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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hey Swania and Soham'and ''''.JOSEPH (how can I forget u'Master-mind behind all this) 😉 ...

first of all thanks alott for your sooo longgg update'.Since so many days I was waiting for this'.first I thought this SS has delayed bcoz of Sonia'.bcoz u know na Sonia'light problem'😉..but later when I found such a long update'I came to know'..it requires big time to manage.'.⭐️

It was asusual Fantastic and wonderful update'.Very very well written'👍🏼

First of all Nanda's scene'Mr and Mrs Nanda whole conversation was written very well'..i knew that this conversation would have some meaning'n soon I came to know at that point'.when they both were chatting abt their children marriage..specially Gunjan's marriage'when they were talking abt to find out the right man for her'.n suddenly Mr nanda stopped at that point n there I was sure now hez thinking abt monish'.n here I was like..(ohhh bs ab to wo propasal bheje ga to ye log khushi khusi maan jaen ge)😲'.then further I read and the way when you described the true and natural picture of middle class family's thougts were mind blowing'..when he realized that monish didn't match to their standard..nor they matched to him.. those were so natural thinking''..this SS truly portrayed the PERFECT PICTURE of all classes of Society with their respective thoughts and feelings'.when we read this SS..it seems like v r looking a Drama'but Best thing is that'the Story is not a drama'.it sooo real and too much close to reality in its every aspect'NANDA'S whole family scene with cute noke jhoke scene was very nicely written'👏👏👏👏👏

honestly telling Somewhere I was waiting to wind up all these n moving towards Sajan's Scene'.but I know..its really needed to be mentioned for the further story''.like Gunjan k lye koi Samrat hoga'😳(we all know this)😳'.n after that they were so surprised to heard Samrat's name from Gunjan's mouth'..n Gunjan was blushing when they told her abt it'😳😳😳..wowww'
but soon my pleasure faded..when she said in seriouse tone..Ye wo Samrat nahi he.😔
(but don't worry gunjan..ye wohi Samrat he..u don't know but we know)..but yaaahhh right now shez so right regarding her POV..how can she even imagine that..Businessman Samrat Shergill as her life partner'

MR and Mrs Nanda dialogues were very emotional for all girls'.betiyan kitni jaldi bari ho jati hen..aj hm us k lye Prince dhoond rahe hen kal mil jae ga to wo chali jae gi'.this scene was really very touchy''Overall whole scene was veryyy nice'.👏👏

Coming to the Monish'..his parents mystery is still mystery'today we got a little bit idea abt them'.that what kind of they are..n y monish hate him soo much..but I think still there is something suspeciouse abt them'😕😕.which is not revealed yet'

According to appartment I felt that hez doing all this for Gunjan'.but how he will give it to them'what will be the reason behind this'How can Nanda family accept this so easily from him''.Monish and his dad Conversation was mind blowing'👍🏼👏

poor monish'..how much suffered he has''whatever circumstances he had to faced'.😲

Don't know'''.but still felt bad for him'then I read further ...''''''''''''''''''''''''''...

n now came the Famouse scene''.for me the most wanted scene'''

Samrat was soo much angry'''but why???????????????? Just for wanted to chat with her but couldnot'.awww such a cute thinking'😍..

but hez still not understanding his feelings''Gunjan cutted his call''.it annoy him soo much..n poor servent'Gunjan ka ghussa usko jhelna pra'.most of all his possessiveness for Gunjan'.. "Raat tk office me work karne se problem he..par ghar se bahir rehne me koi problem nahi" wowww so sweeettt''😳😳

u know guys my blood pressure was getting high n high when i have got no sign of Sajan's phone conversation scene thoroughout this SS'🤢🤢...n at the end when i found that..i became so happy..😃😃.but then at the same time Richa's call..uff its annoying me at the high rate as well as sami's anger raised more'😡😡..then again i waited for some time...n Thanks God Gunjan tried for the last time n call was connected...😳😳...

when he heared her voice..all his anger vanished and he became just a normal at once''.wowww''..n wanted to talk with her more n more'''then I smiled just for think abt on Samrat thought little while before'when he said "in middle class logon ko sir nai chrhana chaye..jese wo Gunjan..usy to subha pochta hun"'n I was like ab Samrat Sir ko kya hua'😉😉 ab Ghussa kahan gya''but scene was very guddd'.😳😳👏👏👏👏👏👏
but at the end he really hurted'not only Gunjan..but I too felt bad'..

his thinking abt middle class people always make me sad''Gunjan's feeling was described sooo beautifully'.she hurted soo much by these words'😭...

