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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
hey i loved it....maan trying to pacify geet...want to see whats his next idea........update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
Great update....i wonder what Maan will go know to try and pacify our Geet...and Geet, truly, you are just as stubborn as Maan...what will happen when both of them will collide...please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Thank You for all ur amazing comments😊
You motivate me to write more😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Loveee the part!!!
I hope maan will succeed.
Continue soonnnnnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay Maan on the Mission Manofying Geet...well good for him...Geet is right,she shouldn't give in to him that easily.....continue....lets see how he will succeed in his mission...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
awesome update... keep it cumin..
really well done!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 6

(GEET SITTING IN HER BEDROOM THINKING ABOUT THE DAY)

Geet: Hes so annoying. I don't know why he doesn't understand things once,why do I have to repeat them again and again? I feel like' Urgghh!!!

(THE DOORBELL RINGS)

Geet: who could it be at this time? Anyway, leave it.What do I care?

(SHE LIES IN BED,HER MUM CALLS HER,SHE GOES DOWN.)

Geet: What is it,maa? I was about to sleep.

(SHE SEES MAAN STANDING IN DOOR,SHES SHOCKED0

Geet: You? What are you doing here? Go from here.

Maan: Why are u so shocked? We had planned to meet for coffee but u didn't turn up so I thought I'd come and pick u up. Maybe u'd forgotten?

Geet:You..

Mum: Geet,this is so bad. First,u made plan of meeting and now u forgot.Go get changed now. You have to leave quick.

GEET: But'

Mum: Now!

( GEET GLARES AT MAAN THEN LEAVES TO GET CHANGED)

M SELF THOT: I told u I'd make u come for coffee and see, I did. Afterall, MSK won.

SCENE CHANGE.GEET IN BEDROOM.

Geet: Watch what I do to u,MSK. You've forced me for coffee but don't think u've won.Im not going to forgive u so easily! Anyway,leave that,What should I wear? I'll wear anything what does it matter? No, what if someone fit sees me looking bad? Oh god!!

SCENE CHANGE.MUM AND MAAN STANDING IN HALLWAY.

Mum: Don't know why shes taking so long.Sorry, bete.I'll just go and see.

( SHES ABOUT TO GO UPSTAIRS WHEN GEET COMES DOWN WEARING A PURPLE DRESS LOOKING AMAZING.)

MAAN SELF THOT: Shes not that bad-looking,she can look good when she wants to. But still,shes not my taste.

Mum: Ok,don't be too late and have a good time.

( SHE PULLS G CLOSER AND WHISPERS'IF HE TRYS TO MISBEHAVE WITH U, THEN KICK HIM,OK?'.THEY LEAVE.)

(M OPENS THE DOOR FOR G BUT SHE GOES AND SITS IN THE BACK,M SLAMS THE DOOR AND GOES AND SITS.THEY DRIVE AWAY.)

G: What do u think of urself? U just came and stood at my front door? BTW, where did u get my address from? Are you following me? Youre so rude. I Feel like slapping u but then I stop myself.Why aren't u answering me? Ure already deaf and blind, can u not speak now either?

M: I'll speak only when u give me a chance to speak.But no,you just keep on blabbering away.And ur answers are :MSK,YES,SCHOOL,URE TALKING AND I CAN.

G: What? Can you not give a straight answer? Urgghhh!!!

M: Youre very hot-tempered aren't you?

G: Im going to'

M: I think im MSK,yes I came and stood at ur front door,I got ur address from school,No im not following u,Im not answering u because youre talking and not giving me a chance to and I can speak.Happy?

Geet:No, im not happy.

Maan: that's the problem with all u girls. youre never happy!!!

Geet:Oh!!! How sexist!!

Maan:No, it's the truth.

Geet: All mens thinking is wrong,not girls.

( BOTH ANGRY.)

END

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Part 7
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
awesome update.........maan ghar pe agaya 😲........haila.......love geet mom advise.......😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
Awesomeeee!!
Loveee the part.
They r fighting as usual!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
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just read all the parts of ur ff....
loved it....
plz add me to ur pm list...continue soon

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