[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread - Page 25

Originally posted by: Paloma_D

Hi i used to read this ff before I joined IF so could never comment- then you took a break and I lost the ff. But I am very happy to say I have once again found it and have finally caught up with all the parts! I absolutely love this:)
Please pm me when you update- hopefully this will be soon!
Thanks
Paloma x

thanx for speaking up my adorable reader ...!

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Phew, that was one of the longest update you've ever done with so many twists and turns! Took me a good amount of time to read it. I am still under the spell of the update!

BTW Hello🤗 🤗

First of all let me tell you no need to be worried about the response. You don't know how much we love your work. See we even pester you to update despite of knowing that you have exams coming up😛 How can one not enjoy after reading super long updates with so much interesting events happening and the story going through lotta twists and turns?

So you worried about the violence part. To be honest, i was getting goosebumps reading that part. Well, it was too much of violence but you managed to bring it out well👏

Interesting revelations in this update-

1. Adi- Till now we knew that Adi knew that Chief had a soft corner for Geet but today he first spoke it out to Geet and then later to Maan after Geet broke down. Will come to this later. He saw Geet desperate to catch a glimpse of Maan and understand that both kind of harbour feelings for one another no matter how hard Chief-Geet try not to show to themselves or others. Also, he's concerned about Geet just as he is about his Chief-Maan. That food-kitchen-cooking scene was sweet😊

2. Maan- Maan's, not Chief's concern for Geet-he repetitively ordered Adi to take care of Geet. Signs of some danger for Geet which came true when she saw 'him' killing Sudhir. He somehow knew Geet won't be able to take it. The part where Geet is breaking down was very painful. But equally painfull was Maan's reaction and his words which he was saying to make her hate him even more, to detach her from himself. My eyes were moist at this soon. The dialogues were very powerful here! they had a great intensity!

3. Chief's 'professional' plans- His plans to reach out to Anna had been made very clear. I like the way you keep each part intact while writing. Like the transition between the scenes.

4. Chief's violence- His violence streak was very clear in that part. No mercy for the deceivers!

Somehow, it shows that something's very grave had happened to him in the past that has made him the way he is!

5. Geet-The girl who loves her kidnapper deeply! She wants to stay back but was preparing herself to be back thinking about her exams, transient life in the early parts of the update. Her desperation for her kidnapper was shown very nicely! And this desperation made her look for him frantically until she saw the most dreadful sight. Her love killing people, the hands with which she wants to be hugged, being loved are colored with people's blood. Her outburst, breakdown was so heart-wrenching!!! Wonderfully written!!!👏

6. Adi-He was special to Chief than all his other members. he was close to him, he understood him better than anyone else but an interesting fact came up in this update-he not only knows Chief but also the person who lived a normal life before plunging into this word-Maan! He probably knows the reason why Maan is Chief today. He understands him fully. He's able to decipher Maan's unsaid words. This part was really carved out very nicely.

Infact the part post Sudhir's death part was really high on emotions, relationships, truth, right and wrong. Geet-Maan part while she's in the kitchen trying to hurt herself and then when she's safe and Maan in kitchen-that part was again very beautifully written. Emotions were flowing through the words. The words had so much power that I could actually visualize the scene. The shlok from Geet made her stop, she pondered over the fact. Somewhere she realized that behind the mask is a innocent man.

I just don't have words to express myself about this update!

All I can say is that I just want to read more and more. I'l keep reading this update till the time you update the next one. I know your exams coming up, prepare well for them. And do update but only if you get time. Studies shouldn't be affected. All the best😊

About my results-it wasn't good. Scored 94 %ile in CAT, 91 %ile in XAT and couldn't clear FMS. About the job interviews, negative here as well. My stammering is taking a toll on my career. I am landing nowhere.