little while before she was soo happy'n now he made her Sad''.All this scene was fantastically showed''👏⭐️👏⭐️'She missed her parents so much..but love her family who supported her at that worse time'..definately she will never hurt them'.thats y im scaring from Nandas..😲

if they choose monish or Rahul for her..then she will not b able to deny them'

lets see''.😉

Rahul's thoughts and insecurities were also written veryyy beautifully''.actually he know Samrat AS KHADOOS very well..so hez also right with his POV'n he loves Gunjan v much'so definately he would b possessive abt her''..but what abt his any past mistake'..hmmm koi to negative point hoga na'tab hi to sajan ka rasta clear hoga'..😳😉

in short Guys..all Charcters with their respective Pov have been showed very fabulouse manners'it seems so real n natural''..Really guys in this SS..Hard working of writters is clearly visible'.👏👏👏👏👏

WELL DONE GUYS'.for writing this sooo much OUT-STANDING and AWESOME story'.

Plzzz update the next part soon'.

Cant wait for next update'so plzzz

This time try to post soon''..

With Best wishes to S3 and to Joseph for this and his new SS'

Rija

Thank you Rija for your awesome comment... and sorry to keep you waiting dear. we know we were late in posting this update.Embarrassed Thank you so much for understanding the effort that goes into writing these long updates😊

Yes, Gunjan's marriage is foremost on their minds now. They will be careful while choosing a groom for her, Monish seemed like a nice person, but Mr Nanda knows that their social standing is way apart from Monish's social standing. So he has stopped there. Nanda family scene is a typical scene found in most households.. ..the small arguments... senseless ones at that😛 .

And yes, for the story to progress further, all characters must get their space. Wonder if it is a coincidence then that the Nanda's are searching for a samrat for Gunjan and Gunjan knows someone named Samrat...

Every parent goes through this kind off inner turmoil when thinking about their daughters wedding... it can bring tears to the eyes of the most hard hearted person.

Monish has seen the real face of manipulative people... people who use others for their own selfish needs. He is pretty shattered by that...and that is what has turned him the way he is. He has just arranged for the apartment...the Nanda's know nothing about this. This is part of his mission Gunjan. wait for the update to know more...😉

Finally... Rija's fav scene 😆 ..but oops...it was Richa.... along with Samrat ...Rija also disappointed... aww dear it is ok... shortly later she did call up... Samrat is still not so sure why gunjan keeps coming in his thoughts. All he wants is to hear her voice... and when he did... his anger vanished. But as is his nature, he did say something without thinking..that has hurt Gunji.

For Gunjan, family is important... so will it affect her decision... wait and Watch.😉

Rahul cares for Gunjan and now he has realised it is more than just friendship. So he is bit possessive. The mistake... further updates will clarify that soon, dear.😊

Thank you for appreciating our efforts.😊 We will update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gnaneswari

Awesome update. Loved it a lot. Liked mr.&mrs. Nanda convo. It was so realistic and happens in every house. And that car convo was hilarious. Loved every scene. Even i got tears when rd is thinking about gunjan's bidaai. The SAMRAT whom they wants for gunjan is very close to her. He was in her office. Hope they realises its soon. Sajan phone convo is very nice. But, his opinion on middle class is very disappointing for me. Hope, he changes his opinion very soon. I liked gunjan's self respect. She is innocent but strong about some things. So, monish is angry with his parents because his father abused a girl. And he is so much pain. But, madly in love with gunjan. I liked the fact that he wants to himself according to gunjan. But what happens when gunjan says no to him?! Waiting for their second meeting. And rahul is very insecure. What happend in his past? Waiting eagerly to read it. He is going to propose gunjan on monday night! I know gunjan's answer will be no! But i'm not sure of it. What will be her reaction? Waiting eagerly to read next part. U guys wrote it brilliantly. Loved every scene. And please don't cut any scenes this is my request. And i love to read long updates. Thanks for long update. Please do cont very soon. Thanks for pm

Thank You so much, Gnaneswari for loving the long update.😳 We have tried to maintain the simplicity. Every family does spend such time together... pure family time.

Is it pure coincidence that they want a Samrat for Gunjan and Gunjan's boss's name is Samrat?

His opinion about Middle class people has not changed... so he still looks down upon them.

Gunji is typically middle class... self respect means more than anything for her. Her family and the values are uppermost in her list of priorities and naive as she may be where other things are concerned, if her family is hurt, she react.

Monish has suffered a lot emotionally due to his dad's misdeeds. But he is trying to change himself for Gunjan.

Rahul is insecure, because till now he had no competition, now Gunji talks about Samrat and blushes too...and as yet he does not know about Monish. Wonder what will happen then...

