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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting concept!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ok i have some request to made please can anyone tell me suitable title for this ff...

updating in few minutes..
Edited by raginisharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you so much for reopening
i really felt disheratened when you didn't update ven the first pat..
i was so looking forward to it..
but after so many days gone
you still didn't turned up.. so i thought that.. you have also... discontinued from this fff..
but i am very very much happy that you are back...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part1

"I can't believe you guys tum logo ka ek din bina lade nahi jata kya" this one from our januable junjan who is frustrated from fighting between two person whom are jaan of the gangand they are none other than our mayank and nupur …
Sa: seriously guys hum log bachpan se sath main hai but abhi bhi tum logo ki dushmani khatm nahi hui.
But our mayor are staring at each other in anger and they are talking in mind like serials…
Ma: nupur tumne mujhse panga lekar acha nahi kiya ab dekho main tumhara kya haal karta hun.
Nu:mayank ke bache main tera khun kar dungi tu bas dekhte jaa.
Ma:khun kar dungi tujhe abhi pata nahi kisse pala pada hai.
Nu:tu bhi mujhe abhi janta nahi hai ki nupur kis bala ka naam hai.
Ma:mujhse acha kaun janega ki nupur kis bala ka naam hai.
While all other mem. of gang are looking at them and thinking what is going on in . diya interrupted their gazing season.
Di:tum dono bata rahe ho ki hua kya ya phir hum logo yaha se jaye..
Be:tum kitna sahi bolti ho diya…
Di: shut up benji.
Nu:is mayank ke bache ne kisi our ke liye mujhe se ladai ki..jabki is baar meri koi galti bhi nahi thi.
Ma:haan to isse ye bhi pucho ki aisa kya hua jo maine ise ghajda kiya.
Now all face to nupur for explanation.
Nu:meri koi galti nahi thi mujhe tumse baat karni thi is liye maine …..cut by is liye madam ne pure college libraray ko hila ke rakh diya …..or librarian ne mujhe pure 1 month tak library main na jane ki punishment di hai ..ye to wahi baat hui kare koi bhare koi…
Nu:isme meri koi galti nahi hai tum meri baat hi nahi sun rahe the to main kya karti tum to apni .apni….
Haan haan bolo bolo nupur kya benji said excitedly..
Nu:..apni gf ke sath busy the
It comes like bomb to all …what mayank or gf said by excited samrat ..congrats dude..
Ma: giving sadu look ..wo riya ki baat kar rahi hai or wo meri gf nahi hai..use main bus kuch sum samjha raha tha or ye madam ko raha nahi gaya or itnedher se boli ki pass khade peon k ek ear se sunai dena band ho gaya hai…
Nu:dekho mayank isme galti tumhari hai..agar tum mujhe pehle hi bata dete ki …..meri mayapari kaha rakhi hai to mai .chali jati waha se.
Ma:mayapari chaiye tumhe …to suno kal mujhe bahut thand lag rahi thi to maine sari ki sari jala di…
Nu:jala di tumne meri sharukh ki sari yade jala di..mere bachpan ka pyar ki sari yade jala di ..tumne mere raj ko jala diya ..tumne mere pari ko jala diya……in anger nupur throws sandwich on mayank but mayank ducks it and it hit to uday who is enjoying her mid day meal….
Ma:dekho nupur ghussa hone ki jarrorat nahi hai main tumhe la dunga tumhari mayapari…
Nu:la doge jante ho maine bachpan se apna sapna sanjo ke rakha hai usme …..or tumne kitni asani se jala diya ..
Hold on guys all shouted together tum dono bache ho kya abhi bhi bacho ki tarah ladte ho…
Sa:tum dono apna ye ghajda ghagdi kab khatm karoge..
Now both mayank and nupur turns and stand facing their backs..
At very moment mayank cell buzzed…seeing the caller mayank goy happy…
Ma:hai dad .aaj apko apne bte ki yad kaise aa gai..
Shasank: beta tum or nupur yaha lonavla aa jao ..kuch jarrori kam hai….
Ma:kya hua dad nani to thik hai na…….
Ye sun kar nupur bhi bechan ho jati hai …
Nu:mayank nani ko kya hua batao na…
Ma:mujhe baat karne dogi nupur..haan dad kya hua..
Shasank:tu jyada sawal mat puch bus tu or nupur yaha aa jao..
Now mayor got tensed they love namarata more than anything in their life …
Seeing them tensed samrat console them and all gang decide to accompany mayur..
Sab log lonavna ke liye chal padte hain ..mayur and sajan in one car and rest in others while samara driving and gunur are in back seat .gunjan concoling nupur….
When they reach lonavla to nany place mayor rush towards the Namarata 's room….where shashi ,shasank and their wife are already present …..
They stopped mayur outside the room…..
Shasank:ruk jao tum dono abhi doctor andar hai unhe aane do …now all are waiting outside…
After some time doctor come outside …….
Do:dekhiye shashi ji aap kimother ka cancer last stage par hai ..ab koi umeed nahi hai ho sake to unhe khushi khusi vida kijiye …
Nu:aap ye kya keh rahe hai koi ilaj nahi hai iska…
Do:nahi beta unhe jitna khushi de sakte ho do main chalta hun …ye kuch dawiya hai inhe de dijiyega ….
Now all rushed towards namrata…..
Shashi: maa ab kaise hai ……
she lifted her head and scan the whole room …and call mayank and nupur near her…..
Na: mere bacho is duniya mein mujhe tum dono se jyada koi pyara nahi hai …..
Nu:haan nanior hume aap se jyada koi nahi…kunmayank …mayank nodded in a yes…
Na:to tum log meri aakhri khawish puri karoge …..
Ma:haan nani aap boliye to sahi hum jarror karenge…
Namarata takes mayur hand in both hand and placed nupur hand in mayank hand ..all are confused except their parents…
Na:mujhe tum dono ka naam ek sath bolne mein acha lagta hai mayur ….kya tum in dono naam ko ek karoge kya tum nupur or nupur tum mayank se sadi karogi ..yehi meri akhri icha hai……
Now all are tensed they know nupr and mayank never say yes to marriage ..
But all got surprised..
Mayur :haan dadi hum dono sadi karenge saying that nupur placed her another hand on namrata hand and mayank kept another one in bottom…..
In evening dadi called rest of the gang..
Sa:nani aap kaise hai
Na: smiling samrat main dekhna chahti hun tumhe log love guru kun kehte hain..
All:matlab
Ye jo tumhare dost hai na ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hain but inka ego itna bada hai ki kabhi sath nahi honge so main tumhe ek kaam de kar jaa rahi hun sadi ke baad in dono ke beech achi understanding tum logo ki jimadari…
Sa:nani aap kahe to pyar hi karwade smiling brodly…
Na:unhe ye khud realize karne do tumhe sirf unki help karni hai…..
Sa:ok dadi hum ye karenge ….
Now the screen divided in three parts first in right and left mayur and in middle rest of gang……..
Please it's a request please ignore spelling mistake ..and bear this halka fulka updates till 4 or 5 updates jab tak sayad mujhme kuch immotions aa jaye………

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Edited by raginisharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start DI...
very cute part...
i loved it lodsss...
loved d way MayUr was fighting in der mind...😆😆😆
it was very cute...
awww...
Nupur ne Mayank ko apne 1st love se durr kar diya...
ab woh apne first love aka library ke bina kese rahe ga...😆😆
feeling bad for der nani...
bt m glad dat now dey r gonna get married...
will b eagerly waiting for d next parts...
loved it lodsss...
love u DI...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago

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