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Posted: 14 years ago
Keyama REMORSE bhi nahi aya aur ANIMOSITY bhi nahien aya...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm feeling down.......
can u plz gimme some happiness and update soon🤔

thanx in advance🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
owo sorry yar. 8 pages just for the request. :) i am touched'

anyway' next update.. i actually have a update lo. i was busy' sorry party!!! anyway

don't kill me. don't bash my maan & geet' lol' its a bit long one' Shocking and surprising' not romantic at all pure hatred' is coming up' in 5-10 min
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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
I were right 😆
yesteray you typed updating accidently
while you were updating Paradox😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
what's the need
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***REMORSE***
part 8

I still have no clue is this FF or SS… lol lets see how many parts i can type….
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I walked along the stream. Shaken. Wasn't sure what to expect or what to do. Was his hatred this strong that he can't even stand me! Does he have any reason. Any strong view! Why foes he hate me? Tears rolled down my eyes. Life simply is cruel. A...! A...! Another tear rolled down my eyes.
It was nearly dark. I am no where near home. No where. I was getting restless. Scared. Petrified. Night road wasn't a perfect. I started to run. Covering my face. Praying in my heart. Praying for my safety. Suddenly few people ... A gang of mens stood in front of me. I cuckold. I drank my saliva. Road was empty. No one to see. I was scared. I ran the opposite direction but some other men came. I covered my head. Alla... Mujce bacalo.... Tears roles down my eyes. I hide my face with dupata. Just my eyes were open. I looked round for a escape but they Surrounded me. I hugged my self tight- please let me go!... Please... I non stop spine round in fear. For a escape... In my luck there was nun. Nun at all.... One of the guy grabbed my dupata and snatched it off. I screamed in horror. I instantly covered my chest with my hand. I cried for help.... No one was there no one.... He touched my back & ripes my cloths then sleev... I screamed in horde... Then another guy took a knife out held it over my chest... I tried to run but two other men held me! & he ripped the cloth exposing my bra.... I screamed again... Then suddenly a car arrived. They stopped. Freed me. I instantly covered my chest. I sat down on the floor hugging my knee. Crying.
A maans voice came from my back- was it scary Geet. I looked at him instantly. His word hit me. More painful then fear of getting raped by 10 men.

Maan- you may leave!... He ordered the gang....

Geet stood up in sock... As one by one everyone left. Leaving them alone in a deserted road that was leading no where.... Geet couldn't believe this man can stood so low. So low that he nearly left her to be raped. A girls most expensive position. Her power. He could stoop this low.
Geet- I never knew you could go this low. I never knew you could put me through this. Don't do this maan that one day this remorses will kill you. Kill you within... & that day I won't be here to forgive you. I will be far gone. Geet cried in pain. It hurts the most when your love does this to you. Your love.
Maan laughs- I will never fell guilty about this. Actually I am enjoying. Enjoying the fear on your face. The terror. The horror. I am loving it. He smirks. That land... If you don't sell me that land then.... He showed her some photo.... The photo when those monsters were ripping her cloths off.... Geet sing... Shoria sings wife raped by 10 men in one night!
Maan laughs- Imagine what will happen then. You are down enough in this culture... But from now on you won't be even able to step outside & your husband won't let you in the house....
Geet couldn't believe her ears. She wanted to die. She wanted to kill her self. Endless tears rolled down her eyes. Endless.
Maan- so option... I will pay you 100million. You will give me the land or this picture will go on the paper.... Telly!... Media.... He smirked....
Tears rolled down geets eyes....
Geet- be care-full maan! Don't fall in your own trap. You will only regret! Nothing els just regret....
Maan smirks- maan sing khurana never regrets. Never....

Geet picked her duppata up and covered her self. She walked like a ded body. A body without soul. A body with out life.
Geet walked in to her house. She broke down completely soon as she walked in. Explaining everything what maan have done! How low he went. He have crossed all the boundaries. He can't keep his dads promis anymore! Because he is going too far. Too far with this!
Next day. Maan walks in early morning. Smirking at Geet.
Maan- one day Geet! One day. Just tonight. 2 moro I want the land paper.
Geet looks at him. Simple normal.
Geet- you can do whatever you want. I won't give you this land.
Maan looks at him angrily- you little b.....
Geet- do what ever you want Mr Maan sing khurana. I won't give you this land... She repeats....
Maan- you will regret this...
Geet- let's see who will!
Maan walks out in furious. Annoyed.

Next day in paper there was the news! Everyone in geets home have left for Mumbai. Geet have made them promise never ever to move in deli. Because the storm of her life is just about to begin. She does not want anyone to be part of it. She sat in her house in HP! Waiting for maan. He have forced her to do this. She haven't done anything on her will. He simply left her with no option. Nun at all.

Geet have made a call to Shoria. Explaining everything. He understood. Geet still had the guilt somewhere why she couldn't love him. Why she couldn't be his. Why circumstances takes her happiness way! What's her mistake? What she have done. There was simply no answer. No answer at all.

Suddenly her door flew right open. As Geet expected. It's maan. Maan sing khurana. Came with another complain. He have lowered me so much that I had no shame left. I knew within my self I am pure. My believe on my self was still intact. My believe about me was always there.... Because I don't care about what people thinks about me! But of course many other does... And that many other maybe in top... Number one list is maan sing khurana. I smiled sadly while he looking at me angrily. I have no idea where this leading to but he him self have brought this out. He him self!

Maan walked across the room and grabbed her hair tight. How dare you! How dare you? He throughs Geet on the floor. She screamed in pain as her hand fell in a wrong angle. Luckily it didn't break. He throughs the paper on her face. I smiled in my pain. I smiled.

