~deewangi~ maaneet ff THREAD 8 PT 70 PG 142 27FEB - Page 51

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

superb update already waiting for next

A poem for deewangi, not written by me but a famous urdu poet (Syed Wasi Shah)
zakhm muskuraate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
dard bhul jaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
shabnami sitaron main phool khilne lagtey hain,
chand muskuraate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
umer kaat di lakin bechpana nahi jaata,
hum diye jalaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
ghantian si bajti hain, raks honey lagta hain,
dard jagmagatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
teri yaad aaye to neend jati rehti hai,
khwaab toot jaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per
jo sitam karay aa ker sab kubool hain hum ko,
hum khushi manaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
ab bhi teri aahat per chand muskuraata hai,
khwaab gungunaate hain ab bhi teri aahat per
tere hijr main hum per ek azaab taari hai,
chonk chonk jaatay hain ab bhi teri aahat per,
dastakain sajaane key muntazir nahi rehtey,
raastay sajaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per.
ab bhi teri aahat per aas laut aati hai,
hum diye jalaatey hain ab bhi teri aahat per


such a beautiful poem..
loveeddd it...
❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
muskan
you update at odd times in the night hours
these lines are for your updates

Hum apni Deewangi se jaane jaate hain
Wo apni Be-Rukhi se pehchaane jaate hain
{berukhi as you update after many me crazy}

Roz miltey hai lekin, kuch Kehte Sunte nahi
Mere saamne wo Meri Dharkan barhaane aate hain
{you update daily but seeing you online increases my heart beats}

Shab-Bhar Intzaar mai Hum Taare dekha karte hai
Sawera hone se pehle wo chand bujhane aate hain
{only for the words written by you ib the night I log on in the mornings}

Bas Ek Nazar ke liye Hum Din-Bhar taraste hain
Wo Shaam ko Gamlon ko Paani pilaane aate hain
{I check now and then through out the day but you write only at late evenings}

Mere is Haalat pe Hansana nahi MUSAFIR Tuu
Ishq mai sab ke Saamne aise Zamaane aate hain
{may be you will laugh at me but don't it's my ishq for your Maan that makes me crazy}

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Posted: 14 years ago
Kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai usse bhasha ka gyan nahi
Mano vho gungi ho
Khuwab hai, ichhayen hai magar izhaar kaise kare? Batana to aata hi nahi
Ek juwala mukhi hai bhitar
Jab ubbar aata hai vho phat jaata hai
Naino ke zariye anchal mein basara sajata hai

Kitni baar, kitni raaten yuhi taman ho gai hongi

Abhi tanhai thi kali raat thi
kab ujala ho jata hai usse koi khabar nahi

"Khoi khoi yeh ankhen, din mein madhosh tumhe karti hai
Raat mein, tanhai mein, har roz yeh barasti hai"

these lines are for your Maan in Deewangi

Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

Kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai usse bhasha ka gyan nahi| Mano vho gungi ho| Khuwab hai, ichhayen hai magar izhaar kaise kare? Batana to aata hi nahi|

Ek juwala mukhi hai bhitar| Jab ubbar aata hai vho phat jaata hai| Naino ke zariye anchal mein basara sajata hai|

Kitni baar, kitni raaten yuhi taman ho gai hongi| Abhi tanhai thi kali raat thi| kab ujala ho jata hai usse koi khabar nahi|

"Khoi khoi yeh ankhen, din mein madhosh tumhe karti hai
Raat mein, tanhai mein, har roz yeh barasti hai"

these lines are for your Maan in Deewangi



really nicee.... ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

sullikalil idarpatta en idhayathai..thanthu vidu un vizhiyin amudhaththai
entangled in thorns my heart... give me the essence of eternity of ur eyes
Engu thediyum kittavillai un mounam pol oru sollum..
after searching for so long Ii couldn't find a word equivallent to ur silence
Ivvarigalai arpanikkiraen unakku ...
I am dedicating these lines to u
illai un ninaivugal ennai kollum..
else ur thoughts will kill me
Un imaigalai moodinai Ennai irul soozhndhathu
u closed ur eyes darkness sorrounded me
Un moochu kaatru pattae ennai sooravazhi aatkondathu..
just with the touch of ur breath ..I get into a twister

Purindhaen Thelindhaen
I understood..I got cleared
Innum un idhaythil thaan vaazhkiraen endru..
I am still living in ur heart
Kangalai vizhithaen..
I opened my eyes
Unnai kangal kaanavillai
my eyes couldn't see u
Idhayam mattum unnai kandathu.
only my heart felt
Unnai unara.. Unnai mugara.. Unnai kaana.. Purinthathu
to feel u, to smell u, to see u ..i understand
En Imagal moodi irukka vendum endru..
I understand my eyes have to be closed
Imaigal..
my eyes
Moodi irukka vendumendru.....
HAVE TO BE CLOSED..

another tamil poem by naturally krazy
SWEEET POEM LIKE OUR STORY REALLY GOES WITH IT................................. LOVED IT MUSKAN....... I M IN LOVE IW*H ALL YOUR FFS
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Posted: 14 years ago
Please update karo na
me waiting

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Posted: 14 years ago

ek doubt hai.......who send tat rimi????

why she is here nd wats her motive????

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Posted: 14 years ago
that was amazing muskan
muah muah loads of kisses for u😳😳😳
rocking update👍🏼
deewangi is just getting in more intense now😉
n both the poems r beautiful😊
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago

this part is really nice 😊i'm waiting for the next update of both deewangi and truly magical

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Posted: 14 years ago

this part is really nice 😊i'm waiting for the next update of both deewangi and truly magical

and add me to the pm list for all the current FF's u r writing

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