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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy_Soha

Yaar... Ur an awesome awesome writer..! Am loving it so very much..! The story, the scenes,the way ur writing it- awesome.. U have so good ideas.. I hope the CV'S see ur writin n add this to the serial..! :-) :-) waiting for ur update.. Add me to ur pm list

thanks soha...ll defn add u to the pm list..
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww love it how maan always comes down late as he is married. loool
so sweet of geet to puncture the tyres. Me want them to have a lovely time camping.😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

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awww love it how maan always comes down late as he is married. loool

so sweet of geet to puncture the tyres. Me want them to have a lovely time camping.😍😍😍😍

thanks reena.. u took time and read my ff.. thanks a lot dear....
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u guys for all ur comments......thanks once again....
Part ' 5:

The camping site is in the admist of mountains and close to it is a waterfall.....by the time they set their tent its late evening'.romeo and adi have a discussion.

Romeo 'aapne annie ko dadima ke saath unke tent pe kyun nahi rakha.. kyun annie aur pinky ko saath mein rakha..

Adi ' tumhe toh maloom hai sasha aur tasha ke baare mein.. aur pinky akeli kaisi rahegi ek tent mein.. isliye annie aur pinky share karenge ek tent aur waise bhi annie ko is baath se koi problem nahi hai'

Romeo ' ye baath toh aapne theek kaha' aur ladkiyon ko taiyaar hone meiin kithna waqth laagta hai'teen tigda kam bigda' teen se bhale 2 hi sahiii'. Ek tent sasha aur tasha aur doosra tent annie aur pinky'

Adi ' I hope pandeyji aur nakul ko koi problem nahi hogi manisha ke saath tent share karne mein'.

Geet, dadi, annie and maan standing together.

Geet - dadima' kitni khoobsurat jhagah hai na..

Dadi ' manna padega maan betey' ithni khoobsurat jhagah toh aap hi dhoond sakte hai' kitna khoobsurat nazaara hai.. yahan ki hawa ki toh mehak hi alag hai..in vaadioin ke beech mein humari geet toh bahooth khush rahegiiii'

Geet ' haan dadima'is jhagah ki khashiyat hi kuch aur hain'.yahan ki hawa aur iski taazgiii mein jo mazza hai woh sheher mein kahaannnn'..

Annie ' ab samajh mein aaya.. bhai kyu camping ke liye nikaal jaatey they'

Maan is happy knowing that all three important women in his life loved the place'

Maan n geet had their dinner'Everybody still having their dinner' camping fire is set'

Maan n geet in their tent'

Maan ' geet tumhare kapde khaarab ho gaye hai.. change kar lo..

Geet ' kahaan..

Maan ' khaana khatey waqt tumne apne dress ko bhi khaana khila diya tha'ye dekho' maine tumhare kapde nikaal diye hai.. pehen lo.. main bahar intezaar kar raha hoon.. zara jaldi aana'

Geet ' aaj inhe kya ho gaya hai''(den) theek hi toh hai.. kapde kharab ho gaye hai..isliye badalne ko keh rahe hai'' par'. Kapde nikaal diye mere liye' dekhu toh..

Geet is surprised to see' the new saree (which maan had bought)'also with simple jewellery'

She is very happy' but den thinks..

Geet ' saari' yahan pe' maan ka kya irada hai'' hey babaji' ab iska kya mathlab nikalu'taiyaar hoja geet varna teri khair nahi'. Maan naraaz ho gaye toh'.

Geet wears her saree'and searches for the mirror'meanwhile maan enters

Maan ' geet tum ab tak taiyar nahi hui'.

He is shocked to see geet in her beautiful attire' he is just mesmerized by her looks' he comes close to her'..holds her from behind..... kisses on her bare back... turns her.... maan n geet standing face to face.... geet feeling shy...holds maan around his waist and her face resting on his chest.... maan holding her chin... starts kissing on her forehead... den eyes... cheeks...den nose....

Maan ' tumhara aaina toh main hoon geet'.

he puts the jewellery on her' earrings, maang tika, bangles and anklet'. He fills her maang and den puts bindi for her'

Geet ' aaapko meri dil ki baath kaise samajh mein aa jaathi hai'

Maan ' jis tarah tumhe samajh mein aathi hai'.

Geet ' par yaahaan saari' sab kya samjhege'yeh apna khurana mansion ka kamra toh nahi' dadima aur annie kya kahenge'

Maan ' chup' bilkul chup.. aaj toh chand bhi sharma jaayega tumhe dekhke' ithni khoobsurat jo lag rahi ho..aisa laag raha hai.. jaise aaj chand kudh zameen par aa gaya hai...baal math bandhna' khuli jhulphein mein tum zyaaada khoobsurat laagti ho aur meri aankhein haataye nahi hathi....

Geet ' aap bhi rajkumar se kam nahi lag rahe hai'' aapne sherwani kab rakhi ' maine hi toh packing kii thee'lekin sherwani toh maine nahi rakha.....

Maan ' aaj subah hi' jab tum so rahi theee'.

He applies kala tika to geet..

Geet ' aap toh in cheejoin mein vishwas nahi karte'

Maan ' par ab karne lag gaya hooon' aur sirf tumhari wajah se geet..

Both lost in each other'

Everybody waiting for maan n geet (where they have lit the camping fire'(open sky))

Adi, romeo, pandeyji and manisha standing together along with nakul and sasha n tasha standing on the other side' pinky busy eating..

Manisha ' maan sir kitne hot lag rahe they '. hai na'

Roemo ' oye.. inka peecha choddd'.inki shaadi ho chukii hai'

Kyu na ek khel kheley' hum yahan par abhi situation song gaatey hai'.jaise maan sir aur geet tent mein.. ahmmm ahmmm.... dadi annie doosri taraf' sasha aur haiii tasha wahan'.. aur pinky toh'.. khair uski baath na kare toh hi theek hai'.. samajh mein aaya.. jaisee'..

Mein suruwath kartha hoon ' maan sir aur geet ke liye'- shaadi karke phas gaaya yaar accha khaaasa tha kawaara'.n laughs'

Manisha ' sahi kaha..ye gaana toh unpar kitna suit hotha hai.. bechaare maan sir.. dekho kaise geet ke peeche peeche apne kambu mein chale gaaye'usko maanane ke liye'agar main hotha toh'

Adi ' manisha''.

Adi leaves them and joins pinky'

Romeo - Tum nakul par try kyu nahi karte'

He asks manisha tum gaao tum par aur nakul par..

Manisha ' kya'. Nakul'.(manisha s sad face) main kya karru ram mujhe budha mil gaaya'hoi hoi budha mil gaya'

Sasha and tasha coming towards them..

Romeo ' seeing tasha and sings this song.. gauri tera gaav bada pyaara.. mein toh gaaya maara aake yaahan re..

Tasha ' making faces'ye koi gaav nahi hain'.

Manisha ' seeing sasha' sings.. ye ladki mere samne mera dil hi jaaye jaaye jaaye'

Sasha irritated and leaves along with tasha'

Romeo ' are wah manisha' ab tum sahi disha pe chal rahe ho'

Manisha ' nahi' woh'.main toh sirf iske saath timepass kar raha hoon'ab dekho'. maan sir geet mein busy hai'..dadi aur annie'nahi''maan sir toh mujhe kaacha kha jaayenge'.. adi sir pinky mein'..tum toh tasha mein.. pandeyji toh brahmacharri rahe' aur nakul'. Na baaba naa'toh sasha hi baachi hai na'.kaash aur koi romantic guy yahaaaaaan hota'. Varna is sasha ko jhelna nahi padta'ab toh issi se kam chaalana padega'

Nakul, adi and pinky together'

Nakul (to adi) ' mujhe please us manisha ke saath math daliye ek tent mein' aap toh soch sakte hain mera kya haal hoga'

Adi ' aapne sou take ki baath kahi.. ye manisha'.mein kuch karta hoon'

Adi and romeo have a chat and they decide romeo pandeyji and manisha ll share the tent together and adi and nakul ll share the tent.

Tent list:

1 ' maan n geet

2 ' dadi

3 ' annie and pinky

4 ' sasha and tasha

5 ' pandeyji, romeo and manisha ( as three of them know each other very well)

6 ' adi, nakul

Geet is shocked to see everyone dressed in a grand way.. dadi annie pinky sasha tasha'romeo, pandeyji, manisha, nakul.. she is puzzled.

Geet ' hum sab yahan aisey taiyaar kyu huye hain..

Maan ' thoda intezzar karo' sab samajh mein aa jaayega'

Dadi and annie join maan n geet

Dadi ' geet betey aaj toh app bahooth khoobsurat lag rahi hai'kisi ki nazaar na laage aapko.....

She den puts kala tika on the back of her ears..

Maan n geet seeing each other and thinking about the tent scene where maan applied kala tika to geet..both smiling'..

Annie ' haan geet' maan bhai ki toh aankhein tum par se hat hi nahi rahi hai'

maan looking here and there.... geet blushing...

Dadi ' annie'. Maan betey aur geet ko thang math kijiye'yehi toh din hai inke'.tumhari bhi baari jaldi aayegi'

Maan leaves to have a discussion with the rest..

Geet ' dadima yeh sab kya hai'.mujhe samajh mein nahi aa raha'

Dadi ' maan betey chahtey they ki'. shaadi ki pehli lohri' aapke liye bahooth khaas ho'

Geet ' lohri'

Dadi ' haan betey' lohri'.

hey guys comment and criticism are welcome...plz click like button if u guys like it....

Edited by bharkha - 14 years ago
Aarthi_01 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
lohri celebration in camping area awesome tot dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it lohri at camping place awesome imagination update soon👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar..superb one !!
namitasin thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow amezing lohari well bechari/ara manish aaa. Wow luved this romantic maan. Luved ur update continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update 😊
continue soon
love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice update.. manisha is really funny.. liked maneet tent wala scene... continue soon..

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