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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Trishhh, I read half of this update BEFORE I went to school, and then I had to leave coz I was getting late..and throughout the school, I was sitting there impatiently, huffing and moaning, wanting the school to end sooon cause I wanted to complete the part. 😆


Lmao .. Daksh doesn't like Shlok because he thinks that Shlok will steal the limelight off him? 😆 I really liked how Shlok 'sensed' Ashi when he came out of the room...I REALLLLYYY adore Shlok here, though I love Daksh a bit more, 'coz he reminds me of Yuvi. 😃

Ahaa, Daksh and Ashi. Their fights are always hilarious .. tumne mujhe giraaya, no, tumne mujhe kheencha! 🤣 Ashi called Angad langoor? Aww! 😆

Yay, Ashi-Shlok .. FINALLY. Haha, Daksh thinks that the world revolves around him. 😆 Like you said to Liz .. Ashi will recognize Shlok, and I think that she'll hug him or something .. and Daksh will see that, 'coz he was planning to keep an eye on them!

Greaatttt goinggg! Continue sooon..I want an update tomorrow ! =)

thanx akhi
it means a lot 4 me🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved all the three parts trisha .... sorry for replying so late .. didn't manage to take out enuf tym 2 read n comment ...
loved daksh-aish's gym scene -- totally crazy 😆😆 glad you brought shlok to mount ... ab daksh ka jealousy ka temp. would be rising 😆😆' langur ' was 🤣wat an idea !! he was thinking they were plotting against him 😆 loved meera-aish's interactions .. arjun's imagination was really sweet 😛 i loved everything about the updates 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh trish .. we die yaar .. update soon plz .. cant wait ..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-10

(Shlok & Aish was talking & Daksh listening at them)

Aish:"Shlok?"

(she's feeling strange & strangly looking at him)

Shlok:"kyu?naam pasand nahi aya?"

Aish:"no no'..actually mujhe class k liye late ho raha hai''''so,nice to meet u Shlok"

Shlok:"nice to meet u too"

(he was looking at her like he was know her for many years ago)

Aish:"bye'."

(she left)

(Shlok said himself)

Shlok:"mujhe aapni feelings ko control karna hoga"

(took a breath & he also left)

(then Daksh said)

Daksh:"mujhe iss wacko se hi pata karna padega k ye dono kya baatey kar rahe the"

(Aish walking,followed by Daksh)

(when Aish came closer to the class door then Daksh shout at her)

Daksh:"Asmin'''ruko"

Aish:"now what?aab maine kya kia?"

Daksh:"tum uss ladke se kya baat kar rahi thi?"

Aish:"kounsa ladka?"

Daksh:"mere samne zyada smart banne ki kousis mat karna ''''vohi new entry"

Aish:"oh u mean Shlok? he is such a nice guy"

Daksh:"whatever'''tum usse dur rahogi"

(suddenly Shlok came there)

Shlok:"ye kisse mile or kisse nahi ye batane wale tum kon hote ho?"

Daksh:"isska partner"

Aish:"oh hello''.main sirf tumhari gym partner hoon or tum kiss haaq se ye saab puch rahe ho?"

Daksh:"main tumhe Shok se pahele se janta hoon"

Shlok:"mera naam Shlok hai"

Daksh:"listen mr.whatever'..mujhe tumhare naam se koi farak nahi parta''''.tum Asmin se dur rahoge"

(Aish started flirting with Daksh)

Aish:"kyu Daksh?........tumhe jalan ho rahi hai kya?"

Daksh:"what?.......dekho mujhe koi jalan nahi ho rahi hai"

Shlok:"so?.........tum Asmin se dur raho''''.Asmin chalo class k liye der ho jayegi"

Aish:"han"(again she's feeling strange)

(Shlok & Aish enterd in the class & Daksh looking at them very angrily)

(after college Anchal standing on road for lift)

(Arjun passing by'''.he stoped his car after Anchal)

(he started thinking)

Arjun:"oh no!kahi fires mera vahem to nahi?..............kya Anchal sach me yaha hai?"

(he turn back for Anchal)

(Anchal surprised to saw him there)

Anchal:"Arjun?tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?"

Arjun:"pahele batao kya tum sach me yaha ho?"

Anchal:"kya matlab?tum kya kahe rahe ho?mujhe samajh me nahi aaraha hai"

Arjun:"btw,tum yaha kyu khari ho?"

Anchal:"vo actually mujhe ghar jaane k liye lift chahiye thi to''.

Arjun:"main tumhe lift de deta hoon''''.chalo"

Anchal:"okey"

(she sat in the car)

(then they gone)

(in the car)

Arjun:"suno Anchal"

Anchal:"ha.."

