AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131

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Apoorva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#641

ok.. as i read it.. it was beautiful.. after i read the whole.. it was then i realised.. that i was actually crying.. it was so beautifully written.. thnks a hell for updatin dear..!!!

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Minahil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#642

omg poco!!!!!

this was an emotional breath taking chapter . it was so emotional that it almost made me cry seeing abhay and pia like this and this is all due to that b**** mathili😡. i just want to see abhay and pia again with each other and mathili losing him again😊 ... love ur ffs and continue soon❤️

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Untitled001

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Posted: 14 years ago

#643

I was so happy seeing him so possessive. Telling the truth I knew Abhay would snap at one point. Give him a break he doesnt know why he feels for Pia in a stronger way than he feels for Mauthili. He is not angry with Pia I guess. It feels more like he is angry with himself. 😔

Him not knowing anything is so much fun at times but then at the others... Its just painful. Just dont make her scream during the stitches or something. Never had to do that so i wouldnt know. And just make sure that Abhay finds out. And and and- that Mac and all the other guys on the face of the earth flirt with Pia so that Abhay can get jealous and explode. 😆

Loved both the updates. I couldnt comment because i want on for a while. It was great. Update soon okay?

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#644

updated my comment on page 84. (: sorry it took so long, i had school etc.

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sosweetsumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#645

okay officially in the first part i was happy that abhay felt jealous and in the second sad

do continue

bye sumi

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I-love-Roses

@I-love-Roses

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Posted: 14 years ago

#646

What a beautiful and lovely part. Update soon. I jst can't wait more for the passionate abhiya.

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#647

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_
res!

-EDITED-

when i said 'update soon', i didn't expect you to update a day after, LOL. not that i mind or anything, infact.. i was quite happy when i saw the update thingy in 'my posts' ..but i had to reserve 'coz i had school & blahh blahhh n i couldn't even stay still without reading and commenting here. :P

mac. i like this guy ..is he going to play some important role or is he just gonna make abhay explode? well, the latter seems unlikely since the 'fire' in abhay's eyes scared him. LOL, misha and sam are already betting he'd not be standing on his feet anytime sooner if mac carries on like that. 😆 i lovee zeenu .. damn she is adorable. she actually popped her bubblegum on her mouth when she saw kabir! lmao, i'm lookin forward to zeenia-kabir. 😳

Mac is only going to go into a washing machine.😆...Zeenia is going to flirt , seduce Kabir and get all naughty with him. Kabir will be initially shocked as he doesn't know that Anushka has left her body but Piya will tell him the truth. 😳

speakin of kabir, poor guy is not only gonna get the shock of his lifetime on seeing anu like that (or would he not? if daksh told him everything, did he tell him about anu's body being posessed? or daksh doesn't know about it himself?) well, either way, sam and kabir man up? damn, i don't want them fighting..over abhay? wasn't pia & metz enough? LOL.

AP were cute. they're all .. erm, i don't know? mills n boons material? he touches her, she blushes. moony eyed etc. typical. yet, you play with your words so awesomely and you manage to create a rough intense atmosphere, like, when abhay snapped at pia because he didn't understand what was happening to him because of her..and he told her to stop lookin at him like that. aw, that was cute. 😳 he actually raised his hand to slap her? 😲 oh well.

continue soon.. the-next-day-soon soon, not the next-week-soon. :P i want the update where the guy asks mish for a lift naoo. :P

Kabir doesn't want to fight with Abhay. He just wants to talk to him but since he is a slayer, Sam will not trust him and say that 'once a slayer , always a slayer'. Abhay-Piya have to be raw and intense because that is the flavour of their love story. 😃

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TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: janu1610
pocco i wanna cry . really i was happy when i saw her in his arms but now again they are back to square one . I really feel pity for them . I wanna throttle the neck of that B**** Maithli . how 'd she even declare it a love . Its not even near to love its to feed her ego .I loathe her i really do.

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ritu

Thanks a lot, Ritu.😊 Well, what can i say. Yeah, Metz is plain wicked and plain obsessed. But her punishment lies in her mistake itself. Abhay was never hers and never will be. He is falling in love with Piya eveb when he is supposed to be loyal to Maithli.

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Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#649

so yeah poco am back!! (sam did miss me😳)

as told u, had no much time to reply.. but was reading it.. as usual, it was the best thing i cld have done during my not so exciting train rides🥱

so am reviewing after sooo many parts.. last 2 parts wer left, and now am done...

and wer do i strt from now😆

okay..

let me start with my current fav (ofcourse after sam)

ZEE!! goddess... u have made this character to adorably lovely, and funny and crazy and eccentric and hot. and the names she gives people!!! thts awesome too. i mean, i guess she is just the life here.. idk, wht uve thot while u put all that in her, but she just makes me go in awe for her.. as the bully and the naughty witch she is, she gets more and more adorable in every update of yours!

next was so much to go through.. currently am going through this cute abhiya phase.. u knw why i feel the cuteness here.. its all coz of tht one dialog u gave.."my mind mite forget u, but my heart wont," and tht one so very well fits in every situation tht has taken place uptill now between abhiya.. am glad that abhay finds the difference between metz and pia.. he feels the emptiness when pia isnt around.. and u have shown the whole part so nicely.. i thot, tht at a peak, id cry buckets coz of abhays memory loss, but thn tht didnt happen, u handled the whole story so beautifully.. to tell u the truth, i wasnt sure i ur idea of doing this to them was good or not, but now, the whole story is molding in to beautifully..

and the best part i like is how each and every part of this ff r anyhow related to the main plot!!

going back to abhay.. he is so powrful, every1 around him knows this except he himself...

and wht bout anush? am missing her already now.. but then i dnt want zee to leave so early too :P

ok.. i dont knw idf i missed something, but can u just remind me how did abhay become a vampire if u have written tht part in ur ff, and wht bout abheer, ive strted liking him, last wen i reviewed he was to come, but he isnt here yet😕

samish☺️☺️☺️ oh my god!! sam☺️☺️ sam is geting hotter day by day.. i missed so many samish scenes.. i just caught up with them..

and u knw wht.. hw much ive been praying for t to get eternal salvation and leve this ff for good, in the last part i actually loved sam and t..

actually this is also coz the way its written, she knws it tht sam loves mish, and all alll the reasons put up, and equally sam is in the confusion mode..

so ill be still fine with tanushree till sam falls in love with her totally..

one more thing to ask u, while sam and t' happen, i hope the whole samish bond wont disappear.. am loving them as friends, and tht scene in the canteen, where she held his hand was awesomely written! hope the whole feel of samish remains the same..

idk if am missing nething.. except kabeer danish panch.. ive nt missed nething i guess...

oh yeah.. all the bonds uve been showing are touching my heart directly.. sam pia, ABHAY MISH, pia mish.. sam abhay..love them

waiting to see some of kabeer and sam's interaction too.

anyway..plz cont soon.. ill try my best to review on time!! :D