Originally posted by: gunurlove
Hey Swania and Soham'and ''''.JOSEPH (how can I forget u'Master-mind behind all this) 😉 ...
first of all thanks alott for your sooo longgg update'.Since so many days I was waiting for this'.first I thought this SS has delayed bcoz of Sonia'.bcoz u know na Sonia'light problem'😉..but later when I found such a long update'I came to know'..it requires big time to manage.'.⭐️It was asusual Fantastic and wonderful update'.Very very well written'👍🏼
First of all Nanda's scene'Mr and Mrs Nanda whole conversation was written very well'..i knew that this conversation would have some meaning'n soon I came to know at that point'.when they both were chatting abt their children marriage..specially Gunjan's marriage'when they were talking abt to find out the right man for her'.n suddenly Mr nanda stopped at that point n there I was sure now hez thinking abt monish'.n here I was like..(ohhh bs ab to wo propasal bheje ga to ye log khushi khusi maan jaen ge)😲'.then further I read and the way when you described the true and natural picture of middle class family's thougts were mind blowing'..when he realized that monish didn't match to their standard..nor they matched to him.. those were so natural thinking''..this SS truly portrayed the PERFECT PICTURE of all classes of Society with their respective thoughts and feelings'.when we read this SS..it seems like v r looking a Drama'but Best thing is that'the Story is not a drama'.it sooo real and too much close to reality in its every aspect'NANDA'S whole family scene with cute noke jhoke scene was very nicely written'👏👏👏👏👏
honestly telling Somewhere I was waiting to wind up all these n moving towards Sajan's Scene'.but I know..its really needed to be mentioned for the further story''.like Gunjan k lye koi Samrat hoga'😳(we all know this)😳'.n after that they were so surprised to heard Samrat's name from Gunjan's mouth'..n Gunjan was blushing when they told her abt it'😳😳😳..wowww'but soon my pleasure faded..when she said in seriouse tone..Ye wo Samrat nahi he.😔(but don't worry gunjan..ye wohi Samrat he..u don't know but we know)..but yaaahhh right now shez so right regarding her POV..how can she even imagine that..Businessman Samrat Shergill as her life partner'MR and Mrs Nanda dialogues were very emotional for all girls'.betiyan kitni jaldi bari ho jati hen..aj hm us k lye Prince dhoond rahe hen kal mil jae ga to wo chali jae gi'.this scene was really very touchy''Overall whole scene was veryyy nice'.👏👏
Coming to the Monish'..his parents mystery is still mystery'today we got a little bit idea abt them'.that what kind of they are..n y monish hate him soo much..but I think still there is something suspeciouse abt them'😕😕.which is not revealed yet'
According to appartment I felt that hez doing all this for Gunjan'.but how he will give it to them'what will be the reason behind this'How can Nanda family accept this so easily from him''.Monish and his dad Conversation was mind blowing'👍🏼👏
poor monish'..how much suffered he has''whatever circumstances he had to faced'.😲Don't know'''.but still felt bad for him'then I read further ...''''''''''''''''''''''''''...
n now came the Famouse scene''.for me the most wanted scene'''Samrat was soo much angry'''but why???????????????? Just for wanted to chat with her but couldnot'.awww such a cute thinking'😍..
but hez still not understanding his feelings''Gunjan cutted his call''.it annoy him soo much..n poor servent'Gunjan ka ghussa usko jhelna pra'.most of all his possessiveness for Gunjan'.. "Raat tk office me work karne se problem he..par ghar se bahir rehne me koi problem nahi" wowww so sweeettt''😳😳u know guys my blood pressure was getting high n high when i have got no sign of Sajan's phone conversation scene thoroughout this SS'🤢🤢...n at the end when i found that..i became so happy..😃😃.but then at the same time Richa's call..uff its annoying me at the high rate as well as sami's anger raised more'😡😡..then again i waited for some time...n Thanks God Gunjan tried for the last time n call was connected...😳😳...
when he heared her voice..all his anger vanished and he became just a normal at once''.wowww''..n wanted to talk with her more n more'''then I smiled just for think abt on Samrat thought little while before'when he said "in middle class logon ko sir nai chrhana chaye..jese wo Gunjan..usy to subha pochta hun"'n I was like ab Samrat Sir ko kya hua'😉😉 ab Ghussa kahan gya''but scene was very guddd'.😳😳👏👏👏👏👏👏but at the end he really hurted'not only Gunjan..but I too felt bad'..his thinking abt middle class people always make me sad''Gunjan's feeling was described sooo beautifully'.she hurted soo much by these words'😭...
little while before she was soo happy'n now he made her Sad''.All this scene was fantastically showed''👏⭐️👏⭐️'She missed her parents so much..but love her family who supported her at that worse time'..definately she will never hurt them'.thats y im scaring from Nandas..😲if they choose monish or Rahul for her..then she will not b able to deny them'
lets see''.😉
Rahul's thoughts and insecurities were also written veryyy beautifully''.actually he know Samrat AS KHADOOS very well..so hez also right with his POV'n he loves Gunjan v much'so definately he would b possessive abt her''..but what abt his any past mistake'..hmmm koi to negative point hoga na'tab hi to sajan ka rasta clear hoga'..😳😉
in short Guys..all Charcters with their respective Pov have been showed very fabulouse manners'it seems so real n natural''..Really guys in this SS..Hard working of writters is clearly visible'.👏👏👏👏👏
WELL DONE GUYS'.for writing this sooo much OUT-STANDING and AWESOME story'.
Plzzz update the next part soon'.
Cant wait for next update'so plzzz
This time try to post soon''..
With Best wishes to S3 and to Joseph for this and his new SS'
Rija
Thank you so much for understanding the effort that goes into writing these long updates😊
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