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Posted: 14 years ago
"HIDDEN PASSION"----hmm....d name is pretty interesting..
wl wait 4 it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part...loved it to the core..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

My god geet's dream scared me. I don't ever want maan to leave her. Love how geet cuddled up to maan. He is going to be happy when he wakes up in the morning.

lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dark Passion - FF

Here you go! Get it before it disappears ...

Chapter 12

He did it.

He kissed her.

***

Geet woke up to something... Something on her mouth. What? Wait...

She opened her eyes and her eyes widened as she saw Maan. Maan was kissing her.

This was like a dream come true.

She was in paradise.

She responded to the kiss and the tingling feeling rushed to her body. This was her first kiss, and she was glad Maan stole it from her.

She cupped Maan's face and kissed back hungrily. Her hands then went through his hair, tousling his already tousled hair.

Maan suddenly broke the kiss.

Maan: "I'm sorry" he whispered and then pushed her towards him, engulfing her in his arms completely.

Geet: "Don't be" she said

There was suddenly silence in the room. All they both could hear was their own breathing, and the tick tocks of the grandfather clock.

The grandfather clock ding dong'ed 12 times.

It was midnight.

Geet: "I love you" she said and smiled at how filmy this was

Maan looked at Geet and then smiled.

Maan: "I... Love... You... Too" he said between kisses

Both couldn't get enough of each other. They kissed, and kissed. And kissed for what seemed like 10 minutes. Finally, Geet's chest felt like it was going to explode, her heart was beating so fast. She broke the kiss.

Maan: "Go home Geet. It's late" he said and then bit the flesh on her neck

Geet: "No" she said and sighed heavily, savouring his kisses.

Maan: "I'll lose control. I'm telling you" he warned and then kissed her on her collarbone.

Geet: "No" she said.

Maan had an idea.

He looked through Geet's eyes with his jet black intense ones. He knew this was going to work, and Geet knew what he was trying to do.

His eyes burned through her soul.

After some silence, Geet reluctantly

Geet: "Fine" she said and lightly pushed Maan off herself. She collected her handbag and like a professional, snapped her fingers. In a second, she was gone.

Maan stayed in bed and pulled the duvet covers up to his head. The fragrance of Geet's perfume was still on his pillow. He wanted to trap that fragrance forever.

***

Geet appeared in the middle of her living room and then looked around herself. Everything was at it's normal place. She dumped her handbag on the sofa and then walked up to the fridge to get herself out a drink.

She was about to open the fridge, when she saw a note stuck on the door of the fridge. It was a sticky on note. It said:

"YOUR NEXT" in bold, red letters.

Geet gulped.

Right now she wanted Maan with her.

But she couldn't always depend on Maan. She was an immortal. She could take care of herself easily now that Maan has teached her some basic tricks to do.
So she ripped off the sticky note and then ripped it in tiny pieces and threw it away in the trash.

Geet entered her bedroom and then closed it behind her. She stripped off and stepped into the shower. The places Maan had touched, felt, and kissed her were still burning. She didn't want it to go away. She wanted his touch, his feel to remain on her.

After she came out of the shower, she still felt the burns on her body. She thought that they would be away due to the cold water, but his burn was permanent on her skin. And she liked it this way.

She dressed into her night dress and then looked at herself in the mirror. Her eye caught the sticky note stuck to the corner of her mirror which she swore she never saw it when she entered her bedroom. She read it.

"TIME FOR YOU TO DIE" it said.

Geet once again took the sticky note and ripped it into tiny pieces. She then chucked it into the trash and then climbed into the bed, pulling the duvet covers right up to her head. She reached out and clicked the lamp off, darkness suddenly engulfing the air.

Geet was never scared of the dark.

Now she was.

She closed her eyes tight, and tried to sleep.

***

There was darkness everywhere.

Geet couldn't see where she was.

She tried to move, but she couldn't.

Her legs were tied.

Her hands were tied.

Then suddenly, there was light everywhere. The light was sharp, so Geet had to close her eyes to prevent from going blind.

