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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!! Wow!! Soham,Sonia,Swati S3 man what a superb update...Full on rockingπŸ‘πŸΌ...Sajan in every scene Wow!!😍...mazza aa gaya read karkey & every situation imagine karkey...Each scene and every dialogue and every thought was excellent...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...magnificently written update...BAHUT Bahut bahut Zyaada marvellous update thaa...πŸ‘πŸΌThough the update was too short But it was simply wonderfull and Out-standingπŸ‘πŸΌ...What a perfectly written updateπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...kamal ka tha....story is progressing smoothly and very well...each situation n moment in the story matches perfectly with the situation n story ...SUPER FANTABULOUS and Super mind blowing update...GOOD work S3πŸ‘πŸΌ...πŸ‘...

As I said 2 joseph in my comment on His new FF that Joseph, Soham,Swati n Sonia U 4 r the best writers of IF...
πŸ‘πŸΌ...Ur FFs are really Marvellous...Ur writing style is Fantastic ..U r perfectionist..U take care of every minute detail in your FF's...U r The BEST ...Infact Best is a small word 2 describe your writing skills..So I would Say U S3 are BESTESTTT...U r Super Super Super Super fabulous and Stupendous Writers...πŸ‘πŸΌ..I love ur FF very very very very muchhh...Urs FF S3 n joseph new FF is the most rocking FF of India forum...πŸ‘πŸΌ...

Ur this update was super cool...U presented and described each situation n moment brilliantly and awesomely ...Amazing and Awesome update...πŸ‘...Wow!! Sajan beginning scene was excellent.πŸ‘πŸΌ Starting with Gunjan lost in thoughts of what samrat thought last night ...this scene showed that Samrat's thought about Scholarship had hurt Gunjan very much ...Then when Samrat when he called gunjan to his cabin She was so scared but Samrat OMG! was cool n smiling and told her 2 accompany him to record room to get some files..files which he could have asked anyone 2 get them he didnt have 2 get on his own..But he wanted to get those files himself with Gunjans help..😊Wow!! 😊He wanted to spend time with her and he doesn't even realize it...he was so excited that when gunjan was hesitating he became slightly rude..wow!! what a scene😊😊...πŸ‘πŸΌ..mazza aa gaya....πŸ‘...samrats eagerness amazed me and what amazed me more is that he doesn't even know why he is doing all this but still his heart is making him do this and he is doing it...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ...when will he accept his feelings??...and store room scene was SUPER MARVELLOUS ...this scene proved Sajan are developing feelings 4 each other...they r realizing it but running from it also...beginning of store room scene was Super cool n Mind blowing...Yeh mera favorite scene hai...πŸ‘πŸΌ.Sajan both trying 2 switch the Light on and samrat hand upon gunjan hand and Sajan lost in each others eyes...MAN WoW!! What a cute sceneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘..really lovely scene...U wrote it so beautifully ...Simple yet Awesome n sweet cute and most lovely scene...very well written each moment of this sceneπŸ‘πŸΌ..I loved imagining this scene a lottt😍...Kya scene tha..😍...

But what happened after it was also Brilliantly written...Sajan each thought and confused state was superbly described...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...Sajan both have realized they felt something but these feelings r making them so confused n scared due 2 their different thoughts n circumstances of life that they donot want 2 accept n face these feelings as if they accept them then they will have 2 face them also n let these feelings rule their hearts n right now they are not ready 2 accept it so they both are running away from their feelings n denying 2 even themselves that they felt anything at all...as if they deny then they can face one another...As Samrat hates weakness and these feelings are sign of weakness 2 him and As he doesnt want feelings to rule him N get in the way of his aim n as status n class is imp 2 him and as he is confused also so that's why he is running away from His feelings and suddenly started behaving rudely with Gunjan 2 hide his feelings..and His rude behavior is making Gunjan more scared n confused who is running from her feeling and thoughts ...and sam behavior hurt her also thats why now she has decided 2 concentrate on her work only and maintain distance from samrat and she has understood what rahul had been telling her all along that Samrat is different from them...she realized that though samrat is not a bad person but his view and circumstances is diff from them...their outlook of life is diff also...whats achievement for gunjan is charity 4 samrat..As their lifestyles and status is different...So Gunjan has decided to stay away from sam and do her work and not let her feeling rule her life...But WILL SAJAN be able to run away from their feelings????? KYA KOI BHI ZYAADA WAQT APNI Feelings seh baag sakta hai ..And agar baag bhi gaya and how long will Sajan RUN away from what they felt in store room..???????????? πŸ˜‰...let see what happnes...😊...U wrote this scene n sajan confused state excellently S3πŸ‘..loved it πŸ‘πŸΌ...