Geet- mrs maan sing khurana was brutally raped by 10 men!
Geet laughed- wouldn't I be in hospital then! Why home. Perfectly fine. Normal. Standing right in front of you. Petty! I wish I could tell them even my husband have never touched me. Where did this 10 men jumped in my life.
Maan pulls her up- how dare you call me your husband! How dare you b****!
geet didn't utter a single word after that. Not even Uff! It's not Geet Handa. There was no shame on Handa family. No shame on geet Handa. Simply mrs geet khurana. That's the person was raped! & maan.... Geet smiles as maan bashed her head against the pillar! Geet fainted instantly.




When Geet woke up she found her self in a large bed. Large room. Everything looked so expensive. This is not her house. Not her room. This is not.... She stands up instantly. She wasn't sure where was she. Her clothing sense even changed. There was White bandage round her head. She touched it. It was still in pain. Geet walks out of the room. Wondering where is she. Wondering what just happened. She covers her hair with dupata & walks out. She could here faint noise! Maybe a party. She decided to flow the noise.... It was coming closer & closer.... And suddenly when everyone seen her they stopped. There was a shock on there face. Press started to take picture....
R- how are you feeling mrs khurana?
R- is your husband treating you the right way?
R- is the family abusing you?
R- everything have happened was not your fault! How is your husband reacting?
R- are you still in much as love as you were before?
Geet looked shocked & taken back. From somewhere maan walks out of the crowd and hugs her tight.
Maan- I have missed you jaan. I am sorry. We couldn't save our baby. I am sorry. As maan looked at her a fake tears rolled down his eyes. He smirked.
Maan- please no more q! We are still in a shock.
Maan holds geet round her waist and helps her to walk off from the crowd. Soon as they enter there room he pushes her off.
Geet still didn't say a word. It was true she was his wife. I hope he remember that the day he publish this news all his property will be transferred in geets name. Everything. That was in maans dads will & then he can claim everything back from his dad! As his dad is not alive now he have to claim everything back from me! I hope he remembers that!
Maan- well let's start the day with our SR! He smirks as he takes his shirt off. Geet still had pain in her head. Her have banged hard.
Maan- we were too young to have our SR then. What was our age again... You are 7 & I was 12! But I guss now is alright. Husband & wife. The whole world knows. Oh by the way I am transferring that land under my name! As everything goes under your 1st husband! Not 2nd! I also registered our marriage. As you have decided to play the game... Let's see how long you can play! Maan holds her tight. Taking her dupata off. letting her hair loose. That was the first time he have seen her with out any dupata.... Just him... Her hair flowing elegantly. Geet didn't object with anything. Simply let him do what ever he wanted to... Except just one thing! Just one!

He unzips her dress. He looks at her as it slides off. He pushes her to the bed. Maan slowly takes her cloths off. One by one. Geet still laid there quit.
Maan- isn't that what you dreamed all your life for. Let's see how you Handel maan sing khurana! 10 men raped you right! Let's see how does it fell like. He was spitting those words. Angry..... He took off her bra & pants along with his boxer. Geet cried. Tears rolled down her eyes as he entered her body.... He didn't kiss her or anything. Simply started to move with a rhythm. She Wanted to scream in pain! But she kept quit. Only tears rolled down her eyes. Blood tears. Maan balances him self on either side of geet and moved up & down in a rhythm. Roughly. Geet just laid there like a cold body. Not feeling anything except the climax they reached. Geet holds the bed cover as his movement friction was taking her to the peak & bringing it back again... She wanted to cry.... Louder & louder but of course that she can't do. She will never cry for this monster ever.... It wasn't long before when maan clasped after there 2nd attempt. After all it was there first time! & in any angel it didn't look special. Just the sake of pleasure.....

Both feel sleep.... It was 4pm when geet managed to wake up. Extremely sore between her leg. Maan was holding her tight. She gently touched her v**** it was extremely sore. They did this only twice but the way he done it and the timing... He kept the rhythm running.... Geet walks in to the shower. She didn't cry or said a single word. She knew well this was bedding to no where! But the game they started it will tear both a apart... The remorse! There will be only remorse left. Only remorse.

Geet makes her way downstair. Whole crowd was gone. She walks in to the kitchen. Ani & dadi looks at her fuming.
Ani- this filth... Ugh! I hate her Dadi. Tell bro to kick her out soon as possible.
Dadi- of course I can't stand her either. But my son. I just couldn't believe this. Of course after all this fyilth is after our money nothing els. Dadi gives her a disgusting filthy look and walks out.

Geet felt the pain... But she still didn't utter a word. She ignored and walked in to the kitchen.

Geet start to cook the sweet. It's her first day after all. Maybe if ammy & abbu were here... It could have been different. But yes.... Geet makes the sweet anyway. Maybe just for her self. She smiles.



next- torture by khuranas!!!!!!!!!….




hay you all thanks for all the love & support

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Posted: 14 years ago

can't imagine a guy can stoop so low for properties................

nd how come they are married?????nd wen???????nd y????????

hope u would ans tis in the coming parts........

nd keya plz make geet a lil stronger nd bold,if she want to live in tat household.

wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Edited by dia_ditz - 14 years ago
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it was as I thought

the only difference is
This Maan is very near the Maan you had in Animosity
and Geet is also some what same
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god !! awsome one yaar...geet married ??? wen ll this stupid maan realise her love ??but definetely he gonna pay a big pricce
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it!! awesome...
what hapned that day.. did u sleep off updating and u changed this from FF to SS what happnd
please continue soon

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