FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03 - Page 60

Originally posted by: JayaR

aawww..... it was very cute one.....

everyone ignoring everyone....but still thinking of each other.....

enjoying it ....

lovely update....

Originally posted by: princess163

i forgot(you must be wondering how can i go on still!), I would love to see the bro-sis eunion track!

And about the lack of villians in NY times, well, i am certainly not complaining!

Thats ceratainly one more point that sets it apart from the other FFs and makes it more adorable!!!

N its my pleasure to leave comments!

thanks for your prompt reply!

waiting!

Love

Swati

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Yes...we all have enough villains in our lives...we dont need someone heinous to be born and come into our life...atleast thats my take on it and glad you agree.

The story and characterization all have been done long ago. I can only hope Maan and Naini's bond stand out from the others.

The reunion track is a very short one between the two, coz there is more story I need to move...so hopefully you can live with that.

I read your other post about the word doc you prepared...well what can I say? except that its quite flattering. Glad I could be a story teller who could also entertain you...

Given the fact that you do like NY times, here is some news you should know...it will be completely rewritten after both the FF's are over and before I move onto the next (Technoratti). It will not be posted here though but it will be available in my blog.

The reason I choose to do this is because, I started off as an amateur when I did not know how to write. But NY times has grown to be so close to my heart that I have do every justice to the story and rewrite the parts until some chapters. They writing style is horrendous in the initial parts. They make me want to throw myself off the cliff when I go back and read them. BUt thats my crib and I will have to live with it for some more time (She sighs! and bangs her head in despair...)

Got to Go...and crash. Keep posting till then...I'm greedy too in more ways than you know...LOL

Hasini

Do visit the same.

wow........wonderful part!!!!

geet following maan to make him have his lunch as puppy was really funny,

but it show their love nd concern for each other!!!!

well waiting to knw how their life will take a change with a new comer!!!!

It is a Mayday for me today. Hasini, in this rigid cold day you really made me urn for warmth around me. It was simply lucid yet classy the way a normal couple I would think would act. I would argue first and if not then coldness, it is. Of course, the 3 C's always comes around when you're completely, indulgently, love the soul that reside in you.

It's OK to get mad at him, but when you see he is hurt or disturb with the other cause then you would stand as shield to him.

I loved the comic.👍🏼