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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part3

Past

Ani:Geet what happened yaar????

Geet:oh no!!!!Maan saw me llike this????dats y he ran away from me????waise bhi who kab mujhe dekhta hai?????i don't think he even knows my name…….(self talk)

A:Geet tu kya bol rahi hai????u kno wat???2day Maan bhai asked abt u……

G:suddenly jumps and shouts "kya????"

A:geet slowly…..(geet s embarrassed)

G:nehi mein to aweye puch rahi thi…….

A:ya ya…I know everything…..waise you change your clothes……tu gir gayi thi kya…..Ani continues but Geet is lost in her own world……..thinking abt Maan

G:she comes out of her dreams when Ani pokes her"Ani,kya hai????"

A:chor ab tujh se baat karna hi bekar hai…..take this and change kar lo

G:A gives her a nice simple knee length blue colour dress….she wears it and looks like a princess…..

A:u luk beautiful yaar……..maan bhai dekhenge to pagal ho jayange……..

G:blushes …………Ani stop your nonsence……..chal Friday ko exam hai na…..lets study……..

They both studied for a long time.Daadi came and saw them studying.She knew Geet had feelings for Maan and she wantegd Geet as her Bahu………She called dem for lunch…….Geet as usual refused as she knew Maan would be there and in front of him she will surely do something wrong………….But after a lot of insistence she accepted….

Geet,Ani and Daadi were sitting in the drawing room and waiting for Maan.Maan came and sat in d dining table.Geet,Ani and Daadi went to the dining room.geet saw Maan and became nervous which was evident on her face.daadi smiled and took her place.Ani did the same.Geet went to sit furthest from Maan.But her luck,Daadi asked her to sit in the place which was vacant and was beside Maan.Maan did not look at Geet till now.

Present

She remained cuddled up in the bed…..hugging herself……..crying her heart out…….her whole body was sore and bleeding………she tried to get away from dat bed………..where she lost her virginity,where men came to her for pleasure………

She fell on the ground in pain…….the soreness between her legs was terrible…….she wanted to die……..she did not want to live anymore…….She looked for something to hide herself……..the only piece of clothing in the room was her torn lingerie………She took dat and tried to hide herself in it…….she hid under the bed……….and after many hours of crying she fell asleep under the bed……

She felt pain in her hair and woke up……She looked up to see what it was…..She saw a woman pulling her hair and trying to take her……..Geet slowly came out……The woman threw her some clothes on her face………She showed her the bathroom and went out of the room.

Geet slowly got on her feet and went to the bathroom.There was a huge mirror.she looked at her naked body.It was red and blue everywhere…..everywhere…She moved her hands over her face,her chest,her breasts,her neck,her waist,her face,her lips………she hated every inch of her body….she started rubbing them….hard….very hard…..blood started oozing out of her soft breasts,lips where the monsters had kissed her.licked her,bit her….….She looked at the person in the mirror……she could not recognize her…….Her face no longer was of an innocent simple teenager but of a sex slave…….

Past

Geet in her nervousness held the hot curry bowl and screemed in pain…….tears welled in her eyes…………..Maan quickly held her hand and started carcassing it………Geet looked in his eyes and found concern and pain in them……….Maan looked at her and was pained to see her in pain…………They were lost in each others eyes…………….They came to their senses when Daadi caughed and ani started laughing……………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Though I hit the like button, but I hate this situation to the core ! (about part 2)

So painful ! (part 3)

About the story, u should carry on according to ur plan. I'm looking forward ....
Edited by PaintedSky - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
Omg plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue continue continue plzzzzz daying to know what the next omg why every time maan is very bad plzzzz add to ur pm honey and plzzzzzz update daily plzzzz buz it's very intresting plzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
I am scared. Ok! No wonder FireSafireFire/ Keyama recommended your Ff. Oh god you r violent like her. Update soon. X
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
ohh i feel so bad for geet poor thing 😭
but dont change the story continue as you planned it...
& i hope you update regularly cause its so interesting & suspenseful
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: sam1234fly

hey everyone........i was jst wondering abt maan n geet...........recently i had seen a documentary film and i really liked d concept....and was wondering abt writing a ff on maan n geet based on it........



i feel sad fr d gal u sufferd frm stil in real lyf....poor soul..
n u doin fantastic writin..:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh by the way you still dont have a title yet ... also you can add the laterst updated part to ur ff title that way ppl know the last part updated & gets your ff more popular cause seriously you deserve so many views & comments 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Oh my god how she landed in this hell plz update soon n pm me too.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
nice concept....cont soon 👍🏼 & add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
hey its very interesting part n m sure its not maan bt maan vl come for geet's help bt he is nt kiddnaper...pls updt soon n add me to ur buddy list...

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