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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow even he came home to take her to coffee his really good wonderful update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the nokh-jokh....it was cute...plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
they both r like tom n jerry
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it...... Nice ff if she is not his type den y he ask 4r coffee.,.... God he is full of I, Me, Myself........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved ur ff.. .plss add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
nice couple.................just like tom and jerry....................nice update.................continue soon...................
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 7

THEY ARRIVE AT THE CAF.MAAN PULLS OUT A CHAIR FOR GEET BUT GEET GOES AND SITS IN THE OTHER ONE.

MAAN SELF THOT: These girls also'

(HE SITS DOWN)

Maan: So' What do you want to order?

Geet: Nothing, Just get on with it and tell me what you want to so I can leave.

Maan: Hasn't anyone taught u manners?

Geet: Excuse me,I've got more manners than you.

Maan: Oh really?

(GEET ANGRY,MAAN HOLDS HER HAND,GEET STARES AT HIM,EYELOCK,SHE THEN PULLS HER HAND AWAY)

Geet:What are you doing?

Maan: I'm trying to pacify you.

Geet: But how many times do I tell you I don't want to listen to u?

Maan: But im MSK and im not going to listen to u.

Geet: Youre so arrogant!!

Maan: Today,Im going to do what ive never done before.

Geet: And whats that?

Maan: Im going to say sorry.

Geet: You've never said sorry?

Maan: Im sorry that I misunderstood u. Im sorry for all the harsh words I said to you.Please forgive me.I want to be friends with you.

Geet: We can never be friends.

(MAAN IS HURT)

Geet: No, I didn't mean it in that way. I meant that we always fight so how can we be friends? Everyday,we'll have a new argument over some petty thing.

Maan: We can try,though?

Geet:Fine.We will try.

(THEY BOTH SMILE)

Maan: Now shall we go?

Geet: Coffee?

Maan: I don't drink coffee.

Geet: Oh,so this was just an excuse. You are..

Maan: Look, You've started fighting with me again.

( BOTH LAUGH AND EYELOCK)

SCENE CHANGE.THEY ARRIVE AT GEETS HOUSE.GEET GETS OUT OF THE CAR.

Geet: Bye

Maan: Ill be waiting for you tomorrow,friend.

(GEET LEAVES BUT STOPS AND LOOKS AT MAAN AGAIN.MAAN WAVES.SHE SMILES AND GO INSIDE.)

Maan: Afterall, I fulfilled my mission.I told you,geet.And I enjoyed tonite.But I want to know more about geet.

SCENE CHANGE.GEET IN HER BEDROOM LYING IN BED.

Geet: Maan isn't so snooty.he just looks it.Tonight,he was completely different.They say every coin has 2 sides,looks like it's the same with Maan.But why am I thinking about him so much.Afterall, I don't think about my other friends this much?

(GEET CONFUSED)

END

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Part 8
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Lovely n awesome update
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woohooo first 1 to comment.. gr8 update :) i'll say 2nd dint notice dat sum1 reserved d 1st spot.. :)
Edited by kriya... - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear nice update.........so finally maan managed to win her frndship.........eagerly waiting for ur next update.............

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