~Pyaar~ ( Geet and Maan)

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maaneet_rox

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

the beginig is very luvly n funny
nd it seems really interesting..
add me in ur pm list plzzzz

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

awsome ..love geet.

do continue plz

add me to yr pm list.

thank u.

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

amazing part pls cont soonnnnnnnnnn pls do pm me

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

great...👏

But you are posting every part in a different thread..Please give link to the next part at the end

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goodgirl5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

nice ff plz continue soon

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iluvblue0812

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Vaidhumom

great...👏

But you are posting every part in a different thread..Please give link to the next part at the end

hi! i know its annoying that i dont post the link....but i cant post the link because im a newbie and a newbie cant post a link due to safety reasons until they have 25 posts and i only have 6 posts! so we'll have to wait!! sorry!!!

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Sanzy|Sanz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

NICE FF

CON SOON

PLZ ADD ME TO UR PM LIST

THANKS

CON SOON

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Lakshmi

@Vaidhumom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: iluvblue0812
hi! i know its annoying that i dont post the link....but i cant post the link because im a newbie and a newbie cant post a link due to safety reasons until they have 25 posts and i only have 6 posts! so we'll have to wait!! sorry!!!

OOps sorry... I didnt know the rules myself as I'm also new bee,,,,anyways, thanks and good going👍🏼

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iluvblue0812

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

PART 2
Maan- Yeh ladki to bolti ja rahi hain! Mujhe pagal kar degi!
Geet stared at him.
Geet- Pagal vi karlungi aur tumhare dil ki dharkan bhi baraongi! Mera ta jadu hi aisa hain.
geet winks.
Maan smiles alittle bit. Geet looks at him,
Geet- Oyee! You smiled! Lagda aa edda flirting karke aap sadu nahi rahonge! Aapko main change kar dongi! Actually, maine kitne lok ki help ki hain, par aapko help karke ta bahut maza aayega!
Maan- Pata, tum ek bak-bak machine ho!!!
Geet- BAK BAK MACHINE??? Eh sadu, aapko Punjabi kahan se aa gayi.
Maan- mera Naam MAAN SINGH KHURANA hain aur main Chandigarh se hoon, Punjab ka hoon.
Geet- Oh!!! Ye to bahut acchi baat hai!Chandi-
Maan interrupts her
Maan- CHUP BILKUL CHUP!!! tum bahut bolti ho!!! tumhe to bolne ki koi tameez nahi hain!!
Geet had tears in her eyes.
Geet- Gadi roko!
Maan- arey geet main to bas gusse main vaise bol parra. I didn't mean it.
Geet- kise se aise baat nahi kiya jata. please stop the car.
Maan- yeh highway hain aur vaise vi tumhara college aane vala hain, i'll drop you.
geet nodded
maan dropped geet off.
Geet- Thanks alot. I know you had to go through alot of trouble.
Maan smiled.
Maan- ek punjabi larki jo pehli vaar delhi ko aayi hain, uski to help karni chahiye.
Geet-aap kaise jante ho main delhi pehli vaar aayi hoon?
Maan- bas, pata chal jata hain.
maan drives away as geet smiles.

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precap- college drama+ job interview

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iluvblue0812

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

CHARACTERS
Geet Handa- An 18 year old modern/ traditonal girl from Punjab studying in Delhi. Fun loving, bubbly, Beautiful, smart.

Maan Singh Khurana- 25 year old business tycoon from Delhi. HOT, charming yet angry.

Savitri Devi- Maan's Dadimaa. Very kind and wants the best for her grandson.

Dev- 22 years old. Maan's younger brother. Kind, handsome and loving.

Rano- Geet's Mother.

Kuldip- Geet's Father.

Aditya- Geet's friend who is attractive but Geet doesn't really like him that much

PART 3
As Maan drove away, Geet smiled. She felt butterflies in her stomach. She happily went to class. In the hallway, there she met Aditya.
Aditya- GEET!!!
Geet- OH! not again. (geet mumered)
Aditya- Geet! Avoid kyun kar rahi ho? Bhool gayi??
Geet- Main tumhe kaise bhool sakti hoon?!! Tum vohi ho jo mere 8 ghante gari mein the! Memory itni bhi boori nahi hain!
Aditya- Yaar, tum larkiaan bhi na kitni chir chiri hote hain.
Geet- Chir Chiri es liye hoon kyun ki meri gaari nahi chalti aur ek hot stranger ke saat yahan aana parra jiske attitude bahut hain.
Aditya- Dude, chill.
Geet- You're right, I should forget it. I'm going to class! Bye!
Aditya- Bye!