She slowly opened her eyes and saw the face she didn't even expect to see.

Dev.

With a pistol in his hands.


Geet: "AAAH!" she screamed and woke up. She looked frantically around herself and quickly switched the light on.

She was here.

In her bedroom.

Geet suddenly wondered something.

Even if Dev tried to kill her, she couldn't die because she was an immortal.

She smiled and smacked her forehead with the heel of her hand.

It was only a bad dream.

She closed her eyes and breathed a soft sigh of relief. She then turned to look at the clock. It was only 2:00am.

Great.

She reached out for the jug of water on the bedside table without looking and then picked it up. It was empty.

Geet: "I must have forgotten" she said and then climbed out of bed.

Her teeth chattered.

It wasn't even cold in this room.

She wrapped a blanket around herself and then picked up the jug. She exited her bedroom and stepped inside her kitchen.

It was right at that moment she realized she skipped dinner. Her stomach was growling now.

So she put the jug in the sink and then reached out for a bowl. She set it on the kitchen worktop and then skimmed through the draws to find some Instant Noodles to have. She switched on the kettle to heat up some water and once the kettle was done, she put the hot water in the bowl of Instant Noodles.
As she was making the noodles, she looked around herself conciously. She wanted to be out of this kitchen. She was starting to feel a bit uneasy.

She quickly grabbed a spoon and held the bowl of noodles and turned around. The bowl nearly slipped out of her hands as she saw Maan casually leaning against the table with his arms across his chest. He whistled some tune and then looked into Geet's eyes.

Maan stared at Geet intensely.

Maan: "Everything OK?" he asked and narrowed his eyes, just like he did when he knew something was wrong.

Geet took a sharp breath and then let it out.

Geet: "You scared me" she asked and then sat down on the table.

Maan bent over and whispered in her ear.

Maan: "Aren't you already scared?"

Geet: "No" she lied even though she knew she would be caught sooner or later anyway.

Maan: "Liar" he whispered again and kissed her neck.

Geet shuddered.

Geet: "Bad dream" she said. Well at least this wasn't a lie.

Maan: "And?" he said softly and massaged her shoulders.

Geet: "And... And" she stuttered and laid back on her chair. Maan's hands worked like magic. She felt the pain and tense that was travelling up and down her back slowly fade away.

Maan: "And..." he said, waiting for her to continue.

Geet: "I just... Feel lonely thats all" she lied again.

Maan stopped massaging her shoulders and reached into his pocket, only to find the two sticky notes which Geet had ripped up earlier. He held it out in front of her.

Geet gasped.

Maan: "What's this?" he said in a low voice

Geet: "I ripped that --" she said and suddenly realized. He had powers.

Geet sighed.

Geet: "I got them when I came home from your house. I don't know who is sending them. I think it's probably a prank" she said

Maan: "A prank? Someone sneaking into your flat and sticking threatening notes everywhere? you call that a prank?" he yelled and slammed the notes on the table. He looked angrily, straight ahead.

Geet gulped.

Maan bent over to her ear again.

Maan: "Stay away from Dev" he whispered and gave a light kiss on her neck. He then vanished in thin air.

Geet could still smell his perfume and precense around the room. She smiled. Maan was there to protect her.

Feeling safe again, she gobbled up her Instant Noodles and fell into a deep sleep on the table.

Precap: Unconcious.

I hope this is a lengthy enough update for you guys.

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Edited by Sameeha786 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow really intense update
Wonda y devs trying 2 kill Geet afta he'z already drank het blood
Glad dat Maans der 2 protect her
Awww luvd der first kiss
Precap sounds worrying-hu'z unconscious is it geet?
Cont soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
why is dev still after her
happy maan is their to protect her
yay they confessed and kissed
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the part.
Maan will protect her.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.


Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part..had the right intensity and romance
I love this Maan he's so awesome :-D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the part where he narrowed his eyes at her :) lol
Great update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update sameeha...i was literally bitting my nails reading this...😆😆😆😆😆

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