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Posted: 14 years ago

part 56 : Daadi & Rano were hating the way the two were leading their life Me too 😔

He wondered career.. she wanted to join KC uska kya..bekar hi mujhe se itna mehnat karya. Waise aacha hain nahi tho use wanha bhi jhalna padtha. She went on talking for few mins. Oh god this is definitely not wat Geet talks he felt. She could never go yak yak about her self without him..non stop. Her dreams were also filled with Maan.. OMG.... he just gulped down couple of more drinks & tried to pretend to listen to her. it is difficult to wipe –off old image of little geet .... this is strange that how cum geet still can not notice .......how much he dznt like the new geet .... m sad with change in geet but some humours bit of this update made me smile

He waited for her to help him, but she just served herself & waited for him at the table. Oh god aab main kya loon h wondered. Isse yeh bhi yaad nahi kya, I don't know wat to have, uff..red wala dry chicken, hen green wala paneer...oh god where is that now.. ok...black wali dal..roti kitni...he looked at her... she knotted her brows.. wondering wat was taking him so long. Meri sweety hoti tho sab bata thi...then he laughed..agar who hoti tho main ghar main khaa raha hota, actually wohi kilati he almost blushed then knocked his thought... she doesn't exist any more. Maan jo bhi yehi hain.. aab jhaloo isse. ....gosh !!! this is too much😡 ......i dnt thnk she has forgotten anything but just has grown more mature ......😊..even m tryng to convince myself as maan to accept this geet

He made a grumpy face & sat on the opposite side. He had couple of more drinks trying to see if she opposes. He knew his little wify would not like him drinking too much. He took couple more drinks making it obvious that he was drinking. But she cared a dam. Instead she continued talking to him non -stop about something or other. He really got high & wondered ek baat tho hain dono Geet aur rimi non - stop bolti hain. Challo kuch tho similarity hain. she din even stop him from drinking shocking ........😡😭 😭😭😭

As they walked back to the car he called the cab.
Geet - cab kyun bula rahen ho Maan

arrey yaar phir Maan...oh god I hate this..he just looked at her with dazed eyes - I am drunk
wah ek time tha madam ko phone main pata chal jata tha ki main drunk hoon muje gadi nahi chalna hain.. sab kuch chood kar adhi raat ko mujhe lena aa jati thi..aur yanha uske samne I had so many drinks & not even able to walk..she is asking me why cab..main ne kaha na yeh Geet nahi tho nahi bus.. he waked his chest just above his heart..chup..sun legi
Geet - kya Maan
phir Maan..seriously I hate her.. .. u can't hate Geet...nahi yaar yeh tho simi hain...simi nahi rimi..ok wat ever..I hate her.. I hate this wight. Yeh meri Geet ho nahi sakti nahi ho sakti...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭me and maan both are going mental yaar ........geet ke harkato se....... when last tiem maan was drunk ..she herself called cab aur ab ..........m gng all crazy and shouting ........and all because of ur brilliant writng skill😡 that everything seems so realistic👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

part 57 : Geet pointed at Maan who seemed funny checking himself at the mirror.
Rano - kya huwa?
He blabbered - have I grown fat?? this was funny😆😆😆

Geet went to her room. Wondering does he usually drink so much feeling bit scared & worried. she had full right to stop him nd this is what he wanted ........ maan calls geet creature .....sorry geet will hurder him for this once she gets to knw this ..........maan's state .......😭😭😭😭😭😭She gladly switched to wear his choice of cloths. She found out all about his likes & dislikes now which was pretty much the same always. i was bit relived to read this .......... u knw m so much effected by ur ff's at the end i shud not forget its all fictitious ........... awesum update ..👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
hmmm.....The return to the magical can only happen with the return to innocence.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

She gladly switched to wear his choice of cloths. She found out all about his likes & dislikes now which was pretty much the same always.

hey Muskan
you never answered my question
BTW about the update
are you suggesting that Geet thinks that Maan has changed
one thing for sure you are clear
Maan's life revolces around Geet and she is unaware of the fact
she is moving with the world
where as he is moving around her past
she being in LOndon for 4 yrs changed as per the surrondings
whereas Maan remained aloof of the world around
she grew into an adult when she left she was just a teenager
whereas he was a grown man when she was still with her
so his desires and wants are same
is is what he has to understand
now that she has grown up she understands the true meaning of marriage
she's been to London and must have seen much more...........😳
she now blushes and wants him to make a first move
earlier she was just a child a kid and kids openly display their love
where as we adults shy away from people and only display our affections when we are alone
and she being a woman will definately want her man to approach her
have written too much
you never reply
so what's the use?
any ways I like pouring my heart out

sorry for not replying...
actually sorry to every one...not just u...
actually all the spare time I get I spend in typing the update...
in between..like having food & waiting ..I read the comments on my cell phone...
so replying gets difficult....
but I surely love reading the comments .. offcourse u know it better than me... u too write beautifully...
my answer still to all this doubts lie in that poem....
read between the lines...
thanxs a lot for all the beautifull views... they are thought provoking....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi. r u updating Deewangi.
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls update mushki...!!!

can't wait for maan response seeing geet again in traditional suits...!!!

pls pls pls do yaar...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

WAITING for ur next update.

WAITING for ur next update.

WAITING for ur next update.

especially d engagement part.
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
She gladly switched to wear his choice of cloths. She found out all about his likes & dislikes now which was pretty much the same always. ----------
why is geet askign others about wht maan likes ?
before she used to pick eveyrthing out for him
wht happened to deewani geet? i mss her
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm scared of the deewangi updates these days 😆 cause i dont want them to be sad 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting😍
Waiting😍
Waiting😍
Waiting😍

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