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Geet leaves…..

Where maan stands still.

What's wrong with him…………everytime…..he sees her he is lost…………….

But he thinks she will be always cute……………………………

She is different……….

The first girl ever sees doesn't fall for his look…….every girl dream to be in his hands…………………….

But she is different………………………..

Everything…….her smile……..so cute……………………..she is so good..

What the hell why he is thinking of her………………

Girls …..are one who destroyed….

The girl.which destroyed his happiness……………………he hate girls………..and this isfinal………………

He moves in the direction…………………………….

Where he overhears,,,,,,,,,geet smile in anee 's room………….

She is giggling…………

Anee is smiling……..after a long time…anee didn't smile often…she is a serious and weird type of girl…………………………….she always make rules…………….she isdifferent……..she never feels……….enjoying between her friends……….he liked the thing different..bonding what anee shares with geet……….she is really some special…………………..

And then he sees Vicky and dev entering their room…………..

Vicky…………….takes her to….his music room…

Vicky plays guitar well……………

She took the guitar……and she start playing……

Everyone surprised…………..as geet is expert in this…………………

She smiled……..and said she learnt from….his big brother………………

And everyone asked where he is……………..

He is……………………………

Mr abhinav handa…….the elder…of all the handas..and he Is a airforce officer…………………….strict….

And his life Is geet……………………….

Only the person………………which loves geet……………….more than hislife……………..

She smiles……………

As she is the only person…………..she calls veerji………….

Elder of all………………………….

Eldest son.of mohindar………………………….

And rano…………………..

And dev………………….is busy in preparing……………….assignments……he is always studious and shy type guy…………………….

Savitri devi entered into the room..

Where he finds……..anee and vicky dev are at oneside……………………………

She felt happy……some thing is really…………………..great…smiling…..geet in between them…………..she liked in first look.

\ragini called them from………………………breakfast………..

They offered for geet,,

No aunty.itis cute.but bina kanaa….mere cm anee chotimaa………………muje ghar se ek kadam bhi bahar nahii bejegii……………………cm na mujse bahut pyar karthi hay,,,,

Maan comes and joins for the table….

Where geet is still talking……with………………….anee.

She gets a call…

Ohno bm……..

Haa bm……..

Bm:chutki itn subha subha kaha chale gayeee……….hoo….pata hay na…………aaj sham ko pooja..hay………………………….toh jaldi

Aur yeh kya tune chotimaa ka baat nahii manee..chamke dekh ke bhag gayee hoo……………

G:hey bm.relax……

I will take car……………..love u…………….nahii mere pet bhar gayee…………pls aap tension mat lijeyee…..babaje aur mere jodi pehle se bangayee hay.muje unne manee ne kilee pooja karne ke……….jarorat nahii……………………..

Bm:chup kar.chutki..

G:bm gusse mein bahut soni lagthe hoo……..tuje ched ne ka majaa kea lag hay……and she smiles……………………………

She smiles……………………chup kar besharmii……..and she cuts the call..

\geet winks and smiles.waa badimaa..sharmaa rahi.hay………………………….

And she smiles……….

At that time…………………….

A hot sexy girl comes there…….she is NT……………..

Oh chutki………I mean.geet where is ur mom …………..

Is there are not with u………….

Anne and other s keep mute…………………

All others froze………..and they wonders…………………………..

Where with all surprise

Maan looks NT with anger.everyone knows that geet parents are dead……..then why she is saying so toget hurt…………….

Where geet turns and smiles……..

Wow mere babaji ke pass hay….aur kaha hay…ki when ever I smile they watch me……smiling…

And they had given bm and cm………………………..badepapa aur chachu…….hay na……………………………………any ways………..anne lets us move to college……

Aur ha..sorry guys.sham ko hamara party hay na……post pone karna hoga………

Kyonki,,,,,,,bm na,,,,,,,,,,kabhi kabhii……………………..poolan devi ban jaate hay…..wow n babaji se kudh jyada hi darthe hay…………………aur agar mein ne kuch gadbad kii na….woh rona dona shuru karegee…..aur muje naa.rona dona bilkul pasand nahii………….aur haa…..moo pholakar betne wala bhi………

She looks at maan.