I liked this self respecting Gunjan ...πŸ‘πŸΌ ...Samrat has increased gunjans Salary and Gunjan is hurt n angry well she has the right 2 be angry Though samrat thinks he is helping her But Samrat doesnt realize what he is doing is charity and samrat doesnt realize that any self respecting n hard working person hates charity N he/she wants only 2 be appreciated 4 his/her work...If Samrat had increased gunjan salary bec of her hard work then it would have been fine but this increase looks like charity.....and Gunjan did right in refusing this increased salary ..I really Love this Sweet and self-respecting character Gunjan a lotttπŸ‘πŸΌ...But what will samrat do when he realizes Gunjan has refused to take increase salary ???? I think he will be very angry and take it as an insult on himself...Man Kya hoga ??? πŸ˜• lets see...

Man its amazing Samrat didnt look at gunjan when she came to his cabin in the evening .he just talked 2 her and after Gunjan left without looking at her he knew Something was wrong and gunjan is behaving different .and Samrat is feeling scared of loosing GunjanπŸ˜‰ Wow!! And U know When a person is scared of loosing someone and wants that person always with him then Wow!! kya kya kar sakta hai ...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š.But Will Samrat let his heart rule ? πŸ˜•...Will he go 2 any length 2 make gunjan stay near n with him??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...can he let go of his AIM n thoughts of class etc??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...Lets see...

Precap is interesting πŸ‘πŸΌ..GUNISH meeting ..Wow!!πŸ‘ Now what will samrat do ??πŸ˜‰will he be able 2 stop this meeting??Will he feel something like jealous ?? will he accept his feeling from which he is running away??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...Really want 2 know answer 2 these questions...And This story is getting very exciting...πŸ˜‰ really want 2 read further part of story whats gonna happen???πŸ˜‰...

SO Pleaseee Soham , Swati, Sonia Plss Update Soonn and thanks 4 pm...and Once again AWESOME n Super Out-Standing Update...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘enjoyed whole update very muchπŸ‘πŸΌ...Superb work S3πŸ‘πŸ‘...

Do update soon...

Love Ur friend
Gunjan😊😊...


...

Edited by 1gunjan7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SM_317

wow awesomeee part...sajan scenes were amazing😳..loved it..cont soon n thanks 4 d pm..πŸ˜ƒ




Thanks dear, for your reply.😊 We are glad you loved SaJan scenes. We will be updating soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: saduf

totally awesome update...Samrat is so unpredictable...and poor Gunjan was hurt by her salary increment...actually hurting her selfrespect.

lovely update
cont soon


Thanks dear, for your lovely comment.😊 Samrat hurts Gunjan but mostly unintentionally.The other times it is to ensure that he remembers to keep away from her.😊 We will be updating soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pragya_luvsajan

Hey! awesome part! sorry for not commeting! tough i was surely readind the ff!

well amand gun going in for some serious misunderstandings! i really hope things get sorted reallly very soon!
and waiting for the next part!
keep rocking! :)



Thanks Pragya for your lovely comment here.😊 We will be updating soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey πŸ€—!
Edited my SPOT on Page 127...
Check it out!! =D
Love,
Nivriti❀️
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Posted: 14 years ago
amzinggg updates ..
read d last few updates 2gther..n am able 2 cmnt now as i was inactve 4 a while
bt realyyy
njoyed readng dem olll
thnx 4 d pms
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Posted: 14 years ago
THIS IS INCREDIBLE...
What excited me d most was The Opening Banner! Sooo Beautiful...
Really apt for d FF! Gr88 work Aashi πŸ€—

A Complete SaJan Update... No interference by anyother character nothin... It was simply our adorables...
Okay 3 idiots... The writing was marvellous... I loved d "Record Room" Sequence... Very lovable... N I can actually feel d change in Samrat...
But u noe wat I was loving d BOSSY Samrat more than the GUD BOY Samrat!!! Neways the story has to move on... n there wil b a conclusion one day!!! M sure its gonna b really gud...
I don actually have much to comment today... But the major thing is that this update was superbbb!! I jus cant get my eyes over d siggy n want to go thru d update again n again!!
I hope u guys update d next part soon n show us what happens in d meeting!!!!
Woahh m soo excited... donno for wat exactly but I am!!! πŸ˜†
GUD LUCK...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SajanRox

