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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Ragini ... nice start.

i love mayur fighting ... that was hilarious specially nupurs reaction ... mera bachpan ka pyar ko jala dia ... mera raj ko jala dia ... ROFL ... ye reaction sirf nupur ka hi ho sakta hai ...

waitin for next update

continue soon

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
u updated after long
first part was really nice
do continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

note

aap log bhi soch rahe honge ek to pure one year ke baad update kiya uske baad bhi regular nahi hai update dene main...



but main kya karun guys meri problem kam hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi...mere lapi ka hard disk ud gaya ...or sarre 230 gb data chale gaye...so please pardon me this time surley give updates when mera lapi thik ho jaye ...ya phir mujhe koi altrnative mil jaye...



Edited by raginisharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Take ur time.
We can wait.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
that's so bad...

take your time..
i understand jab aisa hota hai..
to kitni problem face karni padti hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
ok no problem 😊
but whenever your problem solve update regularly for compansating 😆
waiting for next part 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -JayaRC-

ok no problem 😊

but whenever your problem solve update regularly for compansating 😆
waiting for next part 😳


done👍🏼 tonight you will get a update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: raginisharma


done👍🏼 tonight you will get a update😃

ok waiting for that update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

this update dedicated to one of the cutest reader or we can say encouraging and lovely girl anila ...happy birthday anila (sorry ek din baad gift de rahi hun par kya karun ye kambaht mara lapi ne pareshan kar rakha hai..) i feel good we have so many good person who are fans of mayur ...mayur our eternal love...


PART2
so in last update all of you comes to know how mayur are going to married and the circumstance ...

now update ...


mayank and nupur are in their respective room and thinking about just what happen in their life...(nupurs thought in red and maynk in blue and from me in purple)

ye kya hogaya pal bhar mein dekhte hi dekhte meri jindagi badal gai...

kun hua ye hum dono bachpan se sirf ladte aaye hain kabhi sidhe muh baat bhi nahi karte the or ab jindagi bhar ka sath...

ladne ke alawa kiya kya hai hum dono ne har baat par galti nikalti hai wo meri bandariya kahiki...

usko to sirf mauka chaiye mujhse ladne ka jaha mauka mila wahi ladai karna suru kar deta hai bandar kahika..

ab puri jindagi us jangli bandariya ke sath rehna padaega ...kaise hoga ye ...

oh no ab roj roj us bandar ka muh mujhe dekhna padega...

apart from these two there are 7 more person who are in deep thought ...

samarat is roming here and there
...

sam: nani ko wada to kar diya hai but use pura kaise karenge wo dono to jani dushman hai...
ben: haan to love guru ko kya ho gaya hai aaj...
sam: are main undono ko pyar karwate karwate khud na pyar pe ghussa ho jaun..
sam got frustrated and seeing this all feel bad but gunjan stands up and goes to samrat ...samrat hum undono ke sath jab se hain jab hum log bolna bhi nahi jante ...so hume postive points dekhne chaiye na ki wo itna jaghdne ke baad bhi aaj sath hai ...

itna sunte hi samrat ko idea aata hai ...
sam:hum log undono ke sath bachpan se hain to hume aise points dhundne hain jinse ye pata chale ki undono main hai kya and we start from kg at this point all start looking towrds each other because they no no one rembers kg memook standar 1 ab to thik hai na said samrat..

gu:thik hai hum points banate hain or suhani tum points note karo...

suhani is
ready with pen and paper and all are remembering some incident ...and after lot of thinking diya shouts

dia:yaad aaya mujhe

haan to aap batane ka kast karenge said by benji

dia: wo actually satndard 1 mein sirf mai mayank,nupur and suhanni hi sirf ek section main the tum log to alag section mai the but jab hum log pehle din school gaye or hamare parents hame school main chod kar gaye...

satnd 1(flashback)

mayank pehili bench par jata hai or waha apna bag rakh deta hai...thik usi samay nupur bhi apna bag wahi rakh deti hai...

dekho mayank maine yaha bag rakha hai to mai yaha baatungi...

tum dekho nupur maine apna bag yaha rakha hai to mai yaha baitungi...

