!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part)

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

mai commen n karti i'm so upst wit this up yarr

hw can she is wit sudhir aur wo yesab...atlast she s also not unique..unse bhi khud ko bech diya for her dreams..which not lik by me..sabki apna view pt but mera view totall diff hai n i'm disheartened wit this up....bechara sujal uspe kya beeti hogi i really dont even want t think.

its jus i jus cant handle this up...i feel very very shoced...

i knw the fic has to go like dis but my persnal view is simply dont want this nt do i excpect this thg especially frm this fic..but well..

u again shw his emotion n turmoi very welll...

reality is not atall diff n i prefer to be in my fantsy world...

cont soon...

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

that was shockinggg...just like pinky said...its so like the real world...but to remind myself and every1...that is what ur stories are based on...real world aspects...and i always end up finding solutions to those problems in ur fic...that is y i always look forward to how will u tackle the problem you have picked up...

coming to the part....i was so heart broken...the way u put up sujal's emotions...from the beginning of the part...then his shock when he saw kashish...n i had least expected her to re-enter the story like that...sujal's reaction...his emotional turmoil...u wrote it very beautifully..each word was speaking out for him...it was really bad yr...hope kisi k saath real life me aisa naho...

spl d words "that she killed his kashish...sum1 he treausred...atleast he knew she exists sumwhr...if nt with him...facing that reality wud hv been so difficult for him...cont soon yr... :( :(

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Oh gosh....even am shocked...as Sujal. Ye achanak kya hua?? And kyun?? I seriously dont have anything on my mind....to say...abt it. Its just....OMG for me....thats the thing ringing in my mind....pls Nilu...continue soon...and explain us wats this???????

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Man this has to be the most shocking update !

Cant believe The same Kashish who was in disguise to even hear all this crap is actually doing this !

Poor Sujal , in one moment he lost his Kashish !

My full sympathies are with Sujal !

Want to know how they will react to situation now !!

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mamon.moon

@mamon.moon

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

wht a twist yaar. it was so unexpected. kashish is changed, well I guess she had to do it to establish herself in the induatry. now sujal will be in more pain. continue soon.............

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

nice part neelu . it was so shocking !!
cant wait to know what happened next .
thanx for the pm

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

What a shock not just for Sujal but for all of us as well.

Sujal has stopped listening to his heart...and has become a true businessman....keeping up his appearance. He is completely shocked to see his Kashish like the other society girls.

please continue soon.

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samrah

@cute_samrah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

ohhhhh shit.......................ye kia ho gaya kashish????????????she totally change herself................................plz tell us why she is changed herself.............................

plz con't soon dear

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monika

@monikaseth

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

amazing shocking part cont soon ...

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#130

😲 😲😲..............yeh kya ho gaya 😲😲........... that was a zor ka jhatka 😆😆........for both sujal & us 😆😆😆............... bechara sujal 🤗 🥺 ..tod diya na uska dil 😭😭😭......not fair 😭😭......
hope kashish has good valid reason for whatever she did 😡😡.... waiting to see what exactly sujal thinking at the moment 😭😭...... hope he is fine 😳😳........ poor guy 😭😭....
continue soon ... will wait to see how kashish mends everything from here 😕😕