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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one dear.............
plz continue soon............
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Congrats on new thread rakhi....well deserved...
the update was awesoe as always
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update will be post within 1-2 hours
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Next Part:-


Next day morning, geet wake up due to some noise and she open her eyes lasily to find out the source of noise and saw maan is shouting on someone.

Geet get up and saw him then maan cut the call and cursed some one .Geet goes near to him and slide her arms around her waist.

Maan hold her hand by one arm and he called some one again and said cancel the ticket .

Geet raised her head and look at maan when he said no only my tickect will be cancelled, madam but geet snatched the phone and cut it .

Maan :- geet, what is this,

Geet:-I'm going no where with out u. no more reason, if insist me then I'll be stay there and never come here.

Maan rolled his eyes and said geet, don't be child, I have some work and have to go today noida for meeting.

Geet:- job hi ho, mein aapke sath hi jaungi, nehi toh bhool jaiye.

Maan:- geet, try to understand,

Geet turn and said ok, u can attend ur meeting, do what ever u want, and I'll go back to hp and never return ,

Maan shook his head and pull her closely and said geet,itna gussa acche nehi, ok baba, hum aapko ekele nehi bhejenge, hum bhi aapke sath ja rehe hain, par aaj nehi kal night ko.

Geet smiles and hugged him back tightly and said thank u.

Maan hugged her back.

After maan leave for office geet is waiting for meera in her room.

Meera came and geet locked the door and said I need ur help meera.

Meera little surprised and asked what kind of help? What happen?

Geet closes her eyes and said meera, can I trust u.

Meera look more puzzled and said I don't get it.

Geet:- actually, I don't have any friend here , except some of u, but this is very crucial thing and I need ur help, many thing depends on this and may be honor of this family.

Meera:- geet, pls explain it .I'm feeling confuse. Kya baat hain?

Geet:- We have to enter sameera's room .

Meera almost shout and said what, it's not possible, u knows if any one knows; leave any one if maan bhaiya know.

Geet hold meera's hand and said meera trut me I'm doing this to save this family and it's honor.I"m elder daughter in law and u r would be and so it's our duty meera to save this family for further any dishonor.

Meera:- but , iss mein sameera ka kya connection hain, I know she has some feelings for .

Geet smiles and said for ur maan bhaiya,I know it. Isliye kehe rehi hoon, ek baar mujhe help karo, I'll tell u everything.

Meera:- hmmm, ok, bolo , kya akrna hoga.

Geet:- look,no one in the home except dadi ma , me ,u and sameera. This is the time we can divert sameera some where and I' search her room.

Meera gasped and said but she is very clerver.If I'll tell her something suddenly she will suspect me or.

Geet:- I know. Trust me just go to the kitchen and just show u r unhappy with me and want ot take some revenge,

Meera:- but if sameera will suspect me.

Geet:- no she will not, u'll not tell her directly anything , just keep talking there, as if u r cursing me or talking with urself.

Meera nodded then geet said I'm going to meet dadi ma .ok.

Meera nodded and the both going towards their respective place.

Geet enter dadi ma's room and saw she is reading some book.

Geet said dadi ma.

Dadi turned and smiles at her and said come here.

Geet goes close to her and sit besides her and said how r u dadi ma?

Dadi ma:-I'm fine beta, how r u? I heard u r not going hp until maan will not go with u.

Geet shied and nodded in yes.

Dadi:- beta, thanks and sorry.thanks for giving support and love to my maan and sorry for my bad behavior ,I was so blind in love wit sameera never seen her other side.I trust her more but she failed me.I don't know how to make everything fine.

Geet hold dadi's hand and said dadi ma , pls.

Dadi:- ur first day and I 'I'm really sorry beta for our behavior and ranveer is too ashamed to face u.

Geet feel sorry and said dadi ma, pls don't be osrry, it's happen to every body, and I'll talk with papa jee. Now tell me, do u want to eat some kheer and icecream,I'll make now for u all.

Dadi smiles and ok beta then smiles and asked for our choice or for maan's choice

Geet again shied and said mein aati hoon dadi ma.

Dadi ma:-ok beta.

Geet enter the kitchen and find sameera is no where and meera is standing there alone.