We will be updating soon.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Kritianya

Sry for the late cmnt
realy a nice update
but want more of sajans part
gunji ki shadi ki baat shuru ho gayi hai
luv family sceens
luv gunji blushing on name of samrat
solved a mystry of monish but again created one of rahul
just luved it
creating new twists & turns in the story
luv sajan part but i think sam thought of increasing the gunjis sal can hurt her & can create problem b/w them
hope sam get 2 know evrything about gunji soon
& sajan soon starts realising their feeling for each other

Thanks, Kritika, for liking the update. 😊

The Nanda's like all parents of girls, want the best of Gunjan too. They will be choosy, no doubt.

Rahul's mystery will be cleared in the next few updates.

Samrat is thinking typically. ... he does not know Gunjan that well as of yet, so he does not know how she will feel. He thinks he is helping her out.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
I loved the 1st part... the Nanda conversation... it was soo gud...
Felt as if even m sitting among them n talkin to those guys...
In d next part...
Monish... again I really lykd his attitude... I find him pretty smart... 😉
SaJan... haaayeee they were soo cute on phone especially Samrat! But y does he have to show his Bossy nature day-in and day-out... 😕 But i still adore him allooottt 😳 😳
Rahul... Ohh he is very possessive with Gunjan... He wants her 24x7 with him only... Gosh she'll gt irritated sum day! Bachpan k din gaye baccha... He has to understand that...

But overall the whole writeup was mindblowing as usual...
M waiting for next update especially for Monish's Apt thing!!! 😃
Do update soon... This one was li'l late... but next one if possible make it soon or else I'll go crazy coz of d huge bunch of mystery n hidden facts of d story 😆 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys awesome update👏 loved each n every scene beautifully written👏loved the nanda conversation it was too gud , sajan phone coverstion was soo cute loved it a lot😳rahul is so possesive of gunjan😉 briliant work guys keep it up loved it 👍🏼 plzz cont soon with the next part 😛n thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Guyss!🤗 Updated my spot on Page 122... Check it out! =) Love, Niv!
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally completed to read this update sorry for late reply hon 😳 again superb and awesome update as usual 👏👍🏼 with each and every update story is progressing wonderfully making us eager to get to know all char's povs ,wishes , dreams and what they feel , new feelings with each char in different way , gunjan's feelings which is changing for samrat , samrat's changing attitude , rahul's worry and care and monish's past , guilt and mission to get gunjan

nanda family one talk was very nice loved family talk, finally we came to know partially what is reason behind his hate for his parents now it will be more interesting to read what he will do and how will gunjan make his way for her true love ,abt samrat right now felt bad the way he talked to gunjan but he is not in fault from childhood he always sees money 's imp in his life thanks to his father who made him heartless person now it will be more interesting to read how will gunjan change his life and povs ( it remind me sanaya's new show 😍) can't wait for next part hon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_tuli

I loved the 1st part... the Nanda conversation... it was soo gud...
Felt as if even m sitting among them n talkin to those guys...
In d next part...
Monish... again I really lykd his attitude... I find him pretty smart... 😉
SaJan... haaayeee they were soo cute on phone especially Samrat! But y does he have to show his Bossy nature day-in and day-out... 😕 But i still adore him allooottt 😳 😳
Rahul... Ohh he is very possessive with Gunjan... He wants her 24x7 with him only... Gosh she'll gt irritated sum day! Bachpan k din gaye baccha... He has to understand that...

But overall the whole writeup was mindblowing as usual...
M waiting for next update especially for Monish's Apt thing!!! 😃
Do update soon... This one was li'l late... but next one if possible make it soon or else I'll go crazy coz of d huge bunch of mystery n hidden facts of d story 😆 😆

Thanks for your lovely reply.😊
Glad to read that you loved the Nanda convo... it is what goes on in most homes.

Monish is pretty smart...he is planning every step carefully... making sure there are no flaws... lest it affect his chances of getting closer to Gunjan.😃

Samrat is a typical arrogant boss... letting his mind rule over his heart, though sometimes his heart does manage to win.😉

Rahul is not able to consider this fact that you have pointed out... bachpan ke din gaye... Gunjan could have someone else in her life... he still is a bit protective about her.

We are trying to update soon. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fend

hey guys awesome update👏 loved each n every scene beautifully written👏loved the nanda conversation it was too gud , sajan phone coverstion was soo cute loved it a lot😳rahul is so possesive of gunjan😉 briliant work guys keep it up loved it 👍🏼 plzz cont soon with the next part 😛n thanks for the pm😊


Thanks dear for liking the update.😊 We are glad you loved all the scenes. We have tried to give all the scenes a realistic touch. And we are glad our readers have appreciated this. We will be updating soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update.Loved each n every scene especially Mr n Mrs Nanda conversation n the whole nanda family scene.It was superb.Continue soon n thx 4 the pm.

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