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Posted: 14 years ago
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i m trying to post the next part.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sam please a big parts wanna know how the story unfolds
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please continue ... sounds interesting!! ... waiting for the next ......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice concept..... But dat man should not be maan i don't know y u guys want him to be complete jerk....lol.... Do continue....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditiwalia56

Nice concept..... But dat man should not be maan i don't know y u guys want him to be complete jerk....lol.... Do continue....


lol😆
we still love him😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nearly finished.............😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 1

Geet is a fun loving charming bubbly girl.She is very down to earth and obey elders.Her mother died when she was very small.She does not remember anything about her.Her father Mohinder Handa is her everything.Her best friend is Anwesha,Anwesha Khurana,sister of famous Maan Singh Khurana.She secretly likes him.Even though she is poor she does let others know abt her financial problems.Her father died few months ago and all she has in the world is her little sis..She studies Statistics in St.Xavier's college with Anwesha.

Geet is very beautiful.She does not put heavy make up.But still she stands out in a crowd.

Geet realizes that she will have to work so that she can earn some money.She worked in many places part time but that was not enough for her to studies and herself.She was a very bright student.Moreover she had to pay for her hostel which was quite costly.So she decides to search for a job which will give her some stability.

Past

Phone conversation

Ani(Anwesha):Hey Geet!!!where are you????come home na'.plz''..we will study together.

Geet:No Ani'.I am tired yaar''

A:Plz aa na'.Maan bhai ghar pe hai

G:skipped a beat hearing Maan's name'.ok I will come

A:Oye Geet'.kya yaar'.jab bhai ka naam suni to phatak sa ha kar di???

G:Aisa kuch nehi hai(she blushes)

A:thik hai thik hai''.tu a ja''

Geet quickly goes out.Walks to Khurana Mansion(which is guite nearby as well as she cant afford to go in a taxi)After 30minutes she reaches there.Tired exhausted and sweaty.She quickly runs up to Ani's room but bumps into the hard chest of Maan.She looks up at him and skips several beats.She tells hi"Hi" J

Maan: (in a stern voice)look where you are headed and walks off

Geet looks at the retreating figure for sometime and goes to Anwesha's room.Ani sees her cheeks red and her panting and sweaty figure and asks,"Geet what happened to you????"

G:looks at the mirror and realizes wat condition she was in'..her hair was not in place ''her dress has become dirty and she looked a total mess'''She was embarrassed that Maan had seen her in that condition.

Present

Geet did not know when she slept.She woke up when she heard the door bang open.That bas***d entered the room.Geet closed her eyes tight.Knew the inevitable will happen.Her heart thumped against her ribs as if it would break.She was praying that what was happening was a nightmare.....a hideous dream....not reality...........But God could not hear her prayers.............

The noice of footsteps increased....She realized that he was not alone.Someone else was there also.Suddenly someone caught her leg.She tried with all her might to get her legs free'....she jerked.....screamed....begged.....cried........but all in vain.They tied her legs to the bed.They checked if her hand was tied strongly or not'..and tied it more strongly'..Geet cried in pain'.Her hands bleeded.

Man1:(the one who came earlier)

M1:(tells the other man)go sit there and points towards a small couch and says "Enjoy seeing me have fun with her"(and moves his index finger on Geet's nude body)"I am sure u too wanna have fun with her''.just after I finish having fun you can hav your fun)'..and laughed.

Geet:was frighted like hell....as the man approached her with a smile of victry......as finally he got his prey.......

Meanwhile tears rolled down Geets face''.



Sry for d mistakes....😳

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Edited by sam1234fly - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hope Geet escapes from this mess,how did she land here!Continue........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG… thats not maan.. awww… i am scared…😭
oh please few more parts later today i am off now.. but this is so good. i am loving it
pls pls pls pls pls do atleast 1-2 long parts… i am begging😭
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI Sam,
i just saw your ff now thanks to keyama for posting the link on her FF 😃
its very interesting but poor geet OMG with 2 men in the room.. tell me thats not maan i mean if it he is so cruel 😡
just a small suggestion can you please make an index page at the start so that way its easier to know if you updated 😉
oh & please add me to the PM list i cant wait till the next update which i hope is very soon 🤣
Edited by MsMovielover - 14 years ago

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