Geet:- what happened ? Where is sameera?

Meera:- madam is no where and I asked nakul and he told me that she is going for shopping and will return at evening.

Geet smiles and said good, suno, aab mein iha kheer aur ice cream bana rehi hoon, thik hain phir I'll go for change and htat tine I'll enter her room and u have to check no one will see us. Pls meera, it's needed.

Meera nodded and said ok, geet it's very risky,

Geet:-I know but pls it's needed and then u have to go with me some where.

Meera nodded then quickly geet prepared kheer and mixture of ice cream and placed it on freezer.

Meera 'geet goes towards sameera's room.Meera looking outside and geet entered the room.After some time, geet came out with a big smile and said let's go,

Both gave ice cream and kheer to dadi then take permission for some shopping.

Both goes and geet told driver to take them to kc.

Meera surprised and said geet, hum kc ja rehe hain?

Geet shied and said ha, unhe khana dena hain.

Meera smiles ok, mein bhi dev se milke aati hoon.

Both smiles at each other.

Geet- meera enter the kc and every one greeted them.Pinky who is receptionist greeted them.

Sasha came and said y is so much noise here, don't u know mk is not like that.

Meera whisper, she is sasha, have crush on bhaiya.

Geet roll her eyes and said kitne log hain mere pati ke piche.

Meera laughs then said she was not here for couple of months and now she was not aware of it and see the magic.

Geet smiles and said hmm.

Sasha:- come on, go back to ur work. Then to geet and u?

Adi try to say something but geet stop him and said yes ms

Sasha:-I'm Head architect of kc , Sasha Singhnia and u?look , u must be friend of Miss meera jaisayal but remember if u want to job here then forget it, cause mk doesn't like women and specially ur type of women

Dev come back from some where and saw geet and meera standing near the corridor and sasha said something to them.He looks at adi who is try to stop sasha but fails.

Dev came forward and said what happen bhabi aap iha?

Sasha shocked to hear bhabi.

Geet:- are dev, app kab aaye, , meera is waiting for u and take it meera.I'm here to meet ur bro.

Dev :-oh, ok,

Sasha:- bhabi, bro meaing.

Geet turns and said nothing miss singhania, I seen how efficitenly u worked here.

Sasha almost shouts and who r u ?

Dev:- sasha, low ur voice, u don't know who is she? If she wants ur job wil be gone within a moment.

Sasha try to open her mouth when geet ignore and said every back to ur work.

Geet to meera, enjoy the lunch and I'm going to meet ur bro.

Sasha try to stop when tasha stop her.

Here dev warned her about her stupid behavior.

Geet knock the door and maan said: - come in.

Maan still looking at the file and geet stood in front of his table and look at him, after some time maan said sasha, give that file.

Geet giggle and give him a file.

Maan heard the giggle and look up at the source and see geet is standing there and try to control her laugh.

Maan smiles at her and said tum iha.

Geet: - baas milne aayi hoon, aapne pati se.

Maan get up from there chair and goes near to her and hugged her tightly and said so u missed me.

Geet:-wrong Mr Khurana,

Maan freed her first then said oh really.

Geet try to control her smile and said yes.then Geet placed the container on the side table and said aapka meeting kaise gaya?

Maan:-all is fine, in fact my work is almost done and we can leave today early then we will go to hp also tomorrow.

Geet delighted and said aww, good, and here another good news for u.

Maan held her waist and pull her closely and said really,

Geet shied and said yes and then said maan. Aap ke liye kuch laayi hoon.

Maan smiles and take the phone and said to adi , he will busy for some time, no one should disturb them.

Then maan look at geet with desire and said jaan,

Geet lowered her head and said maan iye office hain.

Maan pull her and now geet curshed in maan's broad chest.Maan look at her face and then her lips, those soft rose patal like rose. Always giving him invititaion to taste it.Geet saw the desire, naughty looks on maan's eyes and she almost open her lips and it's clear invitation and maan accept it. First it's very slowl and gentle kiss then it becomes passaionate.

After some time they broke and both panting, geet shied and red and hide herself in maan's arm.

Maan hugged her back and kissed her hair.

After some time geet said maan , chaliye khana kha lijiye.