RES!πŸ€—

*******
*Edited*
Hey S3πŸ€—!
Awesome UpdateπŸ‘..Truly Magical😳😳!
The hand scene was adorable☺️..
"
SAMRAT's hand felt a smooth silk touch. He too had found the switch board... and his hand was on GUNJAN's hand... the lights had been switched on... the darkness in the room vanished, but SAMRAT and GUNJAN just stood there...SAMRAT's hand still on GUNJAN's hand. Both looked at each other. As SAMRAT was lost in GUNJAN's expressive, beautiful eyes... GUNJAN was lost too... in SAMRAT's eyes. For the first time in his life, SAMRAT felt different ... he was very close to GUNJAN... he could hear her soft breathing... he could smell her sweet scent. GUNJAN was lost too...for she saw something very different in those harsh and cold eyes.
" 😳😳😳
Hayyyeee!!! Mein Mar Jawa!!😳
And the POV of SaJan were outstandingπŸ‘..
But what Samrat did to Gunja was a little hurting... He increased her salary so that she can raise her living standard... He is a businessman and does not know how a middle class family respects each and every penny they earn..
But all in all it was a very cute update!😳
Waiting eagerly for you to update! 😍
Please continue As Soon As Possible...😳
Love,
Nivriti❀️



Thanks Nivriti for editing.πŸ˜› Thank you for your words of appreciation for the simple and sober hand scene. This was really a treat for us to write.😳 Yes, Samrat has yet again hurt her. He thinks like a businessman would... feelings and emotions don't have a place in his life.

We will be updating soon.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

OMG!! Wow!! Soham,Sonia,Swati S3 man what a superb update...Full on rockingπŸ‘πŸΌ...Sajan in every scene Wow!!😍...mazza aa gaya read karkey & every situation imagine karkey...Each scene and every dialogue and every thought was excellent...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...magnificently written update...BAHUT Bahut bahut Zyaada marvellous update thaa...πŸ‘πŸΌThough the update was too short But it was simply wonderfull and Out-standingπŸ‘πŸΌ...What a perfectly written updateπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...kamal ka tha....story is progressing smoothly and very well...each situation n moment in the story matches perfectly with the situation n story ...SUPER FANTABULOUS and Super mind blowing update...GOOD work S3πŸ‘πŸΌ...πŸ‘...

As I said 2 joseph in my comment on His new FF that Joseph, Soham,Swati n Sonia U 4 r the best writers of IF...
πŸ‘πŸΌ...Ur FFs are really Marvellous...Ur writing style is Fantastic ..U r perfectionist..U take care of every minute detail in your FF's...U r The BEST ...Infact Best is a small word 2 describe your writing skills..So I would Say U S3 are BESTESTTT...U r Super Super Super Super fabulous and Stupendous Writers...πŸ‘πŸΌ..I love ur FF very very very very muchhh...Urs FF S3 n joseph new FF is the most rocking FF of India forum...πŸ‘πŸΌ...

Ur this update was super cool...U presented and described each situation n moment brilliantly and awesomely ...Amazing and Awesome update...πŸ‘...Wow!! Sajan beginning scene was excellent.πŸ‘πŸΌ Starting with Gunjan lost in thoughts of what samrat thought last night ...this scene showed that Samrat's thought about Scholarship had hurt Gunjan very much ...Then when Samrat when he called gunjan to his cabin She was so scared but Samrat OMG! was cool n smiling and told her 2 accompany him to record room to get some files..files which he could have asked anyone 2 get them he didnt have 2 get on his own..But he wanted to get those files himself with Gunjans help..😊Wow!! 😊He wanted to spend time with her and he doesn't even realize it...he was so excited that when gunjan was hesitating he became slightly rude..wow!! what a scene😊😊...πŸ‘πŸΌ..mazza aa gaya....πŸ‘...samrats eagerness amazed me and what amazed me more is that he doesn't even know why he is doing all this but still his heart is making him do this and he is doing it...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ...when will he accept his feelings??...and store room scene was SUPER MARVELLOUS ...this scene proved Sajan are developing feelings 4 each other...they r realizing it but running from it also...beginning of store room scene was Super cool n Mind blowing...Yeh mera favorite scene hai...πŸ‘πŸΌ.Sajan both trying 2 switch the Light on and samrat hand upon gunjan hand and Sajan lost in each others eyes...MAN WoW!! What a cute sceneπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘..really lovely scene...U wrote it so beautifully ...Simple yet Awesome n sweet cute and most lovely scene...very well written each moment of this sceneπŸ‘πŸΌ..I loved imagining this scene a lottt😍...Kya scene tha..😍...

