**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: RB81

hei,
very nice update..enjoying daksh n aish's fight..loving it..maasi is pairing up everyone..great maasi..do continue soon..
luv,
ramani

thank u very much😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dude, dat ws awesome!!!!!!!!! update soon...............
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Asin.pkyek

hey dude, dat ws awesome!!!!!!!!! update soon...............

thanx asin
will update tomorrow😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice really ..
i m waiting for daksh and shlok talk each other ..
wel daksh and asmin scene was cute ..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: similuvs_ashiuv

hey nice really ..
i m waiting for daksh and shlok talk each other ..
wel daksh and asmin scene was cute ..

thanx simi🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Trishuuuuu, you make me love this fanfiction more and more with each and every update! 🤗 Aww, that weight lifting part was SOOO AY-ish!! Asmin, meri help karo.. mujhse uth nahi rahe 😆..and BOOM, she falls on him! Awww !! 😳

Ahaa, everyone thinks that Asmin and Daksh ke beech kuch hone wala hai! ;-] Pehle Meera..phir teacher..phir Aanchal! 😆

Arjun likes Aanchal too? Cute! 😃

Shlok ki entry Abhay-style! And poori ladaii Kabir-Abhay style! I'm SOOO looking forward to thisssssssss!
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOL Trishu I loved it! Too damn good! except i don't know who to cheer for here. I loved A-Y and I love M-S. kahaan phassa diya yaar!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@komzie & Akhi-thank u guys🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part-9
(Daksh came out frm the princi's office.................then Rohan came there)
Rohan:"dude.......aapne dad se baat ki?"
Daksh:"nahi yaar vo new guy............wats the name?"
Rohan:"kon Shlok?"
Daksh:"ha shlok.......vo andhar hai or ussk liye dad mujhse baat nahi karna chahte hai"
Rohan:"i told u k ye tumpe vari parega"
Daksh:"watever..........lets go"
(Daksh & Rohan left)
(in princi's office)
Princi:"vo mera beta tha Daksh............i'm sorry ki usse ne disturb kia"
Shlok:"it's ok....no problem"
Princi:"so.........go & enjoy ur classes"
Shlok:"yes sir"
(he stood up)
(in other side Aish walking in the hall way..........thinking about the gym class scene😆)
Aish:"mai to usski madat kar rahi thi fir mai giri kaise?..................ha,Daksh ne hi mujhe khicha hoga....................damn Daksh.........abhi tumhari khabar leti hu"😡
(she's walking through hall..............then cross the princi's office....at the same time Shlok came out frm the office)
(Aish did not noticed him bcoz she was very angry on Daksh & she left............but Shlok can feel her)
Shlok:"Asmin?.................main tumhe feel kar sakta hu.......tum yehi kahi ho..................i have to find u"
(he started finding Asmin)
(in Raichand's house)
Chand:"Haseenaaaa............kya Shlok college gaya hai?"
Haseena:"ha...................aaj usska pahela din hai..............i hope ki vo koi garbar na kare"
Chand:"aaaaahhhhhhh...............................hume college jakey usse milna chahiye...............wat do u think?"
Haseena:"noooo.................usse akele handle karne do"
(Chand & Haseena's as useal expresions)
(in cantin...............Daksh was sitting with Rohan & Angad)
Angad:"Daksh,maine suna k tum or Asmin...................
Daksh:"just shut up..................aisa kuch nahi hai......................or issme meri koi galti nahi thi................vo jaan booch k mere upar giri thi"
Rohan:"but tumhe kya sachme lagta hai k ussne ye jaan booch k kia tha?"
Daksh:"yes,i'm very sure................atension pane k liye ussne mujhe use kia"😡
(suddenly Aish came there)
Aish:"Accha,to main tumhare upar giri thi saab ka atension apne k liye?"
Daksh:"then wat?"
Aish:"hello,mujhe koi shouk nahi hai tumhare close aney k liye....................and BTW,mujhe to lagta hai ki tumne mujhe khicha tha"
Angad:"woohoho miss.............Daksh aisa kyu karega?"
Aish:"main tumse baat nahi kar rahi hu langur"
Daksh:"how dare u?tumne mere frnd ko langur kaha"😡
Aish:"kyu?sirf tumhara frnd nahi tum bhi langur ho"
Daksh:"aapna moo thora soch samajh k khola karo....varna....
Aish:"varna kya?tum mujhe maroge...........oooo main to dar gai tumse.............i'm so scared...............dekho mujhse mat uljho tum nahi jante ki mai kya cheez hu..............issi liye aapni limits me raho.............do u get that?"
(Daksh didn't said anything....just giving her chalenging types expresions)
(then Anchal came there)
Anchal:"Asmin.............tum firse inse baat karne aa gayi?...........chalo yaha se"
Aish:"Daksh main firse kahe rahi hu k mujhse mat ulajhna"😡
(Anchal start pulling her)
Anchal:"chalo Asmin"
Daksh:"ha ha dekh lenge........
(Rohan & Angad was shocked to saw their fight)😲
Rohan:"wow............aaj tak Daksh ko ladko se iss tarha ladte huye dekha hai aab ek ladki se......
Angda:"dude.....ussne mujhe langur kaha"
Rohan:"tum toh waise bhi langur ho"
Angad:"ey...tu bhi shuru ho gay"😡
Daksh:"guys shut up..............ye ladki mera dimag kharab kar rahi hai"😡
(in hall way...............Anchal talking to Aish)
Anchal:"Asmin tum kyu bar bar Daksh se baat karne jaati ho?...................tumhe vo pasand nahi to kyu bar bar usske samne jati ho?"
Aish:"mai to...........
(suddenly she noticed at Shlok who was sitting on a bench)
Aish:"vo kon hai"
Anchal:"shayed aaj naya aya hai"
(Aish start walking at him)
Anchal:"kaha jaa rahi ho?"
Aish:"arre vo naya aya hai or hum bhi naye hai to baat karne me kya jata hai"
(she stood beside him)
Aish:"hi"
(Shlok turned to her.....................then again he feeled the same feeling)
Shlok:'hi...tumhara naam kya?"
Aish:"i'm Asmin...............par saab mujhe Aish bulate hai"
(shlok started thinking)
Shlok:"akhir tum mujhe milhi gayi"😍
(Daksh was passing by..................he saw them toghter)
Daksh:"ye wacko uss Shlok k sath kya kar rahi hai..............kahi mere khilaf planing to nahi kar rahe hai ye dono?.............i've to find out"
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey awesome update
u knw what u hav confused me which one to support daksh or shlok
both of them are cool dudes
and yahan pr bhi feelin wala part jo hamesha abhay ke saath hota hai strt ho gya
bt to day no arjun and aanchal scene(arjaan scene)
bt i likd d total update
and i really wish ashi and shlok plans against daksh........... cz in dat way shlok and ashi will come close to each other


nd really its lovely update👏

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