Maan smiles and both sat on the couch and both fed each other. Maan relished kheer which is specially made by geet.

Then geet slied her hand on his waist and said maan, mein appse ek baat kahu toh aap gussa toh nehi honge.

Maan look at her and said kya pata chala aapko sameera ke baarein mein.

Geet shocked and surprised to heard it and said maan , aapko kaise pata chala.

Maan :- Mere pyaare se wify jee , kal se hi mujhe pata tha, bina iss baat ki detail mein na jana tak aap shanty nehi bathinge.

Geet smiles and said sorry maan, oh actually, I have some doubt and now after my investigation my doubt proved.

Maan take her in his lap and said mrs khurana , aapko kya chala.

Geet:-pehele aap mujhe choriye, it's ticklish.

Maan innocently asked kyuon jee?

Geet :- aapko pata nehi,

Maan again innocently said nehi toh.

Geet pinch his hand which is carrassed geet's stmach and tickling her.

Maan smiles and said ok bolo.Geet gives him some papaers and said see it and u'll understand what's going on and we need more proof and so u have to go with me some where and pull him.

Maan:- are pehele isse study toh karne do.

Geet:-car meine par lena, now get up.

Maan:-ok, wait 2 mins.

Maan close the laptop and take necessary files and laptop and inform adi about his leave and then leave the office.

By their way, they meet sasha who is fuming to see maan's hand on geet's waist .

Sasha:- oh mk, noida ke project ke baarein aur London ke project ke baarein mein aapko kuch kehena hain?

Maan:- baad mein sasha.

Sasha silent there and look at geet angrily.

Geet try to control her smile.

Both maaneet sat in the car when maan asked now tell me where will we go?

Geet give him those papers and said read it first.

Maan carefully read those papers and his facial expression changed gradually.

Maan:- this women stopp so low and rahul .I don't bealive this two r ruining everything. Still dadi ma trust them.

Geet placed her hand on his shoulder and said maan, aap dadi ma ko kyuon galat samajh rehe ho?she didn't know anything, it's all planned by rahul and sameera cause sameera wants u and ur property and rahul wants money , name fame which is share by u.Rahul feel jealous about u , I guess it's not came in one or two day, it's from child hood or something. And sameera , u reject her and she wants revenge.

Maan I din't now read that diary but it's guess.I saw it in sameera's eye full lust for u. the way she look at u , they way she try to go close to u.it's all indicate one thing. Maan u know u never want to marry any one but u agreed and marry me now tell me .

Maan:- so u support her.

Geet:- no,jaanu, I'm not supporting her.I'm just clearing her point of view.

Maan:- what ever, I have to deal with them.

Geet:- hmmm.maan,I told meera about it and meera will tell dev so.

But maan shouts, r u crazy, u told every one.

Geet:- uff, maan stop shouting, first listen to me , I told meera, cause I need her help and today only for her I take these papers , dairy from there, so and I told her.

Maan called dev and said come and meet him in their farm house.

Geet:- but dadi ma alone in the house.

Maan called there and find after geet ' meera came out pari, Vicky and yash return and they r now going to attain some party.

Geet:-ok, but I need to talk to papa jee.he is still upsate about it.

Maan:- no darling, he is not, I told him everything about the situation and he understand it.Actually last couple of days situations were very complicated , so .

Geet:-hmmm.

Both reached at farm house and after some time dev- meera also reached there.

Maan told them the full story, dev shocked to hear it.

Dev:- bor, aane iye sab pehele kyuon nehi bola.

Maan:- dev, this is not easy ,mein agar batata bhi toh koi trust karta, aur agar karta koi bhi toh bhi problem nehi jata, dev, just like sameera, rahul also, same,, both r so low, they will do anything to fulfill their wish. Or maan lo mein batata phir bhi kya profe tha mere paas, kuch nehi,hume iss baar pura plan ke sath kaam karma hoga.

Dev:-ok bro. but thanks bhabi, agar aap help nehi karte toh.

Meera:- yes geet, without help , we cannot know this and get these proof infact, I deny to help u that time but.

Geet smiles and said it's ok. Not enough of baat, let's go home, it's very late now.

Maan:- jaan, can u give me a glass of water.

Geet nodded in goes from there.