But what happened after it was also Brilliantly written...Sajan each thought and confused state was superbly described...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...Sajan both have realized they felt something but these feelings r making them so confused n scared due 2 their different thoughts n circumstances of life that they donot want 2 accept n face these feelings as if they accept them then they will have 2 face them also n let these feelings rule their hearts n right now they are not ready 2 accept it so they both are running away from their feelings n denying 2 even themselves that they felt anything at all...as if they deny then they can face one another...As Samrat hates weakness and these feelings are sign of weakness 2 him and As he doesnt want feelings to rule him N get in the way of his aim n as status n class is imp 2 him and as he is confused also so that's why he is running away from His feelings and suddenly started behaving rudely with Gunjan 2 hide his feelings..and His rude behavior is making Gunjan more scared n confused who is running from her feeling and thoughts ...and sam behavior hurt her also thats why now she has decided 2 concentrate on her work only and maintain distance from samrat and she has understood what rahul had been telling her all along that Samrat is different from them...she realized that though samrat is not a bad person but his view and circumstances is diff from them...their outlook of life is diff also...whats achievement for gunjan is charity 4 samrat..As their lifestyles and status is different...So Gunjan has decided to stay away from sam and do her work and not let her feeling rule her life...But WILL SAJAN be able to run away from their feelings????? KYA KOI BHI ZYAADA WAQT APNI Feelings seh baag sakta hai ..And agar baag bhi gaya and how long will Sajan RUN away from what they felt in store room..???????????? πŸ˜‰...let see what happnes...😊...U wrote this scene n sajan confused state excellently S3πŸ‘..loved it πŸ‘πŸΌ...

I liked this self respecting Gunjan ...πŸ‘πŸΌ ...Samrat has increased gunjans Salary and Gunjan is hurt n angry well she has the right 2 be angry Though samrat thinks he is helping her But Samrat doesnt realize what he is doing is charity and samrat doesnt realize that any self respecting n hard working person hates charity N he/she wants only 2 be appreciated 4 his/her work...If Samrat had increased gunjan salary bec of her hard work then it would have been fine but this increase looks like charity.....and Gunjan did right in refusing this increased salary ..I really Love this Sweet and self-respecting character Gunjan a lotttπŸ‘πŸΌ...But what will samrat do when he realizes Gunjan has refused to take increase salary ???? I think he will be very angry and take it as an insult on himself...Man Kya hoga ??? πŸ˜• lets see...

Man its amazing Samrat didnt look at gunjan when she came to his cabin in the evening .he just talked 2 her and after Gunjan left without looking at her he knew Something was wrong and gunjan is behaving different .and Samrat is feeling scared of loosing GunjanπŸ˜‰ Wow!! And U know When a person is scared of loosing someone and wants that person always with him then Wow!! kya kya kar sakta hai ...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š.But Will Samrat let his heart rule ? πŸ˜•...Will he go 2 any length 2 make gunjan stay near n with him??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...can he let go of his AIM n thoughts of class etc??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...Lets see...

Precap is interesting πŸ‘πŸΌ..GUNISH meeting ..Wow!!πŸ‘ Now what will samrat do ??πŸ˜‰will he be able 2 stop this meeting??Will he feel something like jealous ?? will he accept his feeling from which he is running away??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...Really want 2 know answer 2 these questions...And This story is getting very exciting...πŸ˜‰ really want 2 read further part of story whats gonna happen???πŸ˜‰...

SO Pleaseee Soham , Swati, Sonia Plss Update Soonn and thanks 4 pm...and Once again AWESOME n Super Out-Standing Update...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘enjoyed whole update very muchπŸ‘πŸΌ...Superb work S3πŸ‘πŸ‘...

Do update soon...

Love Ur friend
Gunjan😊😊...


...

Thank You Gunjan for your lovely and appreciating reply.😊 The store room scene was again a conflict for Samrat... heart v/s mind...this time his mind won.

Gunjan felt insulted with the pay hike. She never expected this from Samrat. She is working not because her family needs that extra income, but for her self respect. But Samrat does not know that does he?? So he is not be blamed either. He has hurt her, but unintentionally.

Samrat is trying very hard to stay focussed on his aim... but with Gunjan around...this aim seems to be slipping away. So his way of staying focussed. Not looking into those beautiful eyes... lest he gets carried away again.

Wait and watch... that is all Gunjan... for the GuNish meeting.πŸ˜†

We will be updating soon.πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_tuli

THIS IS INCREDIBLE...
What excited me d most was The Opening Banner! Sooo Beautiful...
Really apt for d FF! Gr88 work Aashi πŸ€—

A Complete SaJan Update... No interference by anyother character nothin... It was simply our adorables...
Okay 3 idiots... The writing was marvellous... I loved d "Record Room" Sequence... Very lovable... N I can actually feel d change in Samrat...
But u noe wat I was loving d BOSSY Samrat more than the GUD BOY Samrat!!! Neways the story has to move on... n there wil b a conclusion one day!!! M sure its gonna b really gud...
I don actually have much to comment today... But the major thing is that this update was superbbb!! I jus cant get my eyes over d siggy n want to go thru d update again n again!!
I hope u guys update d next part soon n show us what happens in d meeting!!!!
Woahh m soo excited... donno for wat exactly but I am!!! πŸ˜†
GUD LUCK...

Thanks for your reply.😊

This SaJan special was to maintain the balance ... allow the update to have a sense of continuity as after the phone convo, SaJan scene it had to be.😊 We enjoyed writing this scene too.

The next part is the GuNish official meeting... we will be updating soon.

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