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i need ur support n well-wishes ,my first piece of fiction is titles as "CHASE YOUR CARDIAC" .Guys,i have distributed my story in chapters n will update accordingly......


CHASE YOUR CARDIAC


CHAPTER.................1


Geet packed her bags and looked around the room, trying to make sure she hadn't forgotten anything. It was the last day of her vacation, and it was time to start the drive home. This trip to the mountains had been just what she needed.

MAAN(right side)
GEET(left side) It was her chance to forget the disaster that had been her engagement party. The society papers had a field day when her fiancee(Man) had shown up at the party drunk with another woman, proclaiming to everyone that he had been forced to find another woman to fulfill his needs because she was a cold fish who refused to sleep with him before they were married. Geet thought she would die from embarrassment.

Everyone who knew the 25 year old knew she wasn't the typical party girl, she enjoyed going out like the rest of her friends and dating, but her parents had instilled in her a strict moral code. She had stay out of the gossip columns because they could find nothing to report on her. The worst they had found was that she was at the same club one night when a friend of hers had gotten into a fight, getting herself thrown out. If she started a relationship with a man, she made it clear she wasn't going to sleep with them until she was married. It led to her not having many long term relationships, but she stuck to her morals.

chaper....................2

,GEET AND DEV


Geet had thought Dev was different. All through their two year relationship, he had reassured her of his respect for her beliefs. It turned out he was just saying that so he could marry into her family's money. It had come out after the party that he was practically broke, and his parents had cut him off, so he needed to keep her happy and get into some money. All this had been spread out for the world to see in every gossip column in the country. After two weeks of everyone trying to hide everything from her, and some crazy stalker letters offering to teach her how to not be an ice queen, as the press called her, she decided enough was enough and headed for a small but nice mountain retreat.

The advertisements promised a quiet, out of the way vacation, and this was not the kind of place anyone in her group would go, so she knew it was perfect. It was the off season, so there had been very few guests at the small resort, and either the staff really didn't read the papers, or they were just discreet enough not to mention it. No one had bothered her for the entire two weeks she was here. Geet made a note to be sure to add the place to her regular vacation destinations. One she would visit alone.


Everything was packed, so she grabbed her bags and set off for the front desk. Sitting at the desk was Avni .


AVNI (below left)

She was such a sweet woman, in her early forties with long straight dark brown hair that she kept pulled into a ponytail. She had been there everyday for the last two weeks. She was the manager and had her own apartment at the resort. "Hello, sweetie, is it time to go already?" Avni asked as she saw Geet's bags.

its an interesting chapter yaar like most of d indian girls n was her fiance maan bcoz their it was witten man so plzzzzzzz do continue n add me 2 ur pm list

Hmm intersting yeh even I'm wondering is her fiancee maan or was it meant to be slept as man anyways great start and do continue soon 😊

NICE YAAR BT GIVE LONG UPDATESSSSSSS D STORY IS MOVING SOOOOOO SLOWWWWWW

chapter ...........3

continues😊






"Yes, but I will be back. I love this place. Maybe I will come back during the spring to see the flowers, and maybe the summer when it is just too hot in the city. Of course, if I come back then, I will have to visit for winter, too, just to see the snow and ice." Geet told her laughing.


"You are always welcome, give me a call a week in advance and I will set you up with the perfect area to see the best scenes for each season. Here, I also have this. It is a coupon for 10% off your next stay. You have been an absolute delight. I will miss you for breakfast every morning." Avni handed her the receipt and the coupon.

Geet had started her second day by sitting down with Avni in the mornings over a cup of coffee and a muffin. It had become a part of the day she looked forward to. Geet had learned about Avni's two sons and her marriage that had failed when her husband had cheated. Geet had told Avni about her disastrous party, and avni had been sympathetic, but instead of treating her like she was going to break, she had joked about how they should get revenge on the men that had betrayed them. Geet was really going to miss having her there to talk to. "I am going to miss you, too. You have my number on file if you want to call sometime, like if you need bail money in case you run into your ex again." Geet laughed.

Originally posted by: rsroopali

NICE YAAR BT GIVE LONG UPDATESSSSSSS D STORY IS MOVING SOOOOOO SLOWWWWWW

N GETTING CONFUSED

AS ENGAGEMENT IT WAS MAAN N THN U JUMPED 2 DEV N GEET

B CLEAR DEAR

Hey roopali ,firstly,thanx a lot ......ya,will try to give long updates .....story will be clear furthur😊