This is just my opinion! No offense to anyone! But since I'm a writer, I can't bear unfairness towards one of those great ones!

Originally posted by: -dawn

Although it was sad.. it was Amazingg.. Beautifully written. I loved it

Originally posted by: neha2607

hey ,

First of all i must say you are an awesome writer, though i am commenting here for the first time but i have mostly read all your work in IF as well as DMG blog.

Being a writer the most important part in to connect to the readers which your story does, the way you express your character's feeling is beautiful. It forces the reader to go through the same emotion and phase as the character is.

Now coming to the story i completely agree with you, being a writer i know all love stories cant have a happy ending but that doesn't make it unsuccessful.

And that's what the OS was about, when you love someone you don't expect the person to reciprocate your feelings but still you go on loving that person but still there is a part of my heart which wanted a happy ending, which ofcourse wouldn't be realistic but that what human nature is all about.

It was one of the finest piece of writing i read, and the biggest proof will be that it made me cry. The way Riddhima tried to erase Armaan's past and get him rid of his pain even if it mean sacrificing her own happiness, nothing mattered except for her never dying love. I just wished Armaan knew that Riddhima was pregnant with his baby, not because it would unite AR but because somewhere he should know. Coming to Neha [ my name] i kind of pity her, she didn't fully recognize the person who loved her like crazy and instead choose Raj [a 🤬] but i do feel bad for her bcoz at the end she did realize her mistake and rejected Armaan's offer to come back.

Whereas, Riddhima is concerned i'm happy she decided to move on without forgetting the love she had for Armaan, truly she was taking many precious memories and a precious gift with her in the form of her and Armaan's baby.

As, far as Armaan is concerned, i just don't know whether to feel bad that he lost his first love and still couldn't get over her although he tried.

All the 3 characters have their own misery but the beauty with which you described their emotion made me fall in love with this OS and most importantly the strength with which all three whre living their life was commendable.

Do write more but plz next time i want a happy ending [i get depressed whenever i read a sad story related to AR/ArSh]

tc

with love,

neha [shona]