Arjun:"kya tum aaj mere office ayi thi?"

Anchal:"main or tumhare office?.....nahi to'kyu?"

Arjun:"nahi baas aisehi"

(he was something like blushing)

(Anchal also staring at him)

(in Raichand's house)

(Shlok entered through the main door'''Haseena came there)

Haseena:"so'''.kya hua college me?usse mile?"

(Shlok was very happy)

Shlok:"ha mom'''..usse mila bhi or baatey bhi ho gayi)

(it was a cute smile on his face)

(Haseena looks scared)

Haseena:"what?.........kya ussne tumhe pahechana?"

Shlok:"I don't think k ussne mujhe pahechana hoga'''.maine usse aapna pura naam bhi nahi bataya hai"

Haseena:"kya matlab?"

Shlok:"matlab maine usse sifr aapna naam bataya hai'''..sirname nahi"

Haseena:"lekin mujhe lagata hai k vo jaldhi samajh jayegi''''.vo itni bhi nadan nahi hogi"

(Shlok smiled)

Shlok:"pata chale to chale but main ye pata lagne nahi dunga ki main kon hoon or kya hoon"

Haseena:"I hope so"

(in Aish's room'''.she was thinking about Shlok)

Aish:"Shlok'''ye naam kuch jana pahechana sa lag raha hai,lekin yaad nahi aaraha ki kaha suna tha"

(Meera entered in the room)

Meera:"hey sweetu wasup"

Aish:"nothing''.bass kuch soch rahi thi"

Meera:"kya?Daksh k bareme?"

Aish:"massiiii'''.aapko kuch or nahi sujhta hai kya''''.mere itne bure din bhi nahi aye hai ki main uss Daksh k bareme sochu"

Meera:"to kisske bareme soch rahi thi?"

Aish:"u know aaj college me ek naya ladka aya hai'.Shlok"

Meera:"one sec one sec''kya kaha Shlok?"

Aish:"ha"

Meera:"ye naam to''..

Aish:"wohi to'..main bhi confused hoon'''.kahi ye vow ala Shlok to nahi?"

Meera:"ho sakta hai'''..usska sirname kya hai?"

Aish:"yehi to problem hai'''..main puchna hi bhool gayi''''kal college me puch lungi'''''fir pata chalega k ye konsa Shlok hai"

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sorry 4 late update
i was so busy thouse days
hope u guys like it😃
Edited by 00123trisha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first.. yipeee. Trishu darling, wowiee update. Daksh getting jealous. Asmin cant remember Shlok.. waiting for the next update. pls hurry up ok. ur ff is driving me crazy.
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was nice update soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
love it yaar .. finally u give update after a long time ..
wel hum toh wait kar kar ke mar hi rahe the ke tumne bacha liya .. wel nice this one too ..
wait for the next update .. and try to soon update ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Ramona & Shelly-thank u sooo much🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: similuvs_ashiuv

love it yaar .. finally u give update after a long time ..
wel hum toh wait kar kar ke mar hi rahe the ke tumne bacha liya .. wel nice this one too ..
wait for the next update .. and try to soon update ..

sorry simi.......actually thouse 3 days i was too busy...it was my school's annual sports & function
btw,thank u😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Trishuuuu, me LOVES you. 🤗

Awww, I love Shlok here. He was super adorable. ''Kyon, naam acha nahi laga?'' And he gotta control his feelings 😳... Trishuu, don't make me love him more than Daksh. 😆

Ahaa, Daksh is jealous! DAKSH IS JEALOUS. ''He's such a nice guy'' ''Whatever, tum door raho usse!'' Ooooohhh, authorative much? And my favourite bit .. ''Tum hote kaun ho ye batane wale ki vo kisse milegi and kisse nahi ?'' ''Uska partner!'' It made me laugh and go 'aww' at the same time. 😃 And the way he was ordering Shlok around, telling him to stay away from Asmin .. This is my favourite update till date! 😃

Aanchal and Arjun were cute! ''Tum aaj mere office aayi thi!?'' 🤣 Little naive Arjun. 😳

I loved the convo between Haseeeena and Shlok .. In the future, Haseena and Chandu might pose a serious threat to Ashi and Shlok. 😔

Ahaaa.. Meera! ''Main kuch soch rahi hoon.. '' ''Daksh ke baare mein?'' 🤣 Ashi will recognize Shlok .. yay! 🥳 Phir Daksh ko serious wali jealousy hone wali hai .. 🤪

Continue sooooon .. ! 😊

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