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annie.shona thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey nice updates...

thnx for the pm :) ..

and plzz make geet be with maan .. plz... :D lolxx i cant see them apart :D

continue soon :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 14

IT'S THE NEXT MORNING.MAANS PLANE LANDS IN NEW YORK.

M: Finally!! That flight felt like forever! Now I need to find a hotel,dump my stuff and start trying to find G.Now,New York is split into 5 boroughs so I need to do one at a time.But on my own,this could take ages!!! Oh well,Start your mission,M.

SCENE CHANGE.G AT BREAKFAST TABLE.

G: Good Morning.

M: Good Morning,G.How are u?

G: Fine,Thanks.

M: Good.Because we're going shopping today!!

G: No,M.I don't feel like it.Maybe Tomorrow.

M: No excuses.And dads given us his credit card so we can do a major spend.

Uncle: Not given it,got it taken off me forcefully.G,u should go.It will cheer you up.I've seen u looking quite down since u came.Is everything alright?

G'S EYES FILL WITH TEARS.

M: You too,Dad.She was just tired yesterday.

G LOOKS AT M AND MOUTHS THANK YOU.M SMILES.

M: Now come,G.Its going to be a busy day.

SHE DRAGS G UPSTAIRS INTO THEIR ROOM AND TAKES HER TO THE WARDROBE.

M:Now quick,choose something.

G: Ill wear my own clothes on,its ok.

M: Please,G?

G: Fine.No-one can say no to you.

M PICKS OUT A LIGHT BLUE DRESS OUT FOR HER.SHE GIVES IT TO G.

M: This will look great on you.You never know,u might find someone special today,G.

G LOOKS AT THE DRESS.HER EYES FILL WITH TEARS AND SHE GRIPS THE BED.

G: Blue?

SHE THROWS THE DRESS AWAY.

M: Sorry,G.I forgot u don't wear blue on anymore after…. I'll choose something else.

SHE PICKS OUT A LIGHT PINK DRESS AND G GOES TO CHANGE.

MEERA ST:SORRY,G.I DIDN'T MEAN TO REMIND U OF UR PAST.I KNOW HOW MUCH IT MUST HURT.

SCENE CHANGE.M UNPACKING AT THE HOTEL.

M:OK,this is done.So,I think I should start off in Brooklyn first.

HE LEAVES.

SCENE CHANGE.G AND MEERA ON THE TUBE.

G: BTW,Where are we going,M?

M: Brooklyn,it's the best place to shop.

G:Cool

M: ERmmm,G,I don't know if u remember but last night u had a nightmare and u were talking about some guy…

G:That…

M: U came here bcos of trouble with a guy,Didn't u,G?

G: Yes

M: Are u still not ready to tell me?

G: No.Come,the trains stopped.

THEY LEAVE AND GO TO THE HIGH STREET.THEY LOOK INTO THE SHOPS.

SCENE CHANGE.M ALSO ON THE HIGH STREET.

M: I'll look here first.U know girls.Whenever they have a problem,they shop.

SCREEN SPLITS IN HALF,SHOWS M WALKING FROM 1 SIDE,GEET FROM THE OTHER.

END

Will they meet? Find out in next update.

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Posted: 14 years ago
maan telling pilot to fly the plane faster😆......omg..geet crying...i want to know what happened...plz update soon ..i hope they meet
Edited by --ANGEL-- - 14 years ago
mrk-1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow thats awsome one yaar..... i guess they gonna meeet now !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Will they meet..... Dats not d quetion...... A... a... a.... Will U Let Them Meet!!! *Suspicious tone* u should've ask dat...lolzz..
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Posted: 14 years ago
yesssssssss both of them in same place now that is destiny i just hope they meet
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Posted: 14 years ago

too good!!!

loved it maan saying to the pilot to drive fast🤣

now curious about geet's past plz reveal little bit😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow so many updates in 1 day i am loving it...............do u plan to update the next one too............
pl make them meet....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh dear lovley update hope they meet soon .............................................................................. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon next ..................hope u will update today ........................................................next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago

both parts were wonderful!!!!!

hope both meet

gr8 update!!!

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