Heartless~~~Pg-45 part-8 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Update soon. & please let her be saved. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
nice update.. y is geet in this mess?? continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam1234fly

friends,do u think it is shows much violence?????if so tell me plz i will den write dose part less........

u m8 already planned d story-line.....nd plz con by tat

coz don't want to loss the flavor by changing it

Edited by dia_ditz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok i m posting the next part.........its a little small.........its more abt the present.............after that part i hope i will concentrate as to wat happened to Geet and why is she in dat condition................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
And yea. You have planned the story. Write it. Don't change anything. That's the best bit.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3

The second man went and sat on the couch and looked at the man and smiled and said,"All the best Dev".

Dev:smiles an evil one.He quickly throws away his shirt and comes on geet.His hands wandered all over her.Geet tried to move desperately but could not.Dev slowly moved towards her ears and whispered,"Let me see what you can do now.Earlier it was only me,but now we have another company'."He bit her earlobes'..Geet turned her face to the other side''He bend down ....towards her breasts....bit there.Geet jerked.roughly.....tryin to get him off her........

Dev:"Be nice then I might be nice as well"and smirks....n bit her nipples really hard....grabbing her breasts........She jerked screamed.....but all in vain............

His hands and mouth wandered all over her body,playing .Geet lied still like a corpse'.only tears flew down her eyes'..as her innocence was snached from her'..as she lost her purity''

She felt pain between her legs.He entered her roughly.....a no of times........and knew she realized she lost everything''..everything!!!!!!!

Geet closed her eyes as silent tears fell fron her eyes''..

After sometime Dev whispered in her ears "Thanks'.i had a pleasureable time''but now my friend wants his reward for not disturbing my fun'."He kissed her lips roughly and left''

Dev:"She is all yours man'..enjoy'''.."with dat said he left the room.

The other man slowly came towards Geet,took off his clothes lied on Geet and whispered"Don't you think its more fun when we don't have company"with dat said he had his fun''..

Geet fainted as she could not bear anymore''.

After sometime

Geet became conscious'..there was soreness all over her body''she closed her eyes tight and prayed dat all dis was not reality''but a nightmare''.she hoped like crazy''.she tried to move her hands n legs'.she could move them'.she was overjoyed''she thought it was a nightmare'a nightmare'''.but as soon as she opened her eyes her hopes went down the drain''.she was in the same condition as before'..the only difference was now her hands n legs were free and now she was a toy for men to have fun with'''

Edited by sam1234fly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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samm wwoowo...i lov nic suspense...woh maan nhi ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh nooooooooo...............plz save her from tat place

but who is the second guy??????????

nd how come she landed der??????

can v get any more updates??

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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
That was very good. You have to update more now. Please. This is good. Love the suspense.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it......Hope Geet escapes from dat place..... thanx for the pm

Edited by XXXYYYZZZ - 14 years ago

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