Geet goes to class and makes a few friends- Riddhima, Armaan and Siddarth ( sid)
Geet and her friends have coffee with each other at Cafe Coffee day.
Geet- Arey yaar! Mera interview hain job ke liye, mujhe jana parega.
Riddhima- Geet! Koi aur din nahi tumhe mila?
Armaan- Yeah! Kitna maza aa raha hain!
Geet- I know guys! Par I have to work! Agar aaj nahi to kal kabhi nahi!
Riddhima- Theek hain. Lekin aaj raat 9:00 PM party hain. Vahan aana.
Geet- Party? Par studying ka kya?
Armaan- NO EXCUSES yaar! Just relax, enjoy and party.
Riddhima- The dress code is a saree- jeans mat pehankar aana.
Geet- Saree? How tacky.
Riddhima- Come on! You'll look hot!
Geet- Okay! I'll be there.

Geet goes to Khurana Constructions to get a job. She wears a formal black dress up to her knees. She looked lovely with her hair down as they were straightened.
As she enters, Sasha and Tasha stare at her.
Sasha- Excuse me? Aap yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Geet- Main job interview ke liye aayi hoon.
Sasha gives her a mean look.
Sasha- Vahan first door main jao, humare sir vahan par hain.
Geet goes and as she walks, she gets busy in adjusting her bio-data and goes into the office cabin without knocking.
Maan- Yes, aap kise puchkar andar aaye ho?
Geet looks up. Maan's eyes pop wide open.
Geet and Maan both- TUM???
Geet- Tum..tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Maan- Main Maan Singh Khurana hoon, yahan ka boss. Ye meri company hain.
Geet- WHAT? Aapki company?
Maan- Haan! Meri company. Ab ek nayi shuruat karte hain. Vo jo door hain vahan par, vahan jao aur knock karke andar aayo.
Geet- What? Par Main-
Maan- No but! Vo karo jo main kehta hoon.
Geet looks at him and goes outside and knocks the door.
Geet- May I come in sir?
Maan- Come in. Let's start the interview.
Geet nods.
Maan- Where are you from?
Geet- Punjab.
Maan- Why did you choose to come here for a job?
Geet- Well, my friend told me about it and I thought that it would be reasonable to work here at certain hours and also maintain my study schedule.
Maan- Have you worked at any other place before this?
Geet- No, this is my first.
Maan- Do you feel that this job is tough for you as it is your first job?
Geet- Not at all. Even if it is, I feel that I should face difficult situations to avoid future problems.
Maan- Tell me more about yourself.
Geet- I hail from a Punjabi family. I studied in Chandigarh for 2 years and I passed 12th grade from my hometown. I did a beauty course for 1 year and I'm a very fast texter!
Maan- texting? What does that have to do with this?
Geet- Oh, well you told me to tell you about myself and that's one important thing!
Maan- Okay, I'm impressed by your interview. Tum kaafi acchi ho aur aise employee mujhe chahiye.
Geet smiles. Geet- Am I hired?
Maan- Yes. Assistant architect.
Geet- Assistant? wow! Thank you sir!
Geet shakes Maan's hand.
Geet- When do I start?
Maan looks at a few files.
Maan- Uhh...tomorrow, 3:00 in the afternoon to 7:00.
Maan signs Geet's contract.
Geet- 4 hours of constant work?
Maan- You get one break at 5:00 for 15 minutes. That's it. Sign this.
Geet signs her contract and leaves.
Geet leaves the cabin and then jumps in excitement. Sasha looks at her.
Sasha- Excuse me? Itna kyun chila rahi ho?
Geet- I got the job as Assistant Architect!!! Yay!
Sasha stares at her with evil eyes.
Sasha- Assistant Architect?
Geet nods in happiness.
Sasha- Iska matlab hain hum log ek dusre ke saath kaam karenge kyun ki main Head Architect hoon.
Geet- Oh great! Mujhe Miss Attitude ke saath kaam karna parega.
Sasha- You better watch it. Attitude main tab dekhaongi jab tum kal aaogi.
Geet- Watch out for me. Asli attitude to main dekhaongi.
Geet and Sasha faceoff and Geet leaves Sasha astounded!!!

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Precap- The party!!!