Maan :- ha, dev- meera, tum lo jao aur dekho, oh dono kya akr rehe hain.and I'll call dadi and dad , we will return after geet's pagphere from hp.

Dev:- mean, u r staying here

Maan:-ha, kuch kaam hain then we have to hp tomorrow early morning, and will be return 2 days later and remember just lock the door of our room.

Meera:- bhabi already lcoked ur room bhaiya .

Maan:-hmm.

Thye greeted maan and leave from there.

Geet came and saw no one is there .

She feels scared when pair of hands hugged her from behind and nuzzles his nose in her neck.

Geet shocked and surprised then feel pleasure and close the eyes.

She said dev, aur meera kaha hain.

Maan:- y r u wanting them to disturb my romance.

Geet shied and said aap bahut badmahs ho gaye ho.

Maan:- hmm, kya karu, koi agar itna irrestable ho toh , mein kaise accha rahu and bite her shoulder lightly.

Geet moaned maan. And maan increase his kisses from right to left shoulder.Then he turn her and said jaan, hum aaj raat iha rehenge, kal early morning we will start our journey for hp. Then after two day we will be back. Then after 4 days I'll leave for pune, Chennai and then goa.

Geet:- ek min , I means,

Maan :- jaan, u will continue ur study na and I'll admit u in university for ur master that time I'll complete my pending works.

Geet freed herself and said I'm not going any where with u.I'll be abck to hp and then continue my study from there.

Maan:- jaan, pls try to understand.

Geet:- nehi sunna mujhe kuch, aur mein abhi wapas ghar ja rehi hoon, mujhe iha bhi nehi rehena.

Maan :- geet,

Geet:- aapko pareshan hone ki baat nehi hain, mein khud chali jaungi and then geet try to leave when maanheld her wrist and pull her and said geet, stop beaing child, ur adult now and have to understand my work schedule.if u don't then I'm helpless but it's final.

Geet look at maan sadly .Maan cupps her face and said jaan. It's difficult, even for me also but just for few days. Waise bhi after u engaged with study, u'll not miss me.

Geet freed herself again and just ask, kab kya karma hoga, mujhe bata dena,

Maan smiles and said that's like my jaan.

But geet ignored and walked out from there.

She sat on the stair and tries to control her tears.

Geet to herself, u'll not cry, when he is not interested on u, he never loves u, it's just his duty, nothing more, he do, did everything due to his duty.I'm fool .he loves me he loves me lot. But oh mujhe chor ke ja kyuon rehe hain, kaise rahungi mein unke bina.oh mujhse pyaar karte hain par kyuon mujhe chor ke ja rhee hain, ha mein hi kaha tha further study par phir bhi oh,

Geet hugged her knees tightly and try to control her tears.After some moments she feels, some one carries her and she suddenly hide her face in his neck and hold him tightly.

Maan placed her on the kitchen slab and give her water and said drink it.

Geet drink water then looks at maan who is already on his black vest and chopping vegetables.Geet look at her hubby who is looking hot now.

She feels sorry to forget about dinner.Geet slowly said sorry.

Maan smiles at his wfiy and said darling just pass me that bowl.

Geet pass the bowl and said I'll make the dinner.

Maan:-no,I'll make the dinner today .now just sit there.

Geet makes face and sit there but after some time when she again said maan,I'm sorry.

Maan:- hmmm.

Maan almost done with dinner and now making roti when geet said I'll help u maan.

Maan:- just sit there quietly .

Geet murmur, baba jee iye kya abhi gussa hain mujhe se,I said sorry na, agar mein inke bine nehi rehe pati ,aur iye baat kahi toh .

Maan whisper toh kisne kaha mujhe chor alag rehene .

Geet look at him and stammer mat matlab .

Maan rub his nose with her and said matlab madam , aap mere sath ja rehe ho, mein principal se baat karunga, aur u'll join after this, ok.

Geet with tear full eyes look at him and hugged him.

Maan:-lo, aab iha pe bhi rona, tum log ka rona ka bahan chaiye, khushi ho toh rote ho aur gham ho toh bhi rote ho.

Geet punch his chest playfully and said aapko mujhe tease kar accha lagta hain na.

