As I said 2 joseph in my comment on His new FF that Joseph, Soham,Swati n Sonia U 4 r the best writers of IF...ππΌ...Ur FFs are really Marvellous...Ur writing style is Fantastic ..U r perfectionist..U take care of every minute detail in your FF's...U r The BEST ...Infact Best is a small word 2 describe your writing skills..So I would Say U S3 are BESTESTTT...U r Super Super Super Super fabulous and Stupendous Writers...ππΌ..I love ur FF very very very very muchhh...Urs FF S3 n joseph new FF is the most rocking FF of India forum...ππΌ...
Ur this update was super cool...U presented and described each situation n moment brilliantly and awesomely ...Amazing and Awesome update...π...Wow!! Sajan beginning scene was excellent.ππΌ Starting with Gunjan lost in thoughts of what samrat thought last night ...this scene showed that Samrat's thought about Scholarship had hurt Gunjan very much ...Then when Samrat when he called gunjan to his cabin She was so scared but Samrat OMG! was cool n smiling and told her 2 accompany him to record room to get some files..files which he could have asked anyone 2 get them he didnt have 2 get on his own..But he wanted to get those files himself with Gunjans help..πWow!! πHe wanted to spend time with her and he doesn't even realize it...he was so excited that when gunjan was hesitating he became slightly rude..wow!! what a sceneππ...ππΌ..mazza aa gaya....π...samrats eagerness amazed me and what amazed me more is that he doesn't even know why he is doing all this but still his heart is making him do this and he is doing it...ππ...when will he accept his feelings??...and store room scene was SUPER MARVELLOUS ...this scene proved Sajan are developing feelings 4 each other...they r realizing it but running from it also...beginning of store room scene was Super cool n Mind blowing...Yeh mera favorite scene hai...ππΌ.Sajan both trying 2 switch the Light on and samrat hand upon gunjan hand and Sajan lost in each others eyes...MAN WoW!! What a cute sceneπππ..really lovely scene...U wrote it so beautifully ...Simple yet Awesome n sweet cute and most lovely scene...very well written each moment of this sceneππΌ..I loved imagining this scene a lotttπ...Kya scene tha..π...
But what happened after it was also Brilliantly written...Sajan each thought and confused state was superbly described...πππ...Sajan both have realized they felt something but these feelings r making them so confused n scared due 2 their different thoughts n circumstances of life that they donot want 2 accept n face these feelings as if they accept them then they will have 2 face them also n let these feelings rule their hearts n right now they are not ready 2 accept it so they both are running away from their feelings n denying 2 even themselves that they felt anything at all...as if they deny then they can face one another...As Samrat hates weakness and these feelings are sign of weakness 2 him and As he doesnt want feelings to rule him N get in the way of his aim n as status n class is imp 2 him and as he is confused also so that's why he is running away from His feelings and suddenly started behaving rudely with Gunjan 2 hide his feelings..and His rude behavior is making Gunjan more scared n confused who is running from her feeling and thoughts ...and sam behavior hurt her also thats why now she has decided 2 concentrate on her work only and maintain distance from samrat and she has understood what rahul had been telling her all along that Samrat is different from them...she realized that though samrat is not a bad person but his view and circumstances is diff from them...their outlook of life is diff also...whats achievement for gunjan is charity 4 samrat..As their lifestyles and status is different...So Gunjan has decided to stay away from sam and do her work and not let her feeling rule her life...But WILL SAJAN be able to run away from their feelings????? KYA KOI BHI ZYAADA WAQT APNI Feelings seh baag sakta hai ..And agar baag bhi gaya and how long will Sajan RUN away from what they felt in store room..???????????? π...let see what happnes...π...U wrote this scene n sajan confused state excellently S3π..loved it ππΌ...
I liked this self respecting Gunjan ...ππΌ ...Samrat has increased gunjans Salary and Gunjan is hurt n angry well she has the right 2 be angry Though samrat thinks he is helping her But Samrat doesnt realize what he is doing is charity and samrat doesnt realize that any self respecting n hard working person hates charity N he/she wants only 2 be appreciated 4 his/her work...If Samrat had increased gunjan salary bec of her hard work then it would have been fine but this increase looks like charity.....and Gunjan did right in refusing this increased salary ..I really Love this Sweet and self-respecting character Gunjan a lotttππΌ...But what will samrat do when he realizes Gunjan has refused to take increase salary ???? I think he will be very angry and take it as an insult on himself...Man Kya hoga ??? π lets see...
Man its amazing Samrat didnt look at gunjan when she came to his cabin in the evening .he just talked 2 her and after Gunjan left without looking at her he knew Something was wrong and gunjan is behaving different .and Samrat is feeling scared of loosing Gunjanπ Wow!! And U know When a person is scared of loosing someone and wants that person always with him then Wow!! kya kya kar sakta hai ...ππ.But Will Samrat let his heart rule ? π...Will he go 2 any length 2 make gunjan stay near n with him??ππ...can he let go of his AIM n thoughts of class etc??ππ...Lets see...
Precap is interesting ππΌ..GUNISH meeting ..Wow!!π Now what will samrat do ??πwill he be able 2 stop this meeting??Will he feel something like jealous ?? will he accept his feeling from which he is running away??ππ...Really want 2 know answer 2 these questions...And This story is getting very exciting...π really want 2 read further part of story whats gonna happen???π...
SO Pleaseee Soham , Swati, Sonia Plss Update Soonn and thanks 4 pm...and Once again AWESOME n Super Out-Standing Update...ππππππππenjoyed whole update very muchππΌ...Superb work S3ππ...
Do update soon...
Love Ur friend
Gunjanππ...
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