\maan gives a angry look………………..

She gives her the cute smile……………………….

His anger turns to pleasant………………………………

As no one notices ……except one person…

Ragini…………..

Maan turns his face…………………………….

An dthe gang leaves…………………………

Accidently bumps with nakul………

Chot nahii lagaa…………….nakul jee………he is in own world…………………………….

She smiles…..

And moves from there.

Where

NT feels bad……..she always want to be special for khurana family.

But somehow………………………….she couldn't.

As she knows …………dev's nature…………………

She is thinking…………………

And she calls her gang…….tasha and sasha…………………………………

Part ends

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all part are awesome
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Geet enter into the college…………………..

With her gang……..

She went to library…………………………….

As on the side….she is grabbed by a hand………….

She loose her balance and bumped with the chest..

The strong pair of hands on her waist……..and dark brown eyes………..looking at her in intensity….she try to escape from his waist…but he is so strong…but somehow he likes her touch………………..he wants her to be in his arms…forever………………………………….

Geet:oye…………….tere problem kya hay………………………..too muje yesa kyon pakadaa….hay chodo muje warna chillaungu………………….

Maan:chillavoo…..yeha koi nayee ayenge….aur kisiko pata bhi nhii chalegeee…….

Then she looked at the sourroundings..

Yes he is right………..

It is room where old books are kept.and there is a almarah always blocks……nobody cannot notice…the place.it is like a hide out………………………

He smirked………………..it his thought………………………….

He likes the scary face of geet………it is only his sight……on tha t night now……………….

Geet:agar mein tumse……………………..batoo mein jawaab dethi hoo……..toh tumbhi baatoo se dona na…mr khadoos singh khurana………………………………

Maan:tumare pass jubaan hay.aur merepass………..yeh.strength…………u know it……he again smiled…………………………

Geet:yeh teek.too veerji nahii.hay.soch…….

Dekho.mein jaanta hoo mein jyada bholtho……………….pls muje maaf karo…………..ienda se,,,,,,,,,mein yesa nahii karungi…………………pls chodo muje………………she had tears in her eys……………..

Maan shocked…..he cannot hurt her.her tears hurt him….

He left her.

She turned back………………………..

And winked…………………………………..

Mr ksk….geet handa….is a very good actor.and she give herr naughty smile…………………………….

Usne wapas befawakooff banaya………….ruko.geet nahii chodunga tune…………….

Pehle pakad ke dekho…………………………………………..

And she ran away from him………………………………….

And she enter into the class room to find anee and group……….with dull faces……

Oye kya huwa…………….tum log…………yesa……………kyon bana rakee hay…………………….

Hamara Project reports………….aur mentors ka list ayee………………

Bad news………

G:kya…….

Anee and group……………….hamara mentor………………………

G:haa kaun hayl……………

Anee and group with unison……………………….maan singh khurana……..

G:kya……………………………..oh no………….babajii,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,lagtha hay……subha ke baat ko serious lie le liya kya.mein toh mazaak kar rahii thi.aap ne mujee itna bada jatka dediya……….pl s babajii…………………..yeh sab sapna hay.she is verge at fall………………….

Then she stands up…..geet thand rak…………….hosaktha hya babaji tumares aath game plan karna chahtee.hay.b

But donot worry.agar tume ksk se mukabula karnii hayi……….

Who tuje jyada din tak chel nahii payenge……………………………….dehna………mr ksk………….par yaad rakh…usse kam se kamm 10 feet ka doori rakhna………………….teek hay.

On the other hand.maan got frustuated with his faculty 's decision………………………………annee………..vicky and geet handa.

Suddenly he smiled……geet handa…………..pay back time……………….

He smiled widely……………………..

Anee and Vicky ………………………………stunk their heads.in the books………….

