AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 66

Poco! please accept my apology for not commenting earlier...wasnt online much and I missed a lot of updates it seems...just caught up on them all and so many things have happened!

Abhay-Piya : I simply the the way you are portraying Abhay's turmoil...they way he is being pulled apart into two sides -literally- because of what he is supposed to feel for Maithili and what he truly feels for Piya. I like angst this memory loss had added to their story...especially how Abhay cant understand why he feels all these new emotions for Piya- the protectiveness, the jealousy, etc.

And finally Kabir and Pancchi have come to know the truth. I would like to especially mention Ch 58 here...I simly loved the Kabir killing Danish scene...you described the action so well! Danish's end was very sad especially his moment with Pancchi.

I really like the new dimension you have added to T in ur FF...but her story is just so sad...while I know her end is going to be tragic i really cant wait to see how you show it. Poor Sambhav...he doesnt even realize that the empathy he feels for T is her doing only...but I like the slow build up that is happening between him and Misha.

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

Emotional and beautiful...once again i am mesmerised by the last part of your update...He clearly knows his feelings for Pia are not normal...what more will it take him to realise that he loves her Poco?...Zeenia was hilarious when she saw Kabir...hasn't she seen enough hotties...i mean Sam and Abhay...so is Kabir planning to hurt Abhay?...i hope not...loved it Poco..love you

Thanks you, Nidz. Abhay will not 'realize' anything. He will just fall in love with Piya all over again. Zeenia flirts with everyone but Kabir's really got her attention. Kabir will not hurt Abhay. 😊

Originally posted by: ssshh

Its superb update di,yapii abhay jealous😉,I love this when he snatch piya from sam and mac.😆🤣

I have also a strong feeling that abhay will break his leg before compitition🤣.

Finally abhiya start fighting.poor abhay he does n't know that he has to cheat matty aunty🤣.

What will zeenia do with kabir😉.poor kabir he will going to get "jor ka jatka"🤣.plzz tell me ,who will be dance partner of sam.i hope misha will😳.plzz don't bring "t".😡,she use sam's emotions.

Superb update😊.

Thanks honey. Mac will surely get punched once or twice by Abhay. Zeenia Kabir ki life set kar degi.😉...Sambhav's dance partner will be Natasha. 😆

Originally posted by: N_NS

Beautiful update di... How do u manage to portray all emotions of ur characters so well? Loved each and every word...
Do update as soon as possible, I can't wait to read the next update!!
Luv,
Nidhi😊

Thank you. I don't do anything. The characters speak for themselves.😳

Originally posted by: katiehiwatari

ok.. as i read it.. it was beautiful.. after i read the whole.. it was then i realised.. that i was actually crying.. it was so beautifully written.. thnks a hell for updatin dear..!!!

Thank you so much for the kind words and the appreciation. 😊

Originally posted by: mino1997

omg poco!!!!!

this was an emotional breath taking chapter . it was so emotional that it almost made me cry seeing abhay and pia like this and this is all due to that b**** mathili😡. i just want to see abhay and pia again with each other and mathili losing him again😊 ... love ur ffs and continue soon❤️

Thank you, honey. This is just a test for Abhay and Piya. To re-emphasize that they can never be separated. 😳

Originally posted by: Paradisekiss053

I was so happy seeing him so possessive. Telling the truth I knew Abhay would snap at one point. Give him a break he doesnt know why he feels for Pia in a stronger way than he feels for Mauthili. He is not angry with Pia I guess. It feels more like he is angry with himself. 😔

Him not knowing anything is so much fun at times but then at the others... Its just painful. Just dont make her scream during the stitches or something. Never had to do that so i wouldnt know. And just make sure that Abhay finds out. And and and- that Mac and all the other guys on the face of the earth flirt with Pia so that Abhay can get jealous and explode. 😆

Loved both the updates. I couldnt comment because i want on for a while. It was great. Update soon okay?

True. Abhay is angry at himself because he knows he no longer has any control over himself as far as Piya is concerned. Mac will get some dishoom-dishoom. 😆...I will update it today. 😳

Poco - any chance that you will be updating today?

Originally posted by: Ritzie

Awesome Poco. It is a treat to read about Abhay reacting on instincts. I smile when I imagine him with your words. You are a word magician Poco. Yeh Mac ko idea nahi hai ki woh kahan panga ke raha hai. And Zeenia is not all-naughty, I see a sensible person in her. She is much more intelligent (and witty) than she portrays her to be, Bus thodi naughty hai. And Abhay Abhay Abhay - 😍 What do I do with this jealous Abhay. awww dimaag ka toh pata nahi par uska Dil hai ki maanta nahi. Bachchu tum Maithili ko nahi Pia ko ditch maar rahe ho.😆

And when I see Sambhav now, I seem to be forgetting that he is the most dangerous werewolf and a leader of 500 werewolves. And why do I have a feeling that he is forgetting himself. He is no more that ugly, ruthless beast he was earlier when Maya was there. What is happening? Is it too much T or too much Misha?

And yaaayyy...yyy - Zenia meets Kabir. Again, eagerly waiting for the blast.

Originally posted by: Ritzie

Poco - any chance that you will be updating today?