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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#641

😛loved it...can't wait for the suspense

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Zahra

@-Zahra15-

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#642

i loved it....it was simply amazing especially the dance part..........continue soon...i hope in the next part........geet will finally know the face of chief.........thnx for the pm.........waiting for the nxt part.......

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#643

awesome update

geet will defo become mad

cant wait to read what happens next

continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#644

nice update yaar ..loved it

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#645

hiii reeet.....
u hav simply killed a lot of ppl with ur update......
it was like heaven when i was reading the marjani part..............
i was drooling...........my jaw had dropped at the combustibel chemistry that u had amazingly captured in marjani part....
geet thinking she has gone paranoid..........was hilarious.....
well she was trying locate her chief in each and every person she met....not knowing ...that it is indeed her chief who is tagging her .......

loved maan (as a cop) and geet convo..................it was fabulous
what can i say...............this update had the chemistry quotient so high that i thought probably my PC is goin to go up in flames...................

fabulous update......
u kno i was wondering what dev was doin when maan made his first appearance before geet at the club.....this update answered my doubt.....
this is the best thing about ur ff...there are no loose ends.......every point is minutely described and and given a logical conclusion

i am really looking forward for upcoming updates since u have given us such a heartracing precap...............

every update surpasses our expectations and leaves me with a feeling of pride for u......u r simply awesome

and one more thing...i guess arabian nights have got a different meaning today with ur update....
i will never be able to read the arabian nights without remembering ur HAWT marjaani update.......................

the most awaited encounter and dev proposing geet.............i am goin sleepless after reading this

ohhhhhh aaj ki neend ud gayi meri😆
i think u shud stop giving precaps that makes literally go sleepless😆...

love u a lot
reva😃

Edited by Dreamy_Mystique - 14 years ago

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#646

Thanks Reet you are just too amazing 🤗
WOW WOW that was one TOO HOT TO HANDLE update...
OMG loved their dance & so shocked to see geet as a dancer but then HE was with her so i enjoyed it 😳...
the part were chief was msk was hilarious.. & enjoyed how he kept teasing her 😆
i didnt pay much attention to dev cause i cant stand him 😡 so i was happy with geet's answer with attitude that he wasn't her bf or fiance so in ur face dev 🤣
OMG so its coming to an end although i would to keep reading it but i want maaneet to be happily together & every story has an end.. till a new one begins so i'll look forward to your new ff 😉

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#647

Fantastic,amazing part!!!!

the Dance part has been beautifully portrayed!!!

loved the whole part!!!

Fantabulous update!!!

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Najmah

@Fallen-Angel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#648

OMG Reet, just loved the update...it was fabulous, no other words can describe it.

Amazing update...plz cont soon :))

Thanx for the pm!!!

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#649

Mind blowing update!!!! Your Maan is a total enigma....so many faces...so many disguises...lord,like Geet, I'm also at a loss!

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#650

oh i love it loved it loved it... after soooo sooo sooolong time... grrrrrrrrrr

how could you do this to us... but long updates... me letting u off... LOVELY UPDATE. each & every line... awww me go fida.. & the bit when maan grabed her... hi alla... me more fida fida.. hehhe
update oss
xxxxxxxxxxx soonnn