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Posted: 14 years ago
superbbb!!!!!
maan will definitely make geet mad by his different appearances...first as a stripper and thn as a policeman!...poor geet!😆
wow!...loved thier arabian dance!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED IT!!
a very hot dance. and love when maan got pissed wheneva geets with some other guy!
loved it and cant wait to read ahead.

Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Reet

My name is Radhika

I don't think I have commented ever on anyone's fanfics so you are the first!!! 😊

You have an amazing talent to portray an engaging story so beautifully!! ⭐️

Hats off to you mate!

i hope you are not ending this amazing fanfic soon, that will break many hearts!!!!🥺

plz plz update soon waiting eagerly!!! Lots and Lots of Love❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update Reet!..the encounter between Maan and Geet was amazing..loved how Maan was pestering her just so that she blurts out what he has been longing to hear!..those smirks of victory and those moments of pure jealousy truly took my breath away!..he is so madly and hopelessly in love with her..he kept asking questions like"you have a habit of forgetting easily,..when a person is unreasonably rude ....that means there was something irking her from within ...or she is trying to conceal something bigger than it ...."..all this was just because he needed to see those reactions from Geet which proves that she hasn't forgotten him and loves him too!..aw😍..but feel bad for both of them..poor Geet is having such a tough time and Maan's rather ambigous appearances in different avatars is just confusing her..But the beauty is that no matter which look Maan deceives,Geet's heart always recognises him!..they love each-other soooooooo much..Geet felt terrible watching him strip and Maan was in no less fire when he saw Geet flaunting herself in the arabian dance!..the dance was MAGNIFICENT!!..once again you were extremely brilliant in your potrayal of events..I could really visualize Maan-Geet dancing(WHAT A DANCE⭐️) and could actually feel the chemistry they shared..I was literally going all dreamy and red while reading(=seeing) the dance sequence..BRILLIANT👏👏👏..I am so longing to see these two confess and be in each-others arms!..hayye..aise enemies mil jaye to dost kise chahiye😆😉..apart from them,I feel bad for Dev..he is a nice guy and hopefully he will find someone who loves him too!..but I am glad we dont have negative Dev here😊..AWESOME UPDATE!..cant wait to read the next part and see what will happen next!..what will Maan aka Guru tell Geet?..will Geet realize that her feelings that he is chief is right?..update soon!..love🤗
Edited by Bul3 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
it ended........😡i was hoping to see more dance & chemistry between the two😳
it was just marvellous👏👏
geet gave maan tit for tat 😆he was stripping & here geet is dancing arabic dance😉😆
the reaction on maan's face was worth watching😲😆
(did you notice i am saying these things as they were happening in front of my eyes)thats the magic of your writting😊👏👏
poor dev😲 when geet said he is not her boyfriend or fiance
plz plz plz cont soon
am axiously waiting for maneet's encounter in next update😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
god loved it soooooooo much....and i am happy to hear that updates will be more frequent now.....yayiieeeee!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Bul3

lovely update Reet!..the encounter between Maan and Geet was amazing..loved how Maan was pestering her just so that she blurts out what he has been longing to hear!..those smirks of victory and those moments of pure jealousy truly took my breath away!..he is so madly and hopelessly in love with her..he kept asking questions like"you have a habit of forgetting easily,..when a person is unreasonably rude ....that means there was something irking her from within ...or she is trying to conceal something bigger than it ...."..all this was just because he needed to see those reactions from Geet which proves that she hasn't forgotten him and loves him too!..aw😍..but feel bad for both of them..poor Geet is having such a tough time and Maan's rather ambigous appearances in different avatars is just confusing her..But the beauty is that no matter which look Maan deceives,Geet's heart always recognises him!..they love each-other soooooooo much..[will be explained in next part ..but i loved this part of ur comment so much i cant tell u ]Geet felt terrible watching him strip and Maan was in no less fire when he saw Geet flaunting herself in the arabian dance!..the dance was MAGNIFICENT!!..once again you were extremely brilliant in your potrayal of events..I could really visualize Maan-Geet dancing(WHAT A DANCE⭐️) and could actually feel the chemistry they shared..I was literally going all dreamy and red while reading(=seeing) the dance sequence..BRILLIANT👏👏👏..I am so longing to see these two confess and be in each-others arms!..hayye..aise enemies mil jaye to dost kise chahiye😆😉..apart from them,I feel bad for Dev..he is a nice guy and hopefully he will find someone who loves him too!..but I am glad we dont have negative Dev here😊..AWESOME UPDATE!..cant wait to read the next part and see what will happen next!..what will Maan aka Guru tell Geet?..will Geet realize that her feelings that he is chief is right?..update soon!..love🤗

i stopped replying to my previous comments to reply this piece of praise ...
what shall give thou ...! for this !
ahh i m taken by ur comment ...... i need really a long time to think ...what will say after this ....\
yes....he was instigating her ......intentionally .....so that she does something she spills something ......
that was so un-him ....but he did it ...
detailed report of their course of actions wil be given in next update
a big surprise waiting there.....
about dev ......he is a normal human ......very normal like us.....good and bad is an apparant thing i guess....depends on outlook or how it matters to you -- in general cases......i m speaking about ....he is a cultured learned advocate - who was in love ......so he behaved normally ....what he had to do .....
in this story there will no naintara ....so dev's presence is very much important here ....hope u understand ..
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet

i stopped replying to my previous comments to reply this piece of praise ...
what shall give thou ...! for this !
ahh i m taken by ur comment ...... i need really a long time to think ...what will say after this ....\
yes....he was instigating her ......intentionally .....so that she does something she spills something ......
that was so un-him ....but he did it ...
detailed report of their course of actions wil be given in next update
a big surprise waiting there.....
about dev ......he is a normal human ......very normal like us.....good and bad is an apparant thing i guess....depends on outlook or how it matters to you -- in general cases......i m speaking about ....he is a cultured learned advocate - who was in love ......so he behaved normally ....what he had to do .....
in this story there will no naintara ....so dev's presence is very much important here ....hope u understand ..
loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it

thanks for your reply..and you are giving me "in love with enemy"..what more can I ask for🤗!!!..I was already getting so impatient for the next part and your declaration of a surprise has made me more impatient (if that was possible😆)..and I totally understand your POV regarding Dev and I agree with it too!..update real soon😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
hoye hoye.......................absolutely mindblowing update....................
wat to say loved each and every part of it.................
maan singh khurana came to meet his geet..............irritating her to the core and the way he was asking who dev is to her probably wanted to make sure she has moved on or something......taunting her that she forgets ppl whom she meets...............uff maan well no complains....................i love him like that.............
arabian night special...........kya kahe...........amazing............can imagine it..............how maan wud hv burned to c all those hootings for his geet and geet wat was she doing.............is she doing it for the case or did she come to know more abt guru.............as she feels it might b her chief.............
it was actually amazed to c the protective and possessive side of maan...............

well u answered the questions abt where did dev go when she was singing................

hating the mere presence of dev now sorry yaar but dont like any one coming closer to maan's geet......

hey u r ready with next updates.............well will b waiting for it though.............r u going to update bin tere as well...................
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Reet

Love U .❤️🤗Its a great update.👏

The way U described Geet's state of mind, heart was awesome. Her emotions are turmoiled.

Chief is proving himself the chief of disguise but hopfully, soon geet will see through it.

Maaneet's Conversation had various colors in it. He sure want to know if geet has really forgotten him🤪 The way Maan was irritating was quite hilarious.😆 Its hard to understand the intrinsic meanings when emotions are driving the person.

Geet the Seducer 😲, what more is there to see😆. Maan is going mad with jealousy & worry 👍🏼 Yep heart can rule the mind.

Whoa, the song & dance sequence 👏😍❤️

Want the next update, Can't wait to read more(getting greedy)

About ur reply dear,

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet


@ serene love -- wait ...i have to reply u after reading ur last comment as well on page 67
ok i m back ......ohh dxarling ....i so loved that song ,...na kario.....dil tut jata hai ......chahat ki baat na kario .....kario....dil tut jata hai...
i m tocuhed that u managed inspite of ur exams......thats so nice of u yaar ....!! but study comes first .....i will wait for u love.....and i shud thank u for continuing reading this fic ..thankx dear
and thanks ...for liking this update as much ...ahh about how maan managed to get out of the jail .....will be answered slowly but for now read the p.s *** note at the end of next update ....let dev woo drijee......let him do whatever he wants ....with time he will ask to geet too....thats soon gonna come as well.......so hold ur heart and wait for next 2 updates....cause they will bring boxful of surprises


thnx 4 ur time to read the comments & loving the song.

I don't have any exams, that was 4 U to take all the pain to update after UR Exams.😊 & yes studies come 1st.

waiting to see things unraveling.


Edited by serenelove - 14 years ago

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