[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134)

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richiiiii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#961

omg it was sooo gripping and romantic and emotional and beautiful and absolutely worth the wait ...totally loved it...how i wished it wasn't ending but anyways i guess wee have eden now....

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YusLiz

@YusLiz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#962

Devi you are the Bestest!!! it was a long wait but well worth it!

it's always sad when one of you FF comes to an end but you made sure another is in the works so we all don't have major withdrawal from your superb storytelling gift.

thank you thank you thank you!

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--Magnificent--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#963

Wow dear ..😊 i was real surprised to see this in my inbox and loved the fact that u wrote on shiv gauri ...i dunno what it is but just cant get enuff of them .....or Maaneet for that matter ....thanks dear that was truly a wonderful and emotional update ....real touched to see Shiv keep all those memories ....* sniff* *sniff* ...brings a lump to ur throat ....

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Deepa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#964

part 113
i didnt read till now....................nice part..................

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FaithnFate

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Posted: 14 years ago

#965

Teri yaadein, mulakaatein, wo raatein aur baatein
Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye
Tere bina mera jiya, sataayein kyun piya
Yaadon ne teri mujhpe, ye jaadu kiya re
Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye
Wo adaaon ki ghatayen, mere dil ko chhu jaayen
Pyari hai duniya saari, maine hai tujhpe waari
Dil mein, mere dil ne tujhse, yaari ki baazi hari

Tere khayalon mein, khayalon mein…
Bas tum meri nigaahon mein, nigaahon mein…
Bas tum wapas aa jao, mere paas, tum sadaa, wapas aa jao
Mere paas, tum sadaa… suna mera jahan, bhoola main hu kahan
Jaane hai jaane jaan, tera rahoon, Piya…(piyaa)…
Wapas aa jao, mere paas, tum sadaa, wapas aa jao
Mere paas, tum sadaa… piya tera jiya… (piya tera jiya)
Piya tera jiya… (piya tera jiya)… tu hai kahan
Tera karuun intezaar, tu mere dil ka karaar
Itna hai aetbaar, manoonga na main bhi haar

May be for today's situation the song might not go.......but with today's update i was visiting his teen feelings.....mid 20's n finally standing in her wedding where she was all set for someonelse...... So just thought of putting it up:)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tnz4-r6PKOM

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Sigma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#966

Devi fab story 🤗👏

Will miss Shiv 😆

and witty Gauri 😛

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#967

I'm so glad you took time to finish it off. Now I'm on time to respond right after you updated, something that I missed very much while reading the other parts.

You really don't need closure to everything...Perhaps loose ends should exist...that is how you don't feel all knotted up inside.

Shashank and Thalia?😔 Sorry I'm just a sucker for the other throbbing love story too.

I think the Kurta was definitely the high point and very nice that you brought the blue lehenga back into the picture...just the way it had all started...
Great way to pull the curtain on Shiv and Gauri. I'm going to miss them very dearly...

Hasini

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 14 years ago

#968

oh wow i love how any update from you makes my day.

i love these two.... seriously amazing! i felt so emotionally connected to Gauri's inability to hold back her emotions! you just somehow display every thing in such an amazing literary way that it blows my mind!

i cant even word how good that was.

just keep writing..... thanks for coming back and updating! you rock!

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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#969

Absolutely loved the update Sri...I think you created the perfect ending for their story 😊...I am going to miss Shiv a lot!

"You know I live to prove you wrong." - This just about sums up every marriage😆

Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago

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538783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#970

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo
Teri yaadein, mulakaatein, wo raatein aur baatein
Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye
Tere bina mera jiya, sataayein kyun piya
Yaadon ne teri mujhpe, ye jaadu kiya re
Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye
Wo adaaon ki ghatayen, mere dil ko chhu jaayen
Pyari hai duniya saari, maine hai tujhpe waari
Dil mein, mere dil ne tujhse, yaari ki baazi hari

Tere khayalon mein, khayalon mein'
Bas tum meri nigaahon mein, nigaahon mein'
Bas tum wapas aa jao, mere paas, tum sadaa, wapas aa jao
Mere paas, tum sadaa' suna mera jahan, bhoola main hu kahan
Jaane hai jaane jaan, tera rahoon, Piya'(piyaa)'
Wapas aa jao, mere paas, tum sadaa, wapas aa jao
Mere paas, tum sadaa' piya tera jiya' (piya tera jiya)
Piya tera jiya' (piya tera jiya)' tu hai kahan
Tera karuun intezaar, tu mere dil ka karaar
Itna hai aetbaar, manoonga na main bhi haar

May be for today's situation the song might not go.......but with today's update i was visiting his teen feelings.....mid 20's n finally standing in her wedding where she was all set for someonelse...... So just thought of putting it up:)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tnz4-r6PKOM