Destiny's Play-Pg 118,128,136, 144 (26/2) - Page 51

i liked all three parts

wow Opti...way to go...

loved the updates 😛
thank you

WOW Opti.tripple dose of your lovely potion to cure my flu self today. After all not bad to be home sick. Love the virtual world of internet.

I had this dreaded feeling about Maan been drunk and act the same as that cheapo. Nonetheless, morning always bring glory to the new day. Loved the little commitment, care and communication.

I have a feeling that you will make me change my opinion about marriage.
👍🏼

Originally posted by: sindu555

Opti ...

i lubs you hun,....

thanks alot for the triple dhaasu updatess.....

loved Maan's concern for Geet ... MAan ko bhi kuch kuch ho raha hai ... haye!! ❤️

continue soon

love

Sana

Thanks Sindu. Maan is attracted to her beauty but is not yet in love. It will take time understanding his true feelings.

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

LOl....I think you have the whole thing kinda ready....then why do we have to wait till the next day...?????? OK...Sorry I can't complain today...you gave us 3 parts in record time....But what can I do...your writing is so so damn interesting...not my fault if I keep asking for more.....

No I don't have the whole thing ready as I will be cutting down quite a bit from the original version and I have to change a few things here and there regarding the physical attributes of the characters. So I am converting portion by portion. Thanks for liking my writing.

Originally posted by: anilu

awesum updates😊 maan is caring alright😊 and arjun really needs to be taught a lesson😡 waiting to c wats in store😊

Yes, Maan has a caring heart which he keeps well hidden most of the time. Once you win your way into his heart, he'll do anything for you. Arjun will get his lesson although it will take time.

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Awe maans concern for geet was so sweet and ergh hate that jerk arjun putting his own unborn baby's life in danger and awe geet learning how to cook so she can make maan happy and loved the latest chapter it was was sweet how maan didn't want to show his concern anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

I guess Maan's brash action of the previous night gets forgiven by his care the next morning. I was expecting a few tough words for his action of the previous night. Arjun will stoop much lower later on.

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

yay another 2 parts!

maan is actually so caring

i can see them falling in love soon

con't soon!

another update today maybe?

Maan is caring but will not show it very often. They will fall in love but it will be a gradual process. The attraction is there but love will come in time. No, no more update today. Will update tomorrow.

Originally posted by: holyangel

that was awesum.... 👍🏼

can we have more.... 😃

Thanks holyangel. You'll get the next one tomorrow.