an mayur ss .part 3(P9)

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ruchi

@--Ruchi--

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Hey ragini...nice FF..

Liked the character sketch and introduction.

So Mayank and nupur both born on the same day...

Interesting...!

About part 1 its good and hilarious...reminded me of

sweet and light moments of MJHT.

Thanx for PM and cont soon.

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shreya

@AblazedEnigma..

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow itzz really nice

reminded me of mjht days,,,

the gang,mayur fights n all..

really nice start..

n yeahh thankss 4 pm

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tasnim.

@tasnim.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

wow ragini
awesome awesome start
i alwz loved mayur fight
u know- they r looking very cute while fight with each other
mayur fight was fabulous
wah wah -maan gaye nani ki demag ki
fantastic start
ive enjoyed a lot.
plz do update next part soon

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crazymayurian

@crazymayurian

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wow

luvedd it

really exciting

do write soon

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arjunratirocks

@arjunratirocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

so nice story and update i loved it plzz continue soon

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mayuloveu

@mayuloveu

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

so cute and lovely. continue soon

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maria

@Maria.

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

very cute update

it reminded me MJHT

loved it

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...EhSaas...

@...EhSaas...

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

hey Ragini very nice concept and 1 part was really nice 😃

MayUr are really cute 😳

and i am happy that you will write like MayUr will fall in love by their own realisation 😳

without anyone help 😊

waiting for next part 😊

update soon

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ragini sharma

@-DreamzGirl-

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: 18anila1
Awesome start DI...
very cute part...
i loved it lodsss...
loved d way MayUr was fighting in der mind...😆😆😆
it was very cute...
awww...
Nupur ne Mayank ko apne 1st love se durr kar diya...
ab woh apne first love aka library ke bina kese rahe ga...😆😆
feeling bad for der nani...
bt m glad dat now dey r gonna get married...
will b eagerly waiting for d next parts...
loved it lodsss...
love u DI...🤗🤗🤗

thanx anila ..will update tomorrow hopefully otherwise day after tomorrow fix..

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Mayank and nupur k liye mein to bas... kehna chahungi...

Mayank nupur ko aise hi describe karta hoga

aur nupur bhi mayank ko usi k andaaz mein aise jawaab deto hogi...

Main Akela Raat Ka Melaa, Tu Kahaan Se Aai
aise Mein Tu Bhhul Ke Rasta Mujh Se A Takaraai

ye Ladaki Zara Si Deevaani Lagati Hai
mujhe To Ye Gudiya Japaani Lagati Hai

chaabhi Se Ye Chale, Chaabhi Se Ye Ruke
chaabhi Se Ye Hanse Rooth Jaaye
aisi Naazuk Hai Ye, Galati Se Ise
koi Chhule To Ye Toot Jaaye
kaanch Ki Hai Gudiya
aafat Ki Hai Pudiya
kisi Shaitaan Ki Naani Lagati Hai
ye Ladaki Zara Si ...

ham Akela Raat Ka Melaa, Tu Kahaan Se Aaya
aise Mein Tu Bhool Ke Rastaa, Ham Se A Takaraaya

aate Jaate Hue Raste Pe Khade
bade Dekhe Aise Deevaane
aisa Kyaa!
jahaan Pe Bhi Koi Achchhi Soorat Akhi
vaheen Ruke Kisi Bahaane
aise Heero Ban Ke Ga Raha Hai Koi
kisi Naye Film Ka Gaana Lagata Hai
ye Ladaka Zara Sa Deevaana Lagata Hai
gaadi Ka Koi Mcdal Puraana Lagata Hai
ye Ladaka Zara Sa ...

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