but wo log ye dekh hi nahi paa rahe the ki wo desk do ke liye thi...

dekhoo bandaliya mujhe ghussa mat dilaao pehle bag maine rakha main hi bathunga...

oye bandar tu mujhe mat ghussa dila pehle bag maine rakha mai baitungi...

bandariya😡

bandar😡

just at the moment teachers enters ...

te:are aap dono lad kun rahe hain...

mam maine pehle yaha bag rakha to pehle main baithungi...

nahi mam pehle maine yaha bag rakha to main yaha baithunga...

te:but aap dono ek sath baith sakte hain na dekho do seet hain..

main iske sath nahi batungi😒

or mai bhi iske sath nahi baitungi...

te:agar aap dono isi tarah ladte rahe to mai aapko pcihe wali seat par bitha dungi ...

and lastly dono man jate hain kunki koi bhi last main nahi baithna chahta...

flashback ends..

dia:or tubse dono sath baithe hai jitna bhi jaghda kare but sath hi baithte hai...

hun to ye baat hain un donoke sath baithe ki said by gunjan

dia:or itna hi nahi satndard four mai...

standard 4(flashback)

te:dekho tum log 4 years se sath baith rahe ho show is bar tumhare banch partners change kiye jayenge...


ok myank tum riya ke sath baith jao or nupur tum sameer ke sath ...

both are not happy with this sudden change in their life but they can't do anyhting because it's teachers order or wo log teacher se kya complain kar sakte the ...


benji:phir kya hua wo dono to bahut khush hune honge na...

benji agar agli bar mujhe bich mai toka na to dekh lena...kitni mast kahani suna rahi thi main...

dia:benji bich mai mat bolo😡


continue

uff ab is sameer ke sath baithna padega ye bahut pakau hai isse acha to wo bandar hi tha...

now ab in madam riya ke sath baithna padega isse achi to wo bandariya hi thi

kuch sochna padega

kuch sochna padega

now both have made the plan and irritate their partners and lastly teacher punished them to sit togther (punishment a bull shit )

flashback ends...

dia:or bahut bar dono ladte the or ant mai sath hi baithe the is liye teachers ne bhi unhe kabhi alag nahi baithani ki koshis ki...


sam :or standard seventh mai kya hua ..

everyone looking at him with curiousity...

flashback...

sam:mayank tu tracking pe chal raha hai ki nahi ...

nahi mai nahi jaunga tujhe pata hai na mujhe height fobia hai...

sam:common mayank ab tu itna kun bhav kha raha hai ab to nupur ne bhi haa kar di hai..use bhi tho wahi problem hai...

kuch bhi ho jaye mai nahi jaa raha bus...


but at the departure of the buses..

sam:are mayank tu yaha kya kar raha hai tu to nahi aane wala tha..

socha chalta hun isi bahane apne dar se bhi samna ho jayega..

sam:acha thik hai chal

flashback ends...

sam:mai use itna mana raha tha lekin wo maan hi nahi raha tha but jaise hi maine .nupur ka naam liya to aa gaya ...


gun:haan standard 10 main na...

at vary moment gopi ne darwaja khatkata diya...

ben:kaun aa gaya

benji jata hai or darwaja kholta hai

ben:kya hai 😡

gopi: wo aaplogo ko dinnere ke liye bulaya jaa raha hai dinning room mein...

ben:ok hum log aate hain...tum chalo..

diya :kya hua benji...

ben:niche dinner ke liye sab bula rahe hai...

sam:chalo thik hai lein dinner ke baad sab log yahi milenge ok...

chalo are ye uday kaha hai...

suhani:or kaha hoga dinner ka naam liya nahi ki mahasay gayab...


all lough together and proceed toward dinning area...


so what you thought whether gang able to make their frends to realise their hidden love ...

guys chote update ke liye maaf karna but ye update maine 4 bar likha hai...kuch unwanted reason ki wajah se pehle ke update delet ho gaye ...

will update next part tomorrow or day after tomorrow...


oh forgive me for mistakes ...kaam chala lena ...










Edited by raginisharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
so cute and adrable. I hope mayur apne feelings ko samjhe

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