Maan nodded in yes then hugged her tightly.

In dinner time both fed each other.

After dinner maan carry her in his arm and said so darling how's the dinner.

Geet kissed his cheek and then hide her face in his neck and bahut accha.,

Maan feels tickling due to geet's breath on his neck.

He placed her on the bed and said accha, toh mujhe ek bahut bara gift chiaye islke liye, uske liye bhi, kya meine tumhe mere sath le jaraha hoon.

Geet smiles and said kya gift.

Maan placed her finger on his lips and said now give me a kiss.

Geet's eyes wide and she just nodded no.

Maan hold her waist and pull her and said what no, either u give me a kiss or I'll leave u in Delhi.

Geet made a baby face and said u r mean, u r bad,

Maan:- yes , I know now give me a kiss.

Geet again nodded no and maan try to say something when his phone ring and maan picked it and after some time he smiles and said ok, thanks and give some instruction again.

Geet already know it's regarding rahul and sameera.

After maan cut the call , Geet asked so what happen?

maan hugged her waist and said so darling our planned work .well when maan isngh khurana planned something then and geet giggle.

Maan look at her angelic face and said my mood is very fine so I forgive u but I'll take my gift in my style and then he kissed her full mouth.

At first geet's eyes wide then she slowly try to respond him well.

After some time they broke and geet hugged him tight .

Next day early morning they start their jeourney for hp

Precap:-.Maaneet in Hp.

Then honey moon.

After one day maan take geet with her for their small honey moon.

Geet see the placed and mesmerized by beauty and said it's beautiful.

Maan said our small honeymoon

Maan standing near the river when some one holds her waist from behind and placed a kissed on his shoulder and rubbed her nosed there.
Maan hold her hand and said jaan.
Maan pull her in front of him and said don't tease me.
but that woman smiles and giggling and said oh really my jaanu.
Maan give her a kiss and bite her lower lips.

That woman shouts maaan.

Maan smiles and said kya hua, geet?

That woman smiles and said kya hua geet, aapna bahut bure ho, dekha kya kya, ek toh kal sara raat mujhe sone nehi dia, subha neend aaye toh aap mujhe sunrise dikhane le aaye then now u .

Maan smiles and pull her in hug.
Dadi ma shocked to heard about maan and said I don't knwo what to tell now? it's impossible,
Vicky:- even for us also it's totally unexpected.

Rahul standing behind the bar and his lawyer said I'm sorry mr khurana, Sir I mean Maan Singh khurana close all way for us.
Rahul punch the wall.

Geet slapped sameera once more

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi all
how r u all?

Note:-
sorry for any mis take.
updated next part. pls read it and comment it
hope u all like it.
all my silent readers pls press the liked button.
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pls press the liked button also.
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now hopefully All confusion is cleared regarding msk is negative or positive.I gave plenty of hints in previous update but few of them r guess it correctly.
now hopefully every one happy again, no one angry on me and thinking msk will be negative.
are this maaneet ff , maan or geet never will be negative.
In promo, in update and in precap there r plenty of hints.
anyway enjoy the update.
other ffs will be updated soon. hopefully from tomorrow.


Next part is waiting for big surprise and
😉
next part is full of maaneet moments and their honeymoon , small honey moon .
I'll reply all of ur comment soon and loved all the lovely comments.
ur comments inspired me lots.
keep commenting.
love
rakhi



Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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waiting to knw wat is cooking in MSK's mind to trap sameera nd rahul

loved the part

wonderful update.........

maaneet moments were sweet nd romantic!!!!!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it n thanks for clearing whether maan is a negative or positive character
n the precap is awesomeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it.....
maan knew that his wify wud b upto some mischief...😆
loved meera for helping geet without much question...this shows that she is trustworthy....
sasha still after maan...uff...doent she know he is married now...geet will not leave her...😆
so it clear now what sam n rahul want...at last their true intentions r revealed in front of some of the members of the family...
geet now surely cant live without her hubby...😳...cant even think of going away frm him...waht will happen when her coll will start...😆
waiting for their mini honeymoon in HP n for the surprise given by maan...😉
also wondering what maan will do or has already done to take care of his so called cousin rahul...😡...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update............loved it..............thank god no sameera in this part............

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