OS: A Smile In The Rain - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it jaz...it was simple yet beautiful...and ur writing is always a treat to read :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yayyyyyy an OS and that too on one of the many lovess of my life, RAIN!!😆
see right now i would have been cursing at maan nonstop but since he loved it at the end, i will spare him😆.....ohh ya, i FORCE my frenz to like and appreciate rain....my bff hates me for that😆....not my fault i am like Geet and lovee dancing/getting wet in the rain....yup, never too old😉
omggg twinnnie....ignoring the fact that this was short😡 and only a one part OS😡, i heart lovedd it!!....first, cuz it reminded me of well, me😆.....dude i still do this....the whole playing and making faces at whoever tries to drag me off....soo i could clearly picture all this in my head!....you know what i really really love about your writing.....well i lovee everything but i will just name one right now😆.....you don't try to write fancy shmancy....you are just you when you write and i think the beauty of your writing is in its simplicity and just the overall aura you always manage build in your stories😳....the ending was simply A-D-O-R-A-B-L-E!!!....i lovedd the whole meaning behind this!....i have always loved how sometimes strangers manage to change our lives in such a beautiful way!😳
ohhh no missy, i am still bringing my bulldozer in this OS too....how could you be soo cruel and not show their meeting.....i know it would have broken the flow in the story and all that but still, let me just yell anyway cuz all my logic disppears when something is maaneet related!😆
omgg you got soo many after you right now....do mail me your address soon so i can kindly deliver them to you haha
loved it twin!
lovee you!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Memory holds foreva..
why dont u cont dis.. it sounds really nice.. 'ey should meet..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awe that was really nice short but sweet and liked the whole description and awe atleast geet changed one persons mind about the rain and I also love the rain even though I live in england but I would so love to see a monsoon in India anyways a beautiful OS really enjoyed it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
awesome...
loved it...
wen u wrote 1 month later, i thought u wer going 2 make then meet again...
y dont u continue ds 2 a ss or ff...
wud luv 2 read it...
if u do,dn plz pm me..
thnx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Heeyyy!!

Jaz that was beautiful! Love how Maan watched geet shamlessly
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful!
Jaz, please continue na😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow yaar really nice it was just awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Rain is absolutely not bad at all.... Really cute work....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
HI FUPPI!!!!!!!!!!!...i'm reading your stuff after a really a long time and i really enjoyed it...although it was one of your shortest stories...it was one of your best stories...i loved the simplicity of your story...it was short and sweet...thank you for allways sending me a pm because if you don't need to send me one but you still continue to do so even though sometimes i reply a long time later and things like that so thank you

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