Originally posted by: junglli billi

😉

hi i m neeti

ok let me tel u a story ok?

i know u write very well n obviously i cant write lik u

but here it goes...........😛

ek ladki thi anjaani si. khoi khoi si. jise bohot bore ho raha tha

usne socha chelo ab is ak solution dhunda jaye.

to usne fanfics browse karna shuru kiya.

phir socha yar in incomplete fanfics ke char me nahi padna kyunki bohot ghumate hain

lekin😭😭😭😭😭😭

galti se "[MG] in love with enemy " uske hath laga usne socha chalo line marte hain

phir use laga dhaka

KYA FIC HAIN MAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

us bechari ne socha👏

phir use bohot need aa rahi thi

LAKINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

USNE THAN LIYA
KI

WHT EVA HAPPENS EVEN IF EARTH QUACK COMES OR TSUNAMI OR EVEN IF THE VALCANO
BURSTS
VO YEH FICTION COMPLETE KARKE RAHEGI
she read it. n finished it till 3 am.

DEN IT FLASHED KE IT IS NOT COMPLETED

😆

she went to the college droollinggggggggggggggggggggggg

whre eva she is finding place poor gal she is trying to sleep

and here kamine dost r not lettiing her too

bechari iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii from tat time she is WAITTTTTTTTTINNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG.

YAR PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

UDATE KARO 😭😭😭😭😭

I NEVA CAME ACROSS SUCH A SCRIPT
I LOVE IT BABS

Originally posted by: deniac

@Ritu baby, let me know whe u wanna discuss bout u bin tere.....from feb 15th to feb 21st i will be not reachable as i will be out of india..... but uske pehele aur uske baad mein.. i shall be available....

u take care

lossa love kiddo

ohhhhhh..i went to den in search of urs..i missed this post ...i m missing u ...cant even msg u aneway happy v day .....hope u are having a good time... love u and miss u

Originally posted by: serenelove

hey Reet,I have been a silent reader but ur FF coerced me to comment on it.😊

YOU are Awesome writer dear

The way you write about their emotions and situation(Physical or Psychological) I love it.👏

I am not good with words and u are great so I leave it here and will be waiting for the update

Please add me to ur PM list

added darling !!

Originally posted by: vantu12

Reet..

U hav made me speechless...😊

U truly have LEFT A SPARKLING MARK ON MY HEART...😊

This was just BREATHTAKING...😊

U MADE ME CRY...

U MADE ME MAD...😊

U MADE ME ADDICTED...😊

U MADE ME FALL HEAD OVER HEELS ON UR "MASTERPIECE CREATION"...😊

0mg... This cud b made into the BESTEST EVER THRILLER SHOW...
Never ENDING SERIES...😊

Reet dear.. Just Love u.. More n more n more...
😊

Wah yar kay baat h v match a lot. N u flirt also a lot. N humme tank pe mat chadao n update karne ki koshish karo. Though I know tat u ll try ur level best to do it. But still as a reader. Humara to janm sidth adhikaar h to push n force u ;-) n i came to know about ur examination. Pata nahi yar yeh exams aate kyun hain. But i wrote dem n got through too wit 70 too. Now its ur turn to got 90 . .100. As u r such a writter. I m sure tat u r damn good examination writter too. So do wel babs. :-) n get th highest marks. N i cant type more dan tis kyunki lag raha h ki ungliyan tuut jayengi pata nahi how u type so much. N yeh i have praised u so much. Cant do it any more . Ah. Tired. Becoz jitna karo kam lagta h. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Ah ok i know i know th last line was too much. But still ur writtin is awesome. N do wel in ur exams

Originally posted by: serenelove

Orgionally posted by maanmeet_reet

added darling !!

ahh.....what shall i say ....
m lucky enuff to hav readers like u .....who is tolerating my fic which doenst hav any loveydovey talks ...
u dont hav to be good with words just say what is in ur mind..
trust me thats the best part

i never knew i can be a writer in my wildest dreams..
but i dn know it has become addiction ,...

first i tried to be like others ...then realised that i can speak my mind caz every one has their individuality ...
so speaking and u are liking

trust me....i loved ur little yet strong comment ...it will be in my heart wen i will start wrting again

thanx

I am Honoured☺️. Thank you so much. I know that you we should speak our mind but ability to make others follow your views and thoughts is gift that not everybody holds.

I love reading novels and your FF has "Emotions, Action, Suspense" with intensity that i love in any story. there are very few who hold my full concentration. You are best.⭐️

hey guys ....!! wassap ...!!