OS: A Smile In The Rain

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Khushi

@blueangel1308

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

absolutely beautiful, any chance this will be turned into an SS? Either way, i love the ending, it gives a delicious ground for imagination as to wether they meet or not, and how and when and all those questions as to what.

So a big thank you.

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Durga

@mrk-1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

wow awsome yaar..why dont you convert this OS into a SS ?

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Shweet os

Loved how Geet was

Man she was too childish but her acts got smile on Maan's face

Good evn he strted liking them😉

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

tat was a cute and a sweet one.................

really it brought a smile at the end........!!!!!!!!!!!11

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annie03

@annie03

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

sweet...maybe u cn continue n make it an ff......geet's masti is always so cute....thnx fr da pm....:)

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

so sweet n beautiful
very nicely written

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

nice os.. really liked it..

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hemvb

@hemvb

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

woowww. such a cute and beautiful os...

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Yeh kuch zayada chota nhai tha..cont na..come on make them meet and end it..one more part..we would love that..waise i forgot this was GOOD..but not very good..na..i loved the emotional ones..isme something was missing..might be their meeting..but YUP i loved geet here..