Where geet is playing with her strands…………………………………………….by munching chips…………………….

Maan enter into the hall…..witha file…

He looked at the scene………………………

He looked at geet….who is busy in her book…………………………..she is in sofa……….sleeping………………………….at anee's shoulder…………….

Vicky and dev are at their propect bean bags..leaning……………………loud music………………………but not disturbing……..them……………………..

Where nakul enter .

At that time…………………………geet phone ranged………..

Hello…….geet…………………………….

Other side a mascular strong voice……..

Yeh princess how are u…………..what are u doing right now………………..

Veerji………….geet jumped in the sofa..from anee's shoulder………………….

Are princess itna shor mat macho…………………………………..

Relax.araam se.aur ha….uchal khudna nahii……..

Veerji.kaise hay app….aur apne mere mail ka jawaab nahii diya…manta hoo.aapbahut busy hoo………..lekin.aap muje bhool gayee…………….aap ko chutiyaa mil gayee.pata hay na……………..aap ke rone wali pari.ki Said.hay ………….dhoom machana hay………………..

Veerji:first thing……………..make sure…………………….no one is as important as u in my life…………………aur doosri baat mujee har baat ka khayal rehta……….mein koshis kar vaha hoo jalde se jald wapas anee ko..aur haa.apna khayal rakna.aur teek hay.,mein nee tere mailpadee hay…tun e joo cheez magwaya……….hay who sab…….mei ne maangawalee.

And he says bye.

Bye veerji………………..tc.

Bye princess…….tc…………………..

Anee and other s looked at her.in awe.\

Wow geet .lagtha hay tumare veerji special…….hay……..

Maan enterinto the room……………look at the scene////////////

Veerji.toh special hi hay……..

Pat a hay mujse………….8 saal badaa hay………………. Lekin…………….mein unke princess hoo………….pata hay.bahut pyarr karthe hay mujse…………………………

She is sayin g in exicite ment just like….a 10 yrs old…………………….describe………….the things………………………

Her childhood ………………..

Just then.again her cell ring.this tim…………………………bm…

Ohno………..pooja………………oh god…………………….bm mere murder jaroor karega,,,,

Guys im leaving……….

She is running…………….to her home………………..bumped with maan………………………………..

Miss geet handa.when u eve rtry to walk………………………………

Geet free from his hands and ran from there…….

U cannot run away from me miss geet…………..

He smirked looking at the file………………

He is happy…………………………………….

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All are going out…..

As there is a occasion at handa haveli………………

Yes all the khannas and khuranas………………….are enter into the ………………..big building.

As maan is least interested.

But he need to enter as it is savitri devi's instructions……..

The car enter into the building……………..

It is haveli……………..

As there ar ealso popular business associates…as usual.the tasha and other gang also there.

Sasha and tasha …………………..eyes wided to see the haveli……………..

It is sourrounded by a garden.with flowers………………….

And one side………………..swimming pool……..

The haveli is moderns yet still filled with………………..nature……………..

They enter into the house.

Where darji and others welcomes………to the house.

It is big photos.of the family members……………………………….

Of darji.beeji…..and all others.

In between the hall there is a very beautiful couple…………………………

A very handsome person…………………………with a dazzled eyes…….

And a very cute lady with a smile ……………….

The photo is surrounded by a garland……………..

He is shekar and sunaina handa..parents of………..geet……………………….

A photo graph of a handsome person…….with a little girl…..in his hands……

All kids………..

At their……………childhood…….and also……….when there are elder….

In the hall are all arranged……………………….

For the pooja.

Maan is his traditional cloths…

At that time..a girl bumped.with him staring him as she seen a wonder in her life

She is rajji one of cousin……………………………………of pari……………….

He looked at her.an d turned his head.to find pari…..coming down in red lehenga…..

As she is going to perform the pooja…………………

She is very pretty…………

And the other girls………….

Meera…………………….another cousin of………………..pari.all enter into the haveli.

At that time……. A car enter into the compound…………………………..

A lady with long legs………………..and her handsome husband…………………………

Along with another girl………………and her husband.

Enter the haveli…..

There are simran malhotra………………………………….and his husband raj malhotra……

And the other couple.are prem and heer juneja.

They enter with the kids….

Arhaan……………………and nitya……………………………….

Arhaan is son of simran.and raj'

Where is nitya is sweet little daughter of prem and heer………………

All received them.

And darji introduced them to all……….

She hugged …………………..pari……………………………………..

Prem:something is missing in handa haveli…

The haveli itni shaant kyon hay………………………………

And everyone is laughed………

Heer kicked………….kyon kisi ko miss kar rahe ho kya…………………….

Prem …shocked………………

And all smiled at them……….

Pooja is going to start

At that time……………………….armaan and his gang….brij along with his wife.all are enter into the hall……………………..

At that time,,,,,,,,,,,mita.and others join the group……………..

Heree there is a welcome to the eldest…..yet most responsible …………person of handa family..with his dramtic yet poetric husband…………………………….

And there are flowers on them……………….

They smiled………

Arhaan.smiled.that's my girl.boring families…………………darling paradise…………..

Simran gave a look………..

Where raj is blushed…….

And also my handsome boy friend……..hero.welcome to delhi…….jaan………………I love u…………..

Love u darling….

He replied with a flying kiss

And not bad……..

My angry………………….sister…when ever she gets angry…………she will destroy our furnature……….idon't mind…………..there is lot of old furnature which is broken by her.iss evidencec……….

Nitya giggled…………………

And her cool………and caring .darling husband………………………….which make lot of efforts to calm her down..

And the sweet………………naughty……daughter…nitoo……………baby.hi…………

Hi…………..sweeto……..she replied……………………

And flowers.are flewed on them……………..

Heer:bus hogayaa..chutki.kidar bhi hay.mere samne aa….aaj tuje nahii chodunga…..

Rene do na heer.sab dekh rahe hay…………waise bhi……………..

He fumbled with a anger look of heer…………………..

Waise bhi huim toh surprise dene wala hay sab koo………..lekin sab kuch.

Wait a minute………………………

She looked a traj…………he is looking else where………….

Simran..as usual…………….heer….hamere .naughty behen ne once again hamare surprise ko paani me.mile diya………………..

Apne dono jeeju……………..ko.phir se phasa kar.

Kya kare.hamere……………………………ghar mein chor hoo.

Kyon raj……….

Ha prem…………………………………

They are looked at the direction.where geet is smiling.

Sorry jeeju.and thank u…………..

She gave wave.to them………………………………….

And armaan and others hug them,,,,,,,,,,,,

Teek hay…….tum dono behen baad mein apne choti behen ko dekhana……………

Pls panditjibhoola rahe ahy.

And the pooja started………….

Geet and others perform the pooja.

Arhaan…………jumpedinto geet 's lap with a kiss in her cheek…….

Where as nitoo.also hug geet…………….

The pooja is over………..

As raj and prem……………………..hug geet………..

They share a very great relation ship……………………..

Withgeet.

Sorry jeeju.lagtha hay mere wajah se aaj aap dono ko couch mein sone pad raha hay………….

Its ok…………sweety..hamare choti pyari Sali saibaa ke liye………………..

Lekin yeh to bataa..tuh hame.yeha kyon bulayaa………..hay

Jeeju………….i means jeejus…………..

Just want to bring some romantic episodes in the boring life of my pari didi……………….

U know naa………..over traditional family values……………….and

Coming to brothers.veerji hote toh alag baat hay.

Lekin brij bhai is over protective…………..where as……………doosra……..dumb brother……………………

Bechare……..log ko privacy nahii miltahya….agar ek baar shaadi hogayee toh…………..kuch nahii…………………

Ur right the both jeejus'''''said in unison….

Now let us plan a romantic date.

Maan is confused what they are talking about………………..

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now even i am confused as wat r they talking abt and too many relations........
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wow awesome